Badges 13
Moments 33
1yr
Commented Robert's rebellion
ch 0 4 Question
A New Player (Game of Thrones)
Book&Literature · YooJiSeon
1yr
Commented vanishing cabinet to hogwarts.
time turner to save Hermione
ch 0 9 Chapter 9 Old Wands
In the Harry Potter Without Harry Potter
Book&Literature · Crazy_DarkSide_Cat
1yr
Commented thor
1yr
Commented needs 1 more go over from the editor
ch 0 4 A Warrior, A Knight and A Thief
Dragonborn Saga
Video Games · El_Don
1yr
Commented you should have made him older like 12,
'To think my meridians enlarged enough to take me to four star Intermediate Knight'
Rise Of The Infinite Sovereign
Fantasy · VOID_
1yr
Commented besides that, good story so far...
Sir Fredrick answered with his tone like cowboys who would hit a horse and go "Yee-hah" riding into the sunset.
Rise Of The Infinite Sovereign
Fantasy · VOID_
1yr
Commented these side comments, while amusing, cause the reader to fall out of the immersion of the story, because Ezra was never from earth, how would he know what a cowboy was or in previous chapter you brought up cell phones
Sir Fredrick answered with his tone like cowboys who would hit a horse and go "Yee-hah" riding into the sunset.
Rise Of The Infinite Sovereign
Fantasy · VOID_
1yr
Commented please more chapters like thisssss.......[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
(Oops. Might have made this one a lil bit long.)
Star Wars VRMMO
Games · N3wman
Justynchinn
ch 0 7 Two years of study
Alexandros Peverell-Slytherin
Book&Literature · FanFictionForge