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didn't like it. ............................................................................................................................

this story isn't good. YOU SHOULDN'T READ THIS NOVEL. first problem:the translation quality. the translation quality is exceptionally bad. I honestly didn't read something translated like this since almost 10years (grammar errors, repetitive sentences, unclear paragraphs and more) second: the story is not original. you might be thinking at the start of the story "wow so original, he was forgotten by god" or other stuff however this idea has existed long before in other critically acclaimed novels. Specifically "everyone else is a returnee". If I were to be honest about my feeling I would say that this is a mediocre copy of the previously mentioned novel with both poor translation and poor imagination form the author. third: the saving grace? As mentioned in the title of this section, I still think that there's a saving grace in this novel. what is it, you might ask. well here it is : the unfinished state of the "game" this, for me at least, was a saving grace because even if the mc defeated a powerful enemy or solved a difficult puzzle he could get absolutely nothing. furthermore the interaction between the mc fighting in a world very real and the unfinished state of other stuff was most of the time enjoyable. CONCLUSION: Should you read this story? No. Is this story absolutely trash? No, even tho it's bad, unoriginal, badly translated, it can still be enjoyable. I read this story and really enjoyed it who do you think you are to say something like that? Exactly I am nobody except for myself. Certainly not you, this review is ultimately only my point of view on this story. I would still recommend to check out "everyone else is a returnee" if you liked this novel.

this is a system based novel, it should be mentioned in the summary/description of the novel. I don't like system based novel and tried this one to try to re-connect with this type. I didn't like it. for the author : why do you use a system? it's unoriginal and there's a HECK TON on this site... I think that system based novel are just for ease of the author and as an author it should always be your objective to write the best story, not the easiest to write. that's ultimately only my personal opinion and I totally understand if someone disagree, I also didn't put a too bad of a score cause honestly I'm biased against system novels.