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What are the 3 items? 1. Glasses 2. Firestone 3.??? + Manastone View More
Legend of Legends · C141
2 weeks ago

Fenrir323: Dear Author,
what do you think about the idea to write 1 or 2 chapters from the perspective from other charaters? (but pls not to many)
For example how June gets the inheritance.
Or what the sitaution at his family is.
This could give the sidecharaters more depth.
Thank you for the chapter

Birth of the Demonic Sword · C184
1 month ago
Dear Author,
what do you think about the idea to write 1 or 2 chapters from the perspective from other charaters? (but pls not to many)
For example how June gets the inheritance.
Or what the sitaution at his family is.
This could give the sidecharaters more depth.
Thank you for the chapter View More
Birth of the Demonic Sword · C184
1 month ago

0BunnyRabbit0: In my opinion, this is one of the best cultivation novels I have seen. Keep doing what you want, the story is great

Birth of the Demonic Sword · C183
1 month ago

HasaDigaEebowai: when you stay long enough on the internet its inevitable to attract trolls ... so long as you dont feed them or acknowledge their presence you will be fine

Birth of the Demonic Sword · C183
1 month ago

Abyssmoon: Thank you very much i like the way you write your novel thats why read it ^^

Birth of the Demonic Sword · C183
1 month ago

NaWei: I like your story too
Everyone has their opinions ...
Don't be discourage ya
Thank you for your hard work!

Birth of the Demonic Sword · C183
1 month ago

remco: Dead author, your original novel is one of the few i still find interesting enough to keep reading even after 150+ chapters. I like your story and your consistency! Dont let the reviews of a few ppl get you down, i think you’re doing great! Xoxo

Birth of the Demonic Sword · C183
1 month ago

Fenrir323: Dear Author,
thank you for this great novel.
I hope you stay true to your story despite the harsh criticism of some readers. The comments do not reflect the opinion of all the readers. Many readers who like your style (and the style of the MC) do not write comments. Mostly people who have negative opinions write a lot of comments. Readers who like the novel read it and wait for the next chapter without writing anything. I hope you can take the comments with a grain of salt and stay true to yourself.
In my opinion Doris deserved her fate. Noah stopped the expansion of the lizards and doris did not (she was longer there but did nothing but waiting). Because Noah stopped the plans of the lizards they reacted and send the rank 4 members. Doris saw them, and should have realized she cant escape from them and should have withdrawn from the swamp. Noah stayed there because he knew he can escape.

The Lizards discovered Doris not because of Noah, but because Doris went into the Water. She made a mistake.
During the escape Doris made another mistake. Instead of trying to escape alone she thought she would drag the MC down to help her and died because of it.
If some would hinder one during an escape in a lethal situation (in a strong eat the weak world) i find in normal to kill this person who threatens the success of the escape.
Till the next Chapter

Birth of the Demonic Sword · C182
1 month ago

Complicate: I dont like good natured heroes... Im currently reading Supreme Magus (3rd attempt), its lokks more like a redemtion story, from nice Dark Magus novel. Moral dilemmas, slavery very bad, i wont hurt innocents... This kind of MC rub me in the wrong way... This novel? Fcking perfect!

Birth of the Demonic Sword · C182
1 month ago

Complicate: Hey author! I see a lot of white knights want to influence your great novel, and make MC look like a soft b1tch. I found your novel 5 days ago and this is what i wanted to read since my experience with this site. You made a great character, i just pray that it wont be a redemtion story, when he will find a true love or power of friendship... Bleahh. Keep him dark or darker, its not a nice world. Killing caan benefit him? -Good, kill more.
You have my full support!!!

Birth of the Demonic Sword · C182
1 month ago

Monge_BR: I have been reading the story since the beginning, I have been following the character's character development and I can say that it is very consistent with what the author reported. As for the situation highlighted in this chapter, it even surprised me, I was pleasantly surprised by the author's determination to keep the character consistent and uninfluenced by the readers, this is my favorite feature in this story.

Birth of the Demonic Sword · C182
1 month ago

LazyDemon: Auther continue like this and don't listen too the "make the mc righteous" comments and thanks for the great story so far

Birth of the Demonic Sword · C182
1 month ago

Complicate: And that what i love about him and this story! She came in his way - death. She even wanted to drag him along... that another reason. She have her way of hunting, and he have his. Her plans shoudnt matter to him? He's not a saint. I Want that kind of novel, read Spirit Cultivation if you want wannabe hero with righteous agenda. I came here for a devil/demon and the author gave what i wanted. I dont like good MCs that tend to save "lady in opression" at any given moment.

Birth of the Demonic Sword · C182
1 month ago
Dear Author,
thank you for this great novel.
I hope you stay true to your story despite the harsh criticism of some readers. The comments do not reflect the opinion of all the readers. Many readers who like your style (and the style of the MC) do not write comments. Mostly people who have negative opinions write a lot of comments. Readers who like the novel read it and wait for the next chapter without writing anything. I hope you can take the comments with a grain of salt and stay true to yourself.
In my opinion Doris deserved her fate. Noah stopped the expansion of the lizards and doris did not (she was longer there but did nothing but waiting). Because Noah stopped the plans of the lizards they reacted and send the rank 4 members. Doris saw them, and should have realized she cant escape from them and should have withdrawn from the swamp. Noah stayed there because he knew he can escape.

The Lizards discovered Doris not because of Noah, but because Doris went into the Water. She made a mistake.
During the escape Doris made another mistake. Instead of trying to escape alone she thought she would drag the MC down to help her and died because of it.
If some would hinder one during an escape in a lethal situation (in a strong eat the weak world) i find in normal to kill this person who threatens the success of the escape.
Till the next Chapter View More

Eveofchaos: So, that escalated quite quickly. How should I put it, let's see. I feel like I've always been quite clear about Noah's character and, as readers, it's completely in your right to like it or not. However, that won't change my approach to the story: as I said at the beginning, I'm overprotective toward my novel and I'll keep on writing it the way I mean to write it. I can accept critiques about mistakes and fix them (like it happened in the previous chapters) but I won't modify the story cause you want specific qualities to appear on the MC. As for the blaming Doris, I don't really know when that happened. She hindered Noah's escape so he killed her, simple as that.

Birth of the Demonic Sword · C182
1 month ago

Eveofchaos: So, that escalated quite quickly. How should I put it, let's see. I feel like I've always been quite clear about Noah's character and, as readers, it's completely in your right to like it or not. However, that won't change my approach to the story: as I said at the beginning, I'm overprotective toward my novel and I'll keep on writing it the way I mean to write it. I can accept critiques about mistakes and fix them (like it happened in the previous chapters) but I won't modify the story cause you want specific qualities to appear on the MC. As for the blaming Doris, I don't really know when that happened. She hindered Noah's escape so he killed her, simple as that.

Birth of the Demonic Sword · C182
1 month ago

Andy2109: This was brutal. It did rub me the wrong way since i like good natured heroes but it fits Noah's character perfectly so i applaud you author for sticking to your protagonist's character faithfully and not falling for the normal tropes and cliche's. and WE NEED MORE CHAPTERSSSS. Again great work.

Birth of the Demonic Sword · C182
1 month ago

connerkent: Annoying and smug female character appears. Too many stories would have her become friend's with MC and boss him around and treat him like dirt and MC will just take. This story he kills her right away. Love this story.😁

Birth of the Demonic Sword · C182
1 month ago

Raihussain23: This chapter definitely shocked me. I liked how the author introduced doris and deleted doris so fast. It was like a cliche plot to develop but only to abruptly end.

Birth of the Demonic Sword · C182
1 month ago

Fenrir323: I hope the Novel returns to the system. Chapter 1-416 was a Novel about a System with a Mech shop and some little (or not so little) adventures. 416-till now is a Novel about a Mech designer in the Military who goes fighting and only repairing Mechs... Both Novels are great, but I started (and want to continue) to read a novel about a boy with a SYSTEM and a shop which develops (Kingdom Building element). It's nice that we read he can further his path without the system (prove himself) but it's now a novel completely without a system. He always says he can't rely on the system (Mastery is dangerous/Knowledge too easy/etc.). He should use it until it's gone (if it's gone). He should milk the system as much as possible. I see a trend in the novel that he doesn't want to use the system anymore because of his future path. And he spends much more time outside of his shop than with it. No shop can survive that. Sorry for that rant. As I said these are 2 different (and good written) novels and I want to go back to the original.

The Mech Touch · C678
2 months ago
I hope the Novel returns to the system. Chapter 1-416 was a Novel about a System with a Mech shop and some little (or not so little) adventures. 416-till now is a Novel about a Mech designer in the Military who goes fighting and only repairing Mechs... Both Novels are great, but I started (and want to continue) to read a novel about a boy with a SYSTEM and a shop which develops (Kingdom Building element). It's nice that we read he can further his path without the system (prove himself) but it's now a novel completely without a system. He always says he can't rely on the system (Mastery is dangerous/Knowledge too easy/etc.). He should use it until it's gone (if it's gone). He should milk the system as much as possible. I see a trend in the novel that he doesn't want to use the system anymore because of his future path. And he spends much more time outside of his shop than with it. No shop can survive that. Sorry for that rant. As I said these are 2 different (and good written) novels and I want to go back to the original. View More
The Mech Touch · C678
2 months ago

Fenrir323: Review: The Mech Touch is a great Novel about Mechs and space civilisation. He designs Mechs and goes adventuring in between (nice mix of action and designing).

Now a little bit more in depth.
In my view The Mech Touch are 2 Novels (both great written, but not for everybody).

The First Novel from Chapter 1 till Chapter 416.
In the first Novel Ves starts his own Mech shop with the help of his System and begins designing Mechs. Trough Missions (from the System or other persons) he goes to a lot of adventures and returns afterwards to his shop to further his career. The main focus lies in the System and his design of Mechs (with his unique touch).

The second Novel starts from Chapter 416 till now (and will last many more Chapters).
In the second Novel is Ves a military Mech designer. His job is to plan repair schedules and help the military at the ground work. There is no System and no designs. He is a cog in a large machine.

I personally would like if the Novel would go back to the first part. (Finish his military service and continue his Company). I started to read a Novel with a System and would like to interact with it a lot more. Sadly (in my perspective) the novel will continue with the second novel for a long time.

The Mech Touch
2 months ago
Reading Status: C663
Review: The Mech Touch is a great Novel about Mechs and space civilisation. He designs Mechs and goes adventuring in between (nice mix of action and designing).

Now a little bit more in depth.
In my view The Mech Touch are 2 Novels (both great written, but not for everybody).

The First Novel from Chapter 1 till Chapter 416.
In the first Novel Ves starts his own Mech shop with the help of his System and begins designing Mechs. Trough Missions (from the System or other persons) he goes to a lot of adventures and returns afterwards to his shop to further his career. The main focus lies in the System and his design of Mechs (with his unique touch).

The second Novel starts from Chapter 416 till now (and will last many more Chapters).
In the second Novel is Ves a military Mech designer. His job is to plan repair schedules and help the military at the ground work. There is no System and no designs. He is a cog in a large machine.

I personally would like if the Novel would go back to the first part. (Finish his military service and continue his Company). I started to read a Novel with a System and would like to interact with it a lot more. Sadly (in my perspective) the novel will continue with the second novel for a long time. View More
The Mech Touch
2 months ago

Fenrir323: I hope the Novel returns to the system. Chapter 1-416 was a Novel about a System with a Mech shop and some little (or not so little) advetures. 416-till now (666) is a Novel about a Mech designer in the Military who goes fighting and only reparing mechs... Both Novel are great but i started (and want to countiue) to read a novel about a boy with a SYSTEM and a mech shop which developes (Kingdom Bulding elemet). Its nice that we read he can further his patch without the system (prove himself) but its now a novel completly without a system.. He allways says he cant rely on system (Mastery is dangerous/Knowledge to easy/etc). He should use it until its gone (if its gone). He should milk the system as much as possible. I see a trend in the novel that he doenst want to use the system anymore because of his future path. And he spend much more time outside of his shop than with it. No shop can surive that. Sorry for that rant. As i said these are 2 different (and good written) novels and i want to go back to the original.

The Mech Touch · C666
2 months ago
I hope the Novel returns to the system. Chapter 1-416 was a Novel about a System with a Mech shop and some little (or not so little) advetures. 416-till now (666) is a Novel about a Mech designer in the Military who goes fighting and only reparing mechs... Both Novel are great but i started (and want to countiue) to read a novel about a boy with a SYSTEM and a mech shop which developes (Kingdom Bulding elemet). Its nice that we read he can further his patch without the system (prove himself) but its now a novel completly without a system.. He allways says he cant rely on system (Mastery is dangerous/Knowledge to easy/etc). He should use it until its gone (if its gone). He should milk the system as much as possible. I see a trend in the novel that he doenst want to use the system anymore because of his future path. And he spend much more time outside of his shop than with it. No shop can surive that. Sorry for that rant. As i said these are 2 different (and good written) novels and i want to go back to the original. View More
The Mech Touch · C666
2 months ago

Fenrir323: I dont like that Deal. He needs to work 15 times for 3 months (nearly 4 years) for the knowledge he needs.. He only worked 2 years till now and allready achieved so much.. the knowledge in the deal isnt worth that much time. he can get it with the system (If he makes 15 designes himself he gets enough points). Or he can buy them in the society (4 years of missions are enough to get it out of the higher library). Plus he has the chance to expose his xfactor to the madman (+ possible bad rep). And dont forget in 15 years he is at least a journymen... His time is worth much more.

The Mech Touch · C663
2 months ago
I dont like that Deal. He needs to work 15 times for 3 months (nearly 4 years) for the knowledge he needs.. He only worked 2 years till now and allready achieved so much.. the knowledge in the deal isnt worth that much time. he can get it with the system (If he makes 15 designes himself he gets enough points). Or he can buy them in the society (4 years of missions are enough to get it out of the higher library). Plus he has the chance to expose his xfactor to the madman (+ possible bad rep). And dont forget in 15 years he is at least a journymen... His time is worth much more. View More
The Mech Touch · C663
2 months ago

Fenrir323: Thanks for the Chapter. What is his level 95 Class advancement Quest?

The Legendary Mechanic · C415
2 months ago
Thanks for the Chapter. What is his level 95 Class advancement Quest? View More
The Legendary Mechanic · C415
2 months ago

Fenrir323: i dont like that mythical and legendary cards are now cabbages. At the start its was said that there are nearly no legendary monsters. Even if a monster is strong (imperial level/demigod level etc) they dont reach legendary/mythical level. But now each God level monster he sees is mytical (Therefore their combatlevel should be higher, but that never counts. Only his Monster can crosslevel kill not the enemy).

Monster Paradise · C1126
2 months ago
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