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A potential starlet! Definitely recommended for people who wanted a new take on villainess/reincarnation trope! I'm intrigued by the different takes on villainess/reincarnation trope because it's quite rare for a protagonist — a villainess, live the same identity everytime she reincarnate, not to mention, it's countless times! So the concept is really interesting. Also the story pacing is good and not rushed or to slow. The characters are also likeable for me as I could understand the reason behind their action and the characters didn't feel robotic or "forced" as the story developed. There's still mysteries in regard to character backstory/history especially our MC, and her maid. So I'm looking forward for future development! For writing quality, it can be improved. As a person who is very picky with story I read, grammar is the aspect I look after storytelling and how interesting the plot of a story. I'm the type ignore grammar error when the story's enjoyable and this story is one of it. The grammatical errors is still there, and some of it is just common mistakes in grammar (as far as I can notice) but not that glaring to make you suffer from migraine. However, I suggest the author avoid using the same linkers or words. Other than that, please be careful of using he/she pronounciation. I was so confused when the pronouncing changes from he to she at some chapters when character gender already established 😅. Nevertheless, the writing quality improve in later chapters. In terms of narration and pov changes, it's unique? Although there's time where the transitions seems weird, it wasn't awkward. I think of it as author writing style. Ohh yeah, the chapters length also is just nice. Not too draggy and abruptly end. Overall, this story has potential if polished nicely. So, don't miss out on this story or you'll regret it later 😜 Kudos with many thanks to the author for writing this story! Cheers and goodluck to your writing journey [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

Glad to hear you had a great break! 😆😆✨

Binge-read this until latest chapter because well... Curiosity. Anyway, truly my cup of tea as I'm a sucker for mystery and plotting schemes. I'm truly curious of ML true identity, the same as our mc who are still discovering the body's owner background. For character, I hope you made them feels more dimensional and resonate with the reader. The story pace is not too slow, but we're just at the beginning of the story and I'm sure there's more coming to us in future chapter. The writing is also great! English isn't my native but I must say your writing style is keeping me fascinated 😂 The grammatical errors is also not that noticeable. Other than that, please note that it's slow burn romance, but we do have some moments between mc and ml. If you blink, you could feel ml falling for mc first though 🤣 P/s: Hope to see you gain more reader and experience through your journey in writing! Wish you all the best and remember to take care of yourself✨