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MyNameBee

male LV 15

I'm a person who exsists

2018-01-03 Joined United States

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how long till she gets the slave bracelet off

Since Solus kept sleeping, Lith used that time to call Wanemyre and Marth to make up for his blunder. They were happy to hear from him and wished him a good winter break.

Supreme Magus

Supreme Magus

Fantasy · Legion20

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yet it took 3 chapters to go from a normal personality to a 12 year olds oc

"You deserve death, but that would be a waste. You'll be way more useful alive." The masked man continued as he advanced further.

An Extra’s POV

An Extra’s POV

Fantasy · Magecrafter

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alright I officially have to drop this, I tired so hard to get through to see if it actually got better. another 'grey' Gary sue story that can't kill a person

"You deserve death, but that would be a waste. You'll be way more useful alive." The masked man continued as he advanced further.

An Extra’s POV

An Extra’s POV

Fantasy · Magecrafter

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better, having 2 thoughts in a single instance of dialog works when it's broken up like this

"Haa~ I just hope that it won't kill me…" After saying this, he changed the topic. "Is there still no delivery of corpses for Mr. Heinz?" Kyle asked since the delivery of corpses rarely happens and he had already instructed Denise to inform him if there was any news.

Arcane Academy: The Divine Extraction Legacy

Arcane Academy: The Divine Extraction Legacy

Fantasy · xlntz

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what is with this? you're having a character say something, then say something again as if they are responding to something someone else said

"I only made three strands. Alright, teach me how to make the magic zone." Kyle calmly replied as he observed the young girl in front of him.

Arcane Academy: The Divine Extraction Legacy

Arcane Academy: The Divine Extraction Legacy

Fantasy · xlntz

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why am I crying in the club right now

"RAISE HER UP MY SISTERS! RAISE HER HIGH AND WE WILL BRING HER HOME TO HER FINAL REST! HER ARMOUR SHALL BE OUR TREASURE AND WE SHALL NEVER FORGET THE FINAL CHARGE OF CARDIGANT! SHE SEEKS NO MORE!"

Chrysalis

Chrysalis

Fantasy · RinoZ

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if each strata is 100km thick. which we so far they are less than that, and that planet is 10km across, there could be as many as 50

The other consideration, is that the best place in the Dungeon to establish a powerbase to launch expeditions deeper is the fourth. The closer you can establish your safe zone to the fifth, the more likely you are to be able to push through and reach the sixth. For this reason, many consider the fifth stratum, the 'world of decay' to be the great dividing line of the Dungeon, even a halfway marker, of sorts. Of course, it is unknown, at least to this scholar, how many strata there are to the Dungeon, so this is more of an unofficial title than an accurate descriptor, but the sentiment remains a powerful one.

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Chrysalis

Fantasy · RinoZ

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