Davis111

1yr

Commented

Pus spurted out the zombie’s brain onto Chu Han’s face, and a few scraps of decaying flesh flew into his mouth. Two eyeballs popped out of the zombie’s sockets and rolled on the ground.

Davis111

1yr

Posted

Is this book ever going to get picked back up? This is my favorite apocalypse novel on WN and it's sad to see it sitting here at just under 300 chapters for so long...

Davis111

1yr

Commented

wasting my stones on this?

[When your disciple breaks through to the Divine Emperor Tenth Stage, you will gain 100,000 Karma Points.]

Reincarnated As The Strongest Ancestor With a System

Eastern · Dark_Crow1111

Davis111

1yr

Commented

He's a Chinese novel MC = old businessman who only worries about getting more out of it than he puts in. Won't save a kid from a burning house but will save a kid from a burning mansion.

After memorizing the appearances of those two important people, Wang Ye filtered through the information in his mind and rested.

Davis111

1yr

Commented

....nonsense, how can you get a 'thank you' without saving someone else.

Searching for things and people in secret realms seemed like a thankless task that would be purely training.

Davis111

1yr

Posted

Average to decent. A good time waster. The overall plot is good, the story is good, the world background is good. There is not a lot of info dumps, but when they occur it is short. This novel suffers tremendously from typical CH peanut gallery commentary. Expect anywhere from 1/4 to 1/2 of a chapter with action to be made up of "noise" from the peanut gallery. If the author cut this down to a few lines and filled the rest of their word count with character development between the MC and him companions it would drastically increase the value of the novel. Now the MC is not very well fleshed out, the author has "alluded" to him having thoughts and a personality. However without his unspoken thoughts, the mc at ch 70 is just a mindless guy rushing to get all the benefits his future knowledge will allow. At this point this is just a moderately more interesting novel on this site. Hopefully the author can "breathe life" into the character interaction and the personality of the MC so the novel will not flop.

Net Game: All My Pet Beasts Are Goddesses

Games · Whiteday

Davis111

1yr

Replied to Donny_Thomas

...no you don't.

Covering her vaginal opening with his mouth, he started sucking hard.

Reincarnated As The Strongest Ancestor With a System

Eastern · Dark_Crow1111

Davis111

1yr

Posted

This needs a professional editor. The author will write a sentence where the 2nd half of the sentence totally contradicts the first. Many times I had to imitate Sherlock Holmes just to understand what the author was trying to get across.The reincarnation of the MC is filler, we get one sentence that alludes to it in the first ten chapters. There are a lot of abrupt scene changes and numerous times the author could have expounded on things that were interesting, but didn't. The premise and the character's thoughts/personality are especially appealing to me, pity that there is so much wrong with the novel.

I Keep Witches While Others Keep Dragons

Fantasy · Xuanting_Official

Davis111

1yr

Commented

Author needs a professional team of editors. This could have been a good novel...

Kaleb and Taylor!

I Keep Witches While Others Keep Dragons

Fantasy · Xuanting_Official

Davis111

2yr

Commented

...just say it, or compare the process...

( here I would use binary numbers as transferring inherent memory to their successor )

The Invincible Corruption Manual

Eastern · The_handsome_fatty

Davis111

2yr

Posted

This needs an editor. There are so many grammatical mistakes I couldn't continue reading. ................ Maybe it gets better later, but till ch 10 its unbearable.

After reincarnating, I became a second generation villain

Eastern · abinn

Davis111

2yr

Commented

10 chapter fight with 4 wolves. So many chapters man... Hope this story doesn't have too many fights after this.

Suddenly Vincent fell on the floor, losing consciousness after such a brutal night.

Davis111

2yr

Commented

Plot armor time....

[Forced auto accept]

Davis111

2yr

Commented

out of character much?

"YOU, YOU INSIGNIFICANT, ABSOLUTE TRASH! HOW DARE YOU PIECE OF SHIT LAY YOUR FILTHY HANDS ON ME! I'LL KILL EVERY SINGLE ONE OF YOU!"

Davis111

2yr

Commented

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

ch 242 World famous

Davis111

2yr

Commented

This should be "why do I have to pay your debts instead?" Who is the lord of the city again?

"Grandpa, why don't you pay my debts in my stead."

Reincarnated With The Strongest System

Fantasy · Elyon

Davis111

2yr

Commented

it is stupid af that he treats a goat as his mother.

"How touching," Celine replied. "This is the first time I've seen a human… no, a Half-Elf calls a goat his mother. As for your request? Sorry, I have no intention of freeing the two of you. As your Master, it is necessary for me to educate you properly. Oliver, I'll leave Little Will's basic training to you."