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ThrustThunder: What's that? You don't like the New Supreme Court Judge's ruling as you think it's unconstitutional or flagrantly unfair to the masses?
Well then you better go to Law School for 12 years, Study every Governmental Justice book in existence, Become a Lawyer and open your own successful Firm, Have hundreds of won cases and have your name immortalized on Harvard's front doors: And only then will you be qualified to post criticism in the comments section of a Chinese Novels website... 🙄🙄🙄
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And Nameno, keep it up, you're doing God's work with your awesome reviews.

Battle Through the Heavens
1 month ago

Ozwin: This seems more like kids planning a prank than mystical beings from a secret organization plotting someone’s punishment lol.

Lord of the Mysteries · C988
2 months ago
That's a good question. Brace for wall of text.

Less repetition, less things happening just to show that mc is the bestest, no to reality bending backwards to shower main character with new waifus and meaningless praise from mindless crowd.
Uselees villans whose only lot in life is to be a minor obstacle on the road to glory of our glorious Main Character. What are their motivations? Why no one ever spanked those idiotic young masters before? Do those doting sect masters just allow this living trash to stomp all over their reputation? They should give THANKS to the first person that breakes their nose.
Mc, as great as he is should not be centre of the universe. Other characters exist, have their own goals and priorites. That goes double for companions that too often fade in to the background after joining The Team. They might quit, might disagree with mc and leave, they might stay and question his decisions.
World shoud be logical, finite, and should keep working even without mc. Some monsters are attacking? Well then, where is the military?
Ancient evil awakens? Secret experts should be all over it. Maybe the can only contain it and mc got a secret for a more pernament solution thet he can not tell others? Not the stupid "chosen one". Chosen by whom, by the way.
But the most important thing... Mc should be likeable. We spend most time reading about him, spending time with him. When he honestly is a good person, trying to make things a bit better for the people around him.
Most cultivators are selfish creatures. They lie, steal and kill each other for every little piece of power they can get. Ignoring that they would die off like that within 50 years, they are not fun to be with. He does not have to be a saint, removing enemies is expected, but pointless cruelty? C'mon.

Some stories get by on a mindless power creep and op mc, and that is fine. What is not fine when the simple stories go on for 1000+ chapters with no end goal in sight till the author gets bored.

But then, this might just be me. View More

CreedOfUnity: I’m not speaking for him, just thinking he may have meant kindly. I know I’m really interested to know your ideals. Not questioning lol but what should a good story have in order for it to be up to your standards? And can I have some sauce in the case of that? (I’m trying to get better at writing and need some inspiration) thanks

Battle Through the Heavens
2 months ago

Magicduckcommander: This is how a story should be! Now i have troubles reading the junk...

Lord of the Mysteries · C945
2 months ago

Marukusius: I got so excited when Klein and Susies eyes met!!

Lord of the Mysteries · C863
4 months ago

Alessan: The Main Character and the Male Lead...meet at last!

Lord of the Mysteries · C863
4 months ago

Meowhead: So after 800 chapters, the protagonist in the book i am reading is fighting the gods among gods and every punch he does can shatter suns and rend the void in the heavens. What about yours?

Uh... this mc is... using a mushroom to threaten his glove... and getting in a staring contest with a dog....

Lord of the Mysteries · C863
4 months ago

Davidwrn: It has gone up to 1st place. Finally... It is about time a real genius is on top, instead of a cheater with a full library in his head yet still behaves like an idiot. No offense for the LoHP fans out there. I like it for the comedy side though

Lord of the Mysteries · C839
4 months ago

Aby55: Lmao this arc is sick af. Last arc Gehrman Sparrow was always fighting things head on, face to face. This arc Duane Dantes is the man behind the curtain pulling the strings

Lord of the Mysteries · C762
5 months ago

Oooge: There is translation mistake: “Those who say my name are on my mind.” should be „my name should be read aloud in the heart.” as in machine translation. Klein discourages Danitz to "pray" at night, not encourages him.

Lord of the Mysteries · C711
6 months ago

GoodWithAToaster: Looks like the demigod cut their losses and sacrificed Connors? What a decisive person...

Lord of the Mysteries · C711
6 months ago

Frozen_Necromancer: You know, I just realised something. Alger chose the Tarot card 'Hanged Man', but as we can see, the pathway that resembles the 'Hanged Man' the most is Secret Suppliant (Aurora Order), and the Sailor pathway that Alger has is also interchangeable with Secret Suppliant at high sequence. And since the other Tarot Club members chose the cards that actually seem to symbolise their pathways, would this be a foreshadowing that Alger one day might switch pathway because of one or other reason?

Lord of the Mysteries · C703
6 months ago

Snapplemonkey: Damned, Siatas knew they were going to die, so she gave the potion formula to Klein beforehand...

Lord of the Mysteries · C702
6 months ago

Baphonmet: I can think of a newspaper story about a crazy adventurer and three beautiful female pirate generals.
1. Gehrman Intruded into Rear Admiral of Ailment's room at midnight. Happened a lot of verbal and physical conflict, seemingly to break up.
2. Gehrman Stay in a room with Rear Admiral Iceberg for a long time. It's said that Rear Admiral Iceberg was reluctant to let him leave.
3.Gehrman and Pirate Admiral Star had a long journey together. Witnesses said Miss Cattleya entered his room on her own initiative, and leave dejectedly after a while.

Lord of the Mysteries · C674
6 months ago

Surely_Panda: By now Gherman Sparrow would probably being known as crazy and very constipated.

Lord of the Mysteries · C667
6 months ago

UnrivaledSolicitor: So quick and clean. You won’t get that kind of customer service with the normal, run of the mill Gods. Klein is like Escape Rope of the Tarot Club.

“I don’t want to explore any more, Oh Mr. Fool...”

“My body is poisoned and I won’t make it to any healers in time...Oh Mr. Fool”

“I think I’m about to lose my sanity and go on a murderspree...Oh Mr. Fool”

Mr. Fool is the Tarot Clubs’ plot armor personified. Between the free abort button; information gathering and dispersal; power creeping; hidden alliances; and Intel on a Godly scale. The Tarot Members have basically subscribed to the Protag Plot Armor Package. That’s not even including the possibility of resurrections based on the foreshadowing of Klein’s future powers.

Hot meat on a stick am I excited for when the Tarot Club officially enters the stage for world dominance.

Lord of the Mysteries · C667
6 months ago

NovelRuler: Prussia invades Poland. Prussia becomes Germany. So Ancient Germany invaded Poland. Even in an alternate universe, Poland still gets invaded by Germany. RIP Poland.

Advent of the New Age · C31
7 months ago
Why yes, Mengsk. You shall rulee ths sector or see it burnt to ashes. Just watch out for those pesky Zerg and... Waaaitaminute. View More
Advent of the New Age · C27
7 months ago
See this! I just gifted the story: Grimoire View More
Lord of the Mysteries · C614
7 months ago

RionSteiner: I have a issues with the character personality,

1. Batman is like out of character, he didn't brood he agreed fast specially on flash when making and suggest his plan. I mean flash dictate the battle with darkside. I think batman didnt even think and just go with the flow specially when flash suggest something.

2. Caitlyn Snow is so different from the tv show and in your fic. In tv show 1st season she can't get over on her dead ex boyfriend Ronnie turned Firestorm but on your fic she easily get hooked by your MC/Barry.

3. No character background and build up in this fic like it centers all in Barry and side character like cisco and wells and others are like normal NPC from the game and when the plot needed them and you need to write a dialogue, you include them, they just there like no other personality and just needed to make the plot progress.

Issue here is how the character develop but I really love OP mc in fanfic I hope this fic get better.

Reccomend you read shawn129 fic, flash there has depth characterization and hes OP too.

INTO THE FLASH.
9 months ago

Cindermoth: So. It's over.
No new chapters
Book is closed
A journey finished

Been quite the ride
I hope we'll get a sequel
Somewhere further into the future

Where there'll be references of the characters
Some clearer, some more hidden.

I want to see the Van'er space program
What'll become of prince Gerald's kid
Will Leaf lose her memories to the forest
Can Snaketooth escape the friendzone
The adventures of birb, lightning, wolf, and fish
Will mystery moon ever become useful
The spy agency of Hill Fawkes
Where all the damn napalm went
Will White get himself a submarine
The progress of festive port, need dem oil
Will Kyle Sychi ever make an explosive even he thinks has enough DAKKA
Will Roland become god emperor Roland
Will Morning light and May ever get a child
Does Morning light shoot blanks

And finally, I just wish to see the progress later.
A grown Neverwinter.

One day hopefully
Some day

Release That Witch · C1498
9 months ago

Extreme_Night: I've read the meaning of some tarot cards and they actually describe the character's behavior. For "The Fool" is free spirited and the beginning but also is reckless and a risk taker. "The World" is completion/travel and is seeking personal closure these two cards actually represents Klein's personality and actions pretty well which I am very surprised of

Lord of the Mysteries · C466
9 months ago

SRandom: In case you are wondering, Jack first appeared in chapter 53 Listener.

Lord of the Mysteries · C457
10 months ago

Kei88: Lord of Mysteries 

0 - Fool => Seer > Clown
0 The Fool – New beginnings, optimism, trust in life

I - The Magician => Apprentice > Trickmaster
1 The Magician – Action, the power to manifest

II - The High Priestess => Assassin> Instigator> Witch
2 The High Priestess – Inaction, going within, the subconscious

III - The Empress => Farmer
3 The Empress – Abundance, nurturing, fertility, life in bloom!

IV - The Emperor => Arbitrator> Sheriff
4 The Emperor – Structure, stability, rules and power

V - The Hierophant => Lawyer
5 The Hierophant – Institutions, tradition, society and its rules

VI - The Lovers => Prisoner
6 The Lovers – Sexuality, passion, choice, uniting

VII - The Chariot =>Savant > Archeologist > Appraiser
7 The Chariot – Movement, progress, integration

VIII - Strength => Warrior > Pugilist > Weapon Master > Dawn Paladin > Guardian > Demon Hunter
8 Strength – Courage, subtle power, integration of animal self

IX - The Hermit => Mystery Pryer > Melee Scholar > Warlock
9 The Hermit – Meditation, solitude, consciousness

X - Wheel of Fortune => Marauder > Swindler
10 Wheel of Fortune – Cycles, change, ups and downs

XI - Justice => Spectator > Telepathic > Psychiatrist
11 Justice – Fairness, equality, balance

XII - The Hanged Man => Hunter
12 The Hanged Man – Surrender, new perspective, enlightenment

XIII - Death => Corpse Collector > Gravedigger > Spirit Medium
13 Death – The end of something, change, the impermeability of all things, start anew

XIV - Temperance => Sailor > Folk of Rage > Seafarer 
14 Temperance – Balance, moderation, being sensible

XV - The Devil => Monster 
15 The Devil – Destructive patterns, addiction, giving away your power

XVI - The Tower => Secrets Suppliant > Listener > Shadow Ascetic > Rose Priest > Shepherd
16 The Tower – Collapse of stable structures, release, sudden insight

XVII - The Star => Readers
17 The Star – Hope, calm, a good omen!

XVIII - The Moon => Sleepless > Midnight Poet > Nightmare 
18 The Moon – Mystery, the subconscious, dreams

XIX - The Sun => Singer
19 The Sun – Success, happiness, all will be well

XX - Judgement => Criminal
20 Judgment – Rebirth, a new phase, inner calling

XXI - The World => Pharmacists
21 The World – Completion, wholeness, attainment, celebration of life

Lord of the Mysteries · C138
11 months ago

Dene323: For history fans:

Leon -> Victorian era Britain
Intis -> post-Napoleon France
Feysac -> Russian Empire

The rise and fall of Roselle mirrors the Napoleon for the most part (minus Waterloo - he was assassinated by traitors - a reference to Julius Caesar).

The "sun" relating for Intis is quite clearly referencing at Louis XIV, the Sun King.

There are so many more subtle historical parallels the author is inserting in the background if you pay attention, which adds to the appeal of this book.

Lord of the Mysteries · C134
11 months ago

Dante_The_Immortal: Yep but we can clearly see the rush, even with Witches help I bet Shaping Northern Slope will take more than a Week and also saying they will build Runways and Warehouses are not enough they need housing, Sanitation, A working massive kitchen and others. Looks like a rushed ending 😣😗

Release That Witch · C1445
11 months ago

Lambert07: Roland: "Imagine travel in the vast blue sky, it would be breath taking."
Random citizen: "YOU'RE BREATH TAKING"
Roland: No. You'r breath taking.

Release That Witch · C1445
11 months ago

UrashimaTaro: I wasted my time and read it for 300 plus chapters. But I can't keep on... this is really so bad. Now I'm more certain of finding something else to read. Thank you OP!
Basically the story has a nice starting point, nice setting, nice premises... BUT, the exectution is just soo bad. It leaves a bad taste in the mouth.
First we get to read about a super strong teacher walking his disciple to collect wiv... "heavenly flames", there's a lot of super strong people, so his teacher of course deals with the situations while feeding his disciple with earthly materials and heavenly treasures. THEN, when things should get nice... the story turns to alchemy. But, the alchemy in this thing is just soo bad. It contradicts itself every now and then, while being really boring with not much concept. Author is just too long-winded. I Shall Seal the Heavens has 1 alchemy arc that is a better novel than this one.

Battle Through the Heavens
1 year ago

Ace0320: Average : age of ultron

Release That Witch · C1422
1 year ago

Feliprins1: Nothint better to bring someone to a negotiation table than a nuke, am i right Japan?

Release That Witch · C1420
1 year ago
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