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One Piece System In One Piece · C106
2 days ago
23 pm here ;-; to read the next chapter only when i wake up tomorrow :3 ...thx for the chapter :3 View More
One Piece: Death Scythe · C93
2 days ago

NobleKei: Okay, I have to tell u something. You need to Improve your Writing. Although it isnt unreadable like machine translation, its still not good enough. Although I am not a Writer, I am an Avid Reader. So, Here are some Tips:

1) Try to break down all the Big Paragraphs into smaller ones. No paragraph should be Longer than 5~6 lines. Big Blocks of Text are harder to read. (Although you can make some of them as big as 10~12 lines, Try not to make Huge Blocks of Text)

2) Try to use a 'Comma' (this thing -> , ) in between long sentences. This Thing Helps a LOT and your Writing will go up a Level if u use this. For example, Before you say 'as...' ( Example: "He went out to eat food, as he was very Hungry.") You can also use it in different places/sentences to make reading more easier. Also, Try not to use it more than 2 or 3 times in a Paragraph (since a paragraph should be around 4~6 lines)

3) And Lastly, Try to use something other than "As" (Example: "As he was......."). Try to use other types of words in between sentences, like: Because, For, Since, etc. (Example: "He didnt reply because he knew these were things he shouldn't know" OR "He did not reply, since he knew that he was not supposed to know these things" INSTEAD OF "He didnt reply, as he knew these were things he wasnt supposed to know")

If you Really have read all of that and really apply this to your Writing, then i will be very thankful.
I'm not trying to be a Critic or anything, just trying help improve the novel's quality.
Also, dont think im a Smartass or anything, I also how i learned to speak/write english because of other's help. English Is not My first Language either.

Thanks for the Chapters~

Reborn as Naruto's Twin Brother · C10
3 days ago

NobleKei: Okay, I have to tell u something. You need to Improve your Writing. Although it isnt unreadable like machine translation, its still not good enough. Although I am not a Writer, I am an Avid Reader. So, Here are some Tips:

1) Try to break down all the Big Paragraphs into smaller ones. No paragraph should be Longer than 5~6 lines. Big Blocks of Text are harder to read. (Although you can make some of them as big as 10~12 lines, Try not to make Huge Blocks of Text)

2) Try to use a 'Comma' (this thing -> , ) in between long sentences. This Thing Helps a LOT and your Writing will go up a Level if u use this. For example, Before you say 'as...' ( Example: "He went out to eat food, as he was very Hungry.") You can also use it in different places/sentences to make reading more easier. Also, Try not to use it more than 2 or 3 times in a Paragraph (since a paragraph should be around 4~6 lines)

3) And Lastly, Try to use something other than "As" (Example: "As he was......."). Try to use other types of words in between sentences, like: Because, For, Since, etc. (Example: "He didnt reply because he knew these were things he shouldn't know" OR "He did not reply, since he knew that he was not supposed to know these things" INSTEAD OF "He didnt reply, as he knew these were things he wasnt supposed to know")

If you Really have read all of that and really apply this to your Writing, then i will be very thankful.
I'm not trying to be a Critic or anything, just trying help improve the novel's quality.
Also, dont think im a Smartass or anything, I also how i learned to speak/write english because of other's help. English Is not My first Language either.

Thanks for the Chapters~

Reborn as Naruto's Twin Brother · C10
3 days ago

UNTAMED: such a loser mc

History’s Strongest Stepping Stone · C12
4 days ago
Reading Status: C101
Dropped. ............................... .......................... ........ ........................................ ....................... ...................................... ................ View More
Ancient Cultivator in Modern World
6 days ago
Nope kkkkkk View More

TheAdventurer: I'll definitely update this soon, my brother. But I'm focusing on the two novels now, rest assured that I'll come back and update this

Ancient Cultivator in Modern World · C101
6 days ago
+1 kkkkk View More

chimel93: Good luck sad wanderer :) hope you're a happy wanderer once your done with your test

The Avarice System · C34
1 week ago
10 million or one million ? .-. View More
In Cultivation realm with anime system · C18
1 week ago
Anemic garp e.e View More

Dextroller3x: He should be Yonko or Garp lvl no???

One Piece: Death Scythe · C42
2 weeks ago
Ok...i will go to the site:v View More

Don_Dokhmesy: Sorry about the app version, it doesn't get fixed.

Dragonborn Saga · C368
2 weeks ago
Jhom recognized the vampire as Orthjolt a senior vampire in Harkon's court
"Punish me, who the f....... " the chapter stop here in the app ;-; View More
Dragonborn Saga · C368
2 weeks ago
I cant read this ;-; View More
Dragonborn Saga · C368
2 weeks ago
See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon View More
Realm of Myths and Legends · C1
3 weeks ago
See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon View More
Realm of Myths and Legends · C1
3 weeks ago
See this! I just gifted the story: Lollipop View More
Number One Dungeon Supplier · C1
3 weeks ago
Aeeee :3 View More

Setdinner321: Noted, next time before I post a chapter I will first re-read it then check for any errors. thanks for the review

One Piece: Death Scythe · C7
3 weeks ago
Kkkkkkkk View More

AstralJuggernaught: Psst, hey buddy, yeah, you there! Wanna buy some plutonium?
Because of course big energy companies buy radioactives from any random joe .

A Titleless Story · C3
1 month ago
Moar :3 View More
Eternal Heaven: Lucky Cultivator in Disboard · C100
1 month ago
I already forgot about the realms of cultivation ;-; View More
Eternal Heaven: Lucky Cultivator in Disboard · C0
1 month ago

Dark0_0King: *sigh, I can only say is pathetic. Just from reading this I know at least 25% of the story, its starting to get common. Mc gets reincarnated in dxd, train hard, interact with a devil, have relationship with the devil faction. I don't know if the mc is dense or arrogant just because he knows the plot in the story. He should remember he is going to interact with devils which is also manipulative, arrogant, giant poles one their a**. It would be best for me, to create your faction the throne of heroes which consists some descendants of heroes or you summon some heroes. Really, its like you are giving the devil advantage where they make a deal and you think about it then you agree and back to the plot. I am also guessing you met the trash (issei) you train him, you became weak because of attachment and only become strong because of the power of friendship/ or you just reveal your true strength when someone precious injured or die because if the mc ignorance.

Reborn in DxD world with a Fate System · C6
1 month ago

Dark0_0King: *sigh, I can only say is pathetic. Just from reading this I know at least 25% of the story, its starting to get common. Mc gets reincarnated in dxd, train hard, interact with a devil, have relationship with the devil faction. I don't know if the mc is dense or arrogant just because he knows the plot in the story. He should remember he is going to interact with devils which is also manipulative, arrogant, giant poles one their a**. It would be best for me, to create your faction the throne of heroes which consists some descendants of heroes or you summon some heroes. Really, its like you are giving the devil advantage where they make a deal and you think about it then you agree and back to the plot. I am also guessing you met the trash (issei) you train him, you became weak because of attachment and only become strong because of the power of friendship/ or you just reveal your true strength when someone precious injured or die because if the mc ignorance.

Reborn in DxD world with a Fate System · C6
1 month ago
Aff View More
Battle Frenzy · C175
1 month ago
+1...but my pitchfork want's to visit the author home for a friendly chat if he don't post chapters tomorrow :3 View More

laluz18: *puts pitchfork down* ahem, it's good speaking with a smart person

Reincarnated in Marvel with The Strength Force · C0
1 month ago

laluz18: *puts pitchfork down* ahem, it's good speaking with a smart person

Reincarnated in Marvel with The Strength Force · C0
1 month ago

Electez: What pitchforks and torches! We are all civilized people we use assault rifles and grenades!

Reincarnated in Marvel with The Strength Force · C0
1 month ago

Ace1096: Rally the common folk and raise the pitchforks and torches and wait outside his house until you see new chapters from him if not bring him to the town square to receive his punishment

Reincarnated in Marvel with The Strength Force · C0
1 month ago

Heavenfallhellrise: So I have to put out my torch? Damn it I never get to use this!!!

Reincarnated in Marvel with The Strength Force · C0
1 month ago
Thx for the chapter :3 View More
I'm just an 'Ordinary' Human (Marvel fanfic) · C40
2 months ago
Magic e.e View More

PG87Mertens: Alright, let's get this started. How will Finn forever change the MCU? How will his first interaction with the Avengers go? Find out next in dragon ba--- wait, wrong anime. (Guys, a quick question: can you see the author's note below? I can't. Even though I put it in inkstone. It's not being displayed.)

I'm just an 'Ordinary' Human (Marvel fanfic) · C40
2 months ago
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