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HajimexYue: Wow she got off way too easy

The Sex Beast System (The World Of Systems) · C78
2 weeks ago

mack_wraight: Ruined the entire book. This could of been an amazing book too bad he had to go the rape root. alot of authors do this when they don't have enough imagination to make a MC mad then rape his friend. happens way too much and ruins alot of book. Sad.

Reaper of the Martial World · C24
3 weeks ago

Wodwiguez: 7 year old teammate < Bam

Devil Fruit Powers in The Tower of God · C59
1 month ago

torrelsav1: still cant believe she argued with lu
men over him

Devil Fruit Powers in The Tower of God · C59
1 month ago

Navizy: I think the relationship of Androssi with Bam is a little bit force, that's what I think.

Devil Fruit Powers in The Tower of God · C59
1 month ago

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Netori System
2 months ago

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Netori System
2 months ago
I definitely dont like current situation of mc but not that easy to get triggered. Just stay away from netorare and we will love you. A bit faster release please View More

Roeselawik: Lol, believe me, there is a high chance that of that happening

The Sex Beast System (The World Of Systems) · C67
2 months ago

Horusz: A fantastic novel, until today I had only read one novel set in the TOG universe, this is the second, and I have to say: It is (so far) one of the original novel's that I liked the most, honestly I feel the author evolving, The first's chapters the author was very stuck with the original work, so we see repetitions of dialogs that could be avoided, but now I feel that he "get away" from the original sequence, and that was great, the writing took a tremendous leap.

the MC is interesting, he's not a hero willing to sacrifice himself for other people, but he's not a bloodthirsty villain, he doesn't mind killing his enemies (which is very good), the powers are very interesting, and a Good point is that the author does not try to force other powers from the OP universe to the MC, is excellent as it is.

One of the big problems when writing an original novel from an existing universe is that the authors make MC as a viewer, changes in the plot are minimal and the existence of MC is null. Here I feel that MC is important, that he is the true protagonist, the other characters know of his existence, and he is linked to the universe of TOG.

The novel is going great, I had to do this review, don't drop this novel ... Never.

One more thing: The novel is yours, the idea has come from you, the popularity is rising because you proved capable, I'm reading a lot of reader comments asking for: "changes" "he has to make ..." "make him do it ... "" give him this power ... "" Make it a Harem ... ", you can do that if that was your original idea or if you honestly think it will be good for the novel, the novel will not improve if you do what the fans ask.

Keep up the wonderful work.

Devil Fruit Powers in The Tower of God
2 months ago
I dont like stupid things View More
The Sex Beast System (The World Of Systems) · C66
2 months ago

ZeroPrime: Mate you have a good talent for writing stories especially character interactions I advise you to plan the Three most important aspects Plot Progression,World Building,Character Development well other than that you already must have a pretty good idea of what you are about to write but consider other people's advice throughout the story but never stray from the path you originally decided I have seen many Great Stories get ruined due to fan service other than that Best of Luck for your writing journey!

The White Demon Fox · C33
2 months ago
Dude, you have great potential. I would like to see what you can accomplish. Go forward your career. View More
The White Demon Fox · C33
2 months ago
Those chapters need serious editing. Take your time. View More
illicit relationship · C0
2 months ago

IdHc: >.> I know you're joking, but it's really not that funny when you drag it on too long. It was funny the first two chapters, then it became stale. I suspend my belief when I read stories, but this was still too far lol. Maybe some jokes about it, then making him want to take a break from the sect because of the craziness would be good. All the gagging and vomit is too much. Trauma, sure, maybe his face could go pale or something less severe.

And I'm being lenient here because it's meant to be the silly kind of comedy. I don't know how old the dude was when he died in his past life, but based on the description of his power, he was at least hundreds or thousands of years old. My more critical side is saying that it's just completely stupid. He should be disgusted and weirded out by it but not traumatized. But again, I lessen my reaction because I know it's not intended to be too serious.

Basically my feeling towards it is kinda like watching a stand up comedian that made a joke that was sort of funny, but then kept on going with variations of the same joke for 30 more minutes instead of changing things up. We got it the first time, even the first 5 minutes maybe. After that...just stop...

Master Of Erossu Book · C53
2 months ago

JaineX07: Can we kill the old man?

Master Of Erossu Book · C42
2 months ago

Badr_Zh: Most of them are still used goods though.

Master Of Erossu Book · C41
2 months ago

Badr_Zh: the book is like a brothel and no matter how beautiful the girls in a brothel they are still prostitutes.

Master Of Erossu Book · C41
2 months ago

Badr_Zh: Do you have some kind of **** fetish or what? He can't keep going for the backdoor all the time.

Master Of Erossu Book · C21
2 months ago

MJAgo: What is this after all this time he's still going for second door of women???? When will he going for the real oneeeeeeeeeeeeee????

Master Of Erossu Book · C21
2 months ago

fearlessj2008: he should really stop being such a *****.

Master Of Erossu Book · C16
2 months ago

Kevinlu19721: Balls of steel I would say... every man wants that technique

Master Of Erossu Book · C6
2 months ago

Sun_Wukong: finally find, these are the real "Dragon Balls"

Master Of Erossu Book · C6
2 months ago

Otakubaku: Well peach steals monkey?

Master Of Erossu Book · C6
2 months ago

Pedro_Sousa: Considering how much they love him the harem should be done slowly. And Mc should start understand more about love instead of sex if he want to make his women happy.

illicit relationship · C72
2 months ago

FilledWithHope: Are you serious? A magical core is a common fan concept, it doesn't have any influence that I'm aware of from Asian novels.

Rise of House Falken - Harry Potter Fan Fiction · C3
2 months ago
You **** with me, i **** with you View More
The White Demon Fox · C24
3 months ago

manny0101: Honesty I'm starting to hate the sage of six paths. He completely ignored what Minato and Fugaku had done but was disappointed with his own son. What kind of father is he? I'd like to spray 'BitchBeGone' on his face. Moreover, Hashirama should be drowning in shame for what has become of his will of fire. But nooo, he just appears and says that wasn't very nice kyuubi. Though I can't say much about it. We'll see in the next chapter.

Keep it up author. Though you better show something good happening for the main characters because the vein on my head is getting bigger with the recent chapters. I fear it may burst, making me rant a whole **** storm in comments.

The White Demon Fox · C24
3 months ago

csd1: This is so confusing. It feels like his whole life is a lie. Why is there a rule not to go into her room? The way they act, it feels like they aren't even his family and he was being lied and manipulated by them. Nothing makes sense. At a moment the sister was all loyal to Mc then out of nowhere they beat him she randomly pops in and is being groped by the trash that beat him and barely shows any regret if any. I mean at the very least a good sister that cares for you would be in a distraught state not to mention she doesn't just care for him but is also in love with him. Then the Mc finds out she is dating one of them and apparently for a while and they just act like it's the most obvious thing in the world but apparently the MC even though lives with her never knew anything about it. Points aren't connecting. I like the idea of the story but the setting and character build still needs some work. The only thing I can think about to make this work is that someone has alot of power because of their system and has somehow manipulated his reality. The fairy did say something about he might be what the prophecies said and she clear know where the systems come from and about some war that will happen.

Netori System · C9
3 months ago

Pandapocalypse: You’ve just said the number one thing every whiney little keyboard warrior says. Almost as though you, yourself, are capable of making extremely perfect choices in all scenarios at all times, and believe MCs should be exactly the same. I hate to break it to you, but that is called HINDSIGHT my friend.
Do you know how hard it is for an author to be in the right mind set and write believable dialogue?
If authors wrote it how you and many others wanted, there would be complaints about their actions being too perfect and unrealistic.

Please, for everyone’s sake, read the book and enjoy it, or don’t. Heck, even throw in some CONSTRUCTIVE criticism(that is criticism which allows for actual improvement),but don’t be so critical you jeopardise our authors confidence in their abilities and risk further releases.

The Sex Beast System (The World Of Systems) · C56
3 months ago

zaino11: Hey!! You have absolutely no right to say that. Do you know what it takes to right a novel or even think of how each chapter would be like, their names or the caption for each chapter??? It's a lot of work!!! Please if you don't know then you have no right to say **** over here okay. Author I appreciate every piece of writing no matter how it is. It's not easy. Keep up the good work, you're doing awesome. ☺👍

The Sex Beast System (The World Of Systems) · C56
3 months ago
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