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Danomilk39k: Have been seriously waiting for a comic lick this, so sobs when reading it because of my love for it, interesting realistically grafted for lovers of comic and fairytale, in love with you writer please keep it up

Beauty and the Beast: Wolf Hubby XOXO
4 months ago
This review is so good I took the time to reread it months after I originally read it and left a second comment. Fucking hilarious.
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Sinfish: Remarkably bad on almost all fronts. The translation is rapid, but incredibly poor in quality - sentences often mean the opposite of what they actually say. The plot armor is thicker than a nuclear shelter.

MC gets transported to another world, but it's one of those transfer MCs where you question why they even bothered since none of his thoughts are ideas are from Earth except when he thinks to himself "this system is like the card game I used to play" except for that one time he thought to himself, "Oh, just like the webnovels I read on Qidian". MC gets a gacha card "system" with pretty absurdly strong powers, which is fine. MC proceeds to use it very poorly, which is less fine.

World in general is what I call "low-intelligence worlds", where a moron from Earth is a genius in this world. MC hailed as a genius for having mediocre ideas. Note that this is despite the world being seemingly at least equal to Earth in technology along with a large variety of "system" magic and magic tools.

And it gets worse. Characters are needlessly wasteful of resources and lives. Characters are randomly cruel or self-centered in ways that normally don't survive 8th grade, and this includes the MC. Character personalities are completely inconsistent, and so far his life and powerups are a series of random encounters that has essentially no input by the character or supporting characters having any persistent, reasonable motivation. The world and its people seemingly only exist for the MC to do his thing, but the MC doesn't have a thing to do. He sort of had an immediate motivation in that his life bar was set at ~60 days at the start, but that got solved partially without him trying because it turns out his system gives him like a year of life just for killing one bottom-tier monster and then it gets solved completely without him trying because of a random encounter was like "hey thanks for doing this thing that you did with no effort, btw, I am actually a god and I fixed your supposedly unsolvable problem without you asking me to"

But worst of all is the nonsensical things that happen. I would call it a plot, but that's an insult to actual plots

Example:

MC's temporary boss/high ranker/harem candidate tells him not to let anyone leave town because it might be too dangerous. Random low-tier noob says she wants to leave anyway. MC pulls out a gun and point it at her head and tells her he'll kill her if she leaves. He could have just said, "hey, the gold-ranker says you can't leave because there are monsters roaming outside" but naw, straight to gun-in-face. Keep in mind this isn't some grimdark fantasy, this is a hyper-modern world where there's supposed to be rule of law. Our MC is a psychopath, but it gets worse.

Random bozo tries to stick up for the girl and say the MC is being unreasonable, MC literally thinks random bozo is just doing this for a pretty face and is proud that he isn't swayed by pretty faces. Author makes it clear he's also proud his MC isn't, the chapter title is literally titled "What's Being Kind to Women?".

Suddenly, for no reason at all, random mid-boss antagonist who has been harassing MC (and other people) jumps in to start a fight against MC, not because of the girl but because he wants to pick on MC. They look like they're going to get in a fight. Mid-boss is definitely stronger than him, he literally beat MC like yesterday and let him go because "you're so weak you're not worth killing even though I'm here to kill weak people because I'm weird."

MC doesn't back down, because I don't know, being a dumbass threatening some random girl with shooting her in the face so she doesn't endanger herself is more important than his own life, which is all so stupid I can barely breathe. Fortunately, they're suddenly interrupted by random bullsh*t and everybody forgets what they were doing. In the ensuing few days MC exerts his dominance by beating up sh*t-tier background characters with no names and doesn't let anyone leave.

Somehow, this makes people trusting and admiring of him, which is important because he's about to lead a squad into battle because his boss/harem candidate thought all that previous bullsh*t was genius work by him. A couple of chapters later he declares he's going to stay and defend the town from monsters despite being having a power rating of effectively zero when there are literally a thousand other super-powered high level humans running around. Literally tens of thousands of years of combat experience between all of them, and somehow MC is piping up with his sh*t-tier ideas and people are calling it genius. It also feels super weird because our MC has been relatively focused on himself and his sister so far, and this is the first hint that he gives a sh*t about anybody else, yet he's suddenly burning with self-sacrificial desire.

Not long after, it turns out this was a tremendously stupid idea (which literally other more experienced people than him told him at least three times) and he's going to die, 100%, no take-backsies. Just then he gets a system notification: Would you like to get your get-out-of-jail-free card I didn't tell you about and you didn't know you had? He's like: "sure". And then the magic wish automatically determines how to get him out of the situation with no input from him, and kills millions of monsters with a nuke that only hits bad guys and instakills everyone but the boss, and saves the day. No, I'm not joking or exaggerating in the least.

But wait, it didn't kill the boss. Boss appears and says, haha, you humans are so dumb, Superman-Goku Macguffin the 3rd isn't coming to save you, Superman is a dumbo and is fighting my sekret clone. By the way, I'm going to kill all of you, especially you MC. Suddenly, harem candidate goes, "Wait boss monster, can you please give me 3 minutes to confess my love for MC? Pleaaase? Pretty pleeaaase?" Boss monster goes: "Okay, sounds fine with me, but don't doublecross me or I'm gonna like, kill you. Uh, I guess I'm gonna kill you anyway but I'll like really super duper kill you or something", and he goes to sit in the corner and jacks off for awhile.

Harem-candidates grabs MC, and then is like, "omgersh boss monster, you so dumb!" and then she pushes through MC through a portal while boss monster is distracted. Staring at the portal he goes, "How dare you lie to me!" "Curse you humans and your predictable yet inevitable betrayal!" "It's a good thing you were too dumb to take your own portal, now I'm going to kill you even harder!"

But then she goes "Wait, let me give a dying speech. Okay, still giving a dying speech. man, why am I not dead yet? Guess I'll speech some more. Also, it's sort of weird that I pushed MC through the portal and stayed behind but he's still here but oh well, if the author's not paying attention why should I? MC even though I met you like last week and we've literally never had a conversation, you are the most amazing man ever and I love you."

Boss monster: "That's great, I'm gonna kill you now."

POW! Suddenly the goddess our delightful MC met last week in yet another random encounter roll after feeding a squirrel who turned out to be a immortal god-beast who was the pet of the goddess back in the day so he was like, how about I show you her corpse and then just because MC is MC the goddess came back to life from him getting a plot boner or something and was like "Oh hey MC, we're soulmates and I love you. Please ignore my irrelevant background story which makes it seem like I should vengefully kill all humans." Anyway. Goddess shows up and her pet squirrel smacks boss monster to death with a single slap. Literal Deus ex Machina. BTW MC, since we killed a immortal super boss monster, why don't you take its soul, you can raise it as a soul pet and get super powers you didn't work for, again.

MC: "Oh yeah, goddess, can you help save this harem candidate who I met last week?" "long as you're here doing miracles, y'know?"

Goddess: "No, that is impossible... unless I had a boss monster soul or something like that, but those are pretty rare and it's not like we just have those lying around." "Oh whoa, it turns out there's a boss monster soul I just gave you. But are you sure you want to give it up? You worked so hard for it. Oh wait, no you didn't I just showed up and gave it to you."

MC: "uh, sure, yeah, whatever G-dog"

Goddess: "haha, just playing, I don't need the monster soul after all. It'd be too much of a pain in the ass to write another monster in...I mean, I don't need one because I got others. Despite me being dead for the last thousand years or whatever" "Bippity-boppity-boo! This girl is alive! But hey we're still gonna get it on at some unspecified later date when you're a god through remarkable happenstance, right?" "also, the girl is super mega powerful now cuz I put a god-beast in her. The soul I gave her was like a super rare Phoenix soul I just had lying around."

MC: "Yay!"

And that's when I stopped reading.

Monster Paradise
7 months ago

peter3135566: Next part should be released soon right? Cant wait! Your story is simply awsome!

A Hand-Woven Universe · C0
7 months ago
Fired muh LAZER!!! The End. Good story bro. Like seriously though; goddamn troll author! RIP Fang Yuan lmao View More
Reverend Insanity · C971
7 months ago
Nice work author!
I like the D&D atmosphere and how the characters behave and believe themselves to be real while adding to the plot; rather then a stepping stone designed only to enrich the MC.
A lot of authors don't understand the essence of how subtle, intense, random and brief a real world encounter can be all at the same time; let alone a fantasy interaction. But you seem to be doing it well; keep up the great work.
Looking forward to the rest of the books! Bahahah! View More
A Hand-Woven Universe · C0
7 months ago
Bahahah! What!? He actually molested a beauty! Author is great at making the degeneracy natural. xD
When I read this chapter I died. Even re-enacted the moment several times and died each time x.x View More
Castle of Black Iron · C29
8 months ago

Blanket: Its beautiful. They will die for him. And they will live for him.
I would to. Its a captivating tale with real characters. Takes the readers breath away, drowns them in tears and then leaves the their blood burning with righteous fury and indignation.

tl;dr I want more.
lol when putting tldr at the end (:

Kingdom's Bloodline · C463
9 months ago
Its beautiful. They will die for him. And they will live for him.
I would to. Its a captivating tale with real characters. Takes the readers breath away, drowns them in tears and then leaves the their blood burning with righteous fury and indignation.

tl;dr I want more.
lol when putting tldr at the end (: View More
Kingdom's Bloodline · C463
9 months ago
I am running out of things to read. Masterless Sword SOS! View More
Kingdom's Bloodline · C457
9 months ago
Forget about the naming. Your page number is confusing me bro. Also Noon-ah needs to kill some mofos. View More
A Hand-Woven Universe · C0
10 months ago
smh if you thought Stake was still the biggest threat even after Zakriel wiped the blood whistle crew and impaled that bunch of boy band punks into the wall lmao
Mystics should avoid anti-mystic weapons xD
Also Yodel is the greatest; probably the true protaganist atleast he was before Wu got a ride over xD View More
Kingdom's Bloodline · C435
10 months ago
Still trying to compartmentalize the fact Moriah is Quick Rope o.o mercy, Author, be gentle with me xS View More
Kingdom's Bloodline · C433
10 months ago
I still read it as No One... occaisonally Nooneh lol View More
A Hand-Woven Universe · C0
11 months ago
I laughed. Goodgame bro (: View More

Sinfish: Remarkably bad on almost all fronts. The translation is rapid, but incredibly poor in quality - sentences often mean the opposite of what they actually say. The plot armor is thicker than a nuclear shelter.

MC gets transported to another world, but it's one of those transfer MCs where you question why they even bothered since none of his thoughts are ideas are from Earth except when he thinks to himself "this system is like the card game I used to play" except for that one time he thought to himself, "Oh, just like the webnovels I read on Qidian". MC gets a gacha card "system" with pretty absurdly strong powers, which is fine. MC proceeds to use it very poorly, which is less fine.

World in general is what I call "low-intelligence worlds", where a moron from Earth is a genius in this world. MC hailed as a genius for having mediocre ideas. Note that this is despite the world being seemingly at least equal to Earth in technology along with a large variety of "system" magic and magic tools.

And it gets worse. Characters are needlessly wasteful of resources and lives. Characters are randomly cruel or self-centered in ways that normally don't survive 8th grade, and this includes the MC. Character personalities are completely inconsistent, and so far his life and powerups are a series of random encounters that has essentially no input by the character or supporting characters having any persistent, reasonable motivation. The world and its people seemingly only exist for the MC to do his thing, but the MC doesn't have a thing to do. He sort of had an immediate motivation in that his life bar was set at ~60 days at the start, but that got solved partially without him trying because it turns out his system gives him like a year of life just for killing one bottom-tier monster and then it gets solved completely without him trying because of a random encounter was like "hey thanks for doing this thing that you did with no effort, btw, I am actually a god and I fixed your supposedly unsolvable problem without you asking me to"

But worst of all is the nonsensical things that happen. I would call it a plot, but that's an insult to actual plots

Example:

MC's temporary boss/high ranker/harem candidate tells him not to let anyone leave town because it might be too dangerous. Random low-tier noob says she wants to leave anyway. MC pulls out a gun and point it at her head and tells her he'll kill her if she leaves. He could have just said, "hey, the gold-ranker says you can't leave because there are monsters roaming outside" but naw, straight to gun-in-face. Keep in mind this isn't some grimdark fantasy, this is a hyper-modern world where there's supposed to be rule of law. Our MC is a psychopath, but it gets worse.

Random bozo tries to stick up for the girl and say the MC is being unreasonable, MC literally thinks random bozo is just doing this for a pretty face and is proud that he isn't swayed by pretty faces. Author makes it clear he's also proud his MC isn't, the chapter title is literally titled "What's Being Kind to Women?".

Suddenly, for no reason at all, random mid-boss antagonist who has been harassing MC (and other people) jumps in to start a fight against MC, not because of the girl but because he wants to pick on MC. They look like they're going to get in a fight. Mid-boss is definitely stronger than him, he literally beat MC like yesterday and let him go because "you're so weak you're not worth killing even though I'm here to kill weak people because I'm weird."

MC doesn't back down, because I don't know, being a dumbass threatening some random girl with shooting her in the face so she doesn't endanger herself is more important than his own life, which is all so stupid I can barely breathe. Fortunately, they're suddenly interrupted by random bullsh*t and everybody forgets what they were doing. In the ensuing few days MC exerts his dominance by beating up sh*t-tier background characters with no names and doesn't let anyone leave.

Somehow, this makes people trusting and admiring of him, which is important because he's about to lead a squad into battle because his boss/harem candidate thought all that previous bullsh*t was genius work by him. A couple of chapters later he declares he's going to stay and defend the town from monsters despite being having a power rating of effectively zero when there are literally a thousand other super-powered high level humans running around. Literally tens of thousands of years of combat experience between all of them, and somehow MC is piping up with his sh*t-tier ideas and people are calling it genius. It also feels super weird because our MC has been relatively focused on himself and his sister so far, and this is the first hint that he gives a sh*t about anybody else, yet he's suddenly burning with self-sacrificial desire.

Not long after, it turns out this was a tremendously stupid idea (which literally other more experienced people than him told him at least three times) and he's going to die, 100%, no take-backsies. Just then he gets a system notification: Would you like to get your get-out-of-jail-free card I didn't tell you about and you didn't know you had? He's like: "sure". And then the magic wish automatically determines how to get him out of the situation with no input from him, and kills millions of monsters with a nuke that only hits bad guys and instakills everyone but the boss, and saves the day. No, I'm not joking or exaggerating in the least.

But wait, it didn't kill the boss. Boss appears and says, haha, you humans are so dumb, Superman-Goku Macguffin the 3rd isn't coming to save you, Superman is a dumbo and is fighting my sekret clone. By the way, I'm going to kill all of you, especially you MC. Suddenly, harem candidate goes, "Wait boss monster, can you please give me 3 minutes to confess my love for MC? Pleaaase? Pretty pleeaaase?" Boss monster goes: "Okay, sounds fine with me, but don't doublecross me or I'm gonna like, kill you. Uh, I guess I'm gonna kill you anyway but I'll like really super duper kill you or something", and he goes to sit in the corner and jacks off for awhile.

Harem-candidates grabs MC, and then is like, "omgersh boss monster, you so dumb!" and then she pushes through MC through a portal while boss monster is distracted. Staring at the portal he goes, "How dare you lie to me!" "Curse you humans and your predictable yet inevitable betrayal!" "It's a good thing you were too dumb to take your own portal, now I'm going to kill you even harder!"

But then she goes "Wait, let me give a dying speech. Okay, still giving a dying speech. man, why am I not dead yet? Guess I'll speech some more. Also, it's sort of weird that I pushed MC through the portal and stayed behind but he's still here but oh well, if the author's not paying attention why should I? MC even though I met you like last week and we've literally never had a conversation, you are the most amazing man ever and I love you."

Boss monster: "That's great, I'm gonna kill you now."

POW! Suddenly the goddess our delightful MC met last week in yet another random encounter roll after feeding a squirrel who turned out to be a immortal god-beast who was the pet of the goddess back in the day so he was like, how about I show you her corpse and then just because MC is MC the goddess came back to life from him getting a plot boner or something and was like "Oh hey MC, we're soulmates and I love you. Please ignore my irrelevant background story which makes it seem like I should vengefully kill all humans." Anyway. Goddess shows up and her pet squirrel smacks boss monster to death with a single slap. Literal Deus ex Machina. BTW MC, since we killed a immortal super boss monster, why don't you take its soul, you can raise it as a soul pet and get super powers you didn't work for, again.

MC: "Oh yeah, goddess, can you help save this harem candidate who I met last week?" "long as you're here doing miracles, y'know?"

Goddess: "No, that is impossible... unless I had a boss monster soul or something like that, but those are pretty rare and it's not like we just have those lying around." "Oh whoa, it turns out there's a boss monster soul I just gave you. But are you sure you want to give it up? You worked so hard for it. Oh wait, no you didn't I just showed up and gave it to you."

MC: "uh, sure, yeah, whatever G-dog"

Goddess: "haha, just playing, I don't need the monster soul after all. It'd be too much of a pain in the ass to write another monster in...I mean, I don't need one because I got others. Despite me being dead for the last thousand years or whatever" "Bippity-boppity-boo! This girl is alive! But hey we're still gonna get it on at some unspecified later date when you're a god through remarkable happenstance, right?" "also, the girl is super mega powerful now cuz I put a god-beast in her. The soul I gave her was like a super rare Phoenix soul I just had lying around."

MC: "Yay!"

And that's when I stopped reading.

Monster Paradise
11 months ago
Reading Status: C1
Would recommend to a first time cultivation reader. Would not recommend to a avid action adventure reader.
Has a good start, some interesting cultivation methods and realistic love interests(at first); the pace pulls you right in. Took me over a 200ch to pull away and realize how lacking this novel is.
MC has all good points and no bad points(his negative aspects are written positively); not realistic or relatable he is more like a cardboard superhero. I can't remember him ever fighting an opponent stronger then him, he just doubles his power and stabs everything with nakama power then it dies.
The world building is pathetic; limited to the mc explaining some facts he found in books in two chs.
The storyline is the typical; cultivators vs demons vs beasts vs otherworlders. With typical sociopathic humans helping the enemies. Had a lot of potential but everyone is just a stepping stone for mc to kill with character building.
Not much happens and it is full of typical cliches; the dialogue makes me want to throw my phone its so dry. Again not realistic.
The MC saves the main love interest during a life and death mission and the author even takes time to mention how she isnt the weak minded type of girl that falls head over heels over hero types at that moment. Like 10chs later they are living together. An inconsistant story imo with paper personalities. View More
Lord Xue Ying
1 year ago
Reading Status: C63
Very good; will do a better review when the story gets further.
MC's character is blah tbh; the other characters make this story shine otherwise I would think its just so so. Author clearly has a knack for making random side characters feel human which is great; when they are actually involved in the storyline and Chens background hah
Wish it had more depth and perspective. Less ridiculous and realistic; y'know more tragedy, failure and worldbuilding. Almost a 100 chapters and all I know is the planets name.
Last bits just my opinion lol View More
Monarch of Heaven's Wrath
1 year ago
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Lord Xue Ying
1 year ago
Savage fantasy plot mate;
Everything feels.
Alive I am, now (: View More
Kingdom's Bloodline · C188
1 year ago

Ku0401: Some readers like the part of mystics, while others like the part of politics.

Kingdom's Bloodline · C188
1 year ago
The theory that everyone predicted but few expected to actually happen; happened. As expected as expected lmao. Now the deeper question everyone wants to know is little rascal a secret walton? View More
Kingdom's Bloodline · C159
1 year ago
lol some serious historical fantasy action adventure rebirth mystery romance comedy **** going on here right now View More
Kingdom's Bloodline · C158
1 year ago
three days... how long it took me to unlock this chapter ffs View More
Kingdom's Bloodline · C157
1 year ago
I thought everyone had that theory lol View More

Lebrew: I have this theory that Little Rascal might be the true granddaughter of Nuven, perhaps because of some strange education to make her humble, or because the Nuven family are prone to assassin related deaths, and Alex serves as a decoy. It is strange that Little Rascal is so involved, and her eyes were described to have colors related to the blood line of Eckstedt. Either way she is at least important, seeing as she has been present whenever Thales has met Alex.

Kingdom's Bloodline · C157
1 year ago

StupidMinotaur: 35 stone

Kingdom's Bloodline · C157
1 year ago
had me going bahahahah lmao as expected as expected(didnt expect it at all as expected xD) View More
Reverend Insanity · C589
1 year ago

PoorMan: Hmmmmm, I wonder if Hao Ji Liu is going to be killed off. Lets see:
- He is hardly mentioned in the novel (minor character)
- He charged forwards first (the first person [almost] always dies)
- He disappeared with a massive freaking death bear (I got nothing to say about this one)
Conclusion: This b*tch dead as f*ck

Reverend Insanity · C583
1 year ago

Thiskillsthedelf: First thought, aren't variant humans supposed to be comically nieve?
Second thought, does an inkgirls butthole have that pearlescent sheen real world inks have?

Reverend Insanity · C572
1 year ago

theteapotiscoming: Water Pavilion was like a little beauty that had its arms wide open and he was free to play with it.

Because Fang Yuan can even rape your house.

Reverend Insanity · C568
1 year ago
ye s'pose it makes sense if shes some type of shepherd goddess protecting the flock instead of a divine ocean spirit like I imagine. View More

broken_noodle: She's like a 'shepherdess' of the sea , something like this
https://c8.alamy.com/comp/DW1W68/little-bo-peep-who-lost-her-sheep-DW1W68.jpg
a god sailors and seafolks prayed to for guidance, protection and safe traveling (like how a shepherd taking care of their sheep)
At least that's what I thought.

Kingdom's Bloodline · C112
1 year ago
Totally. Master just isn't right to the ear.
And Maiden is w/e. Thought it was funny since oceans aren't usually symbolized as pure; lakes/ponds are. View More

Ku0401: I agree with you using Lord would be better. It's the same character when Chinese Christian translate "My Lord" from English to Chinese. And the second goddess literally was The Maiden Herding the Ocean. But I think 'Herd the Ocean' doesn't make sense in English?

Kingdom's Bloodline · C112
1 year ago
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