JustDontKnow

4mth

Commented

Well, using all of the hints you left, I am torn between two options, but I will go with the one I would like to see, especially because he is in Kiri, and that is: Jinbe, I choose you

He's One Of The Seven Warlord Of The Seas

JustDontKnow

10mth

Replied to Fluffypie

Ok, so I will read it a few times and change to another novel to relax and them come back. I was serious when I said I would hate to drop this novel kkkkkkkk

"Yahoo! It doesn't matter! We are finally going on a real mission, Akamaru! Are you excited?!"

Start From Naruto: Shino the Dominator

Anime & Comics · Fluffypie

JustDontKnow

10mth

Commented

Oh, I think I got it, maybe not everything, but at least something of why he can't love them. Mikael is the concept of Freedom, or at least, it is a part of his being. If I understand what Emma is trying to say in this paragraph, is that they have the power to order him around, or even brainwash him in some way (like: I order you to love me). This means that they are, FOREVERMORE, his jailors and keepers, he can never be 100% free. And we also know he HATES brainwashing people. Put that together, and I can see his proplem, he CAN'T love them on a conceptual leval. But again, I can be totally wrong PS: English is not my first language, so sorry for any mistakes

There was only one lie in there. Out of the six seals, none had been used to try and stop her second dive. Emma couldn't risk any other women finding out about the actual Command. Not if she wanted to keep Mikael's trust. Explaining why a Command like, 'Never order me again' was given would have tipped her hand. Until she was sure of their loyalty, she could not tell them of the power they held over him.

Rapturous Rhapsody

Anime & Comics · ReadingDangerously

JustDontKnow

10mth

Commented

Just so I know, when this BS is going to stop ? Because, not gonna lie, is getting really annoying really fast. This novel has great potential and I would hate to drop it because its angering me more than anything. I read to relax, not the other way around. PS: English is not my first language, so sorry for any mistakes found

"Yahoo! It doesn't matter! We are finally going on a real mission, Akamaru! Are you excited?!"

Start From Naruto: Shino the Dominator

Anime & Comics · Fluffypie

JustDontKnow

1yr

Commented

Ok, so you are going with the orphan route...

"Just keep walking straight, and you can't get lost," Madame Yan smiled as she watched the kids walk past her. Looking at their backs, her smile faded. Raising her fist into the air, she raised a finger and drew a circle in the air. A ninja silently jumped up from below, clad in full black with a Kiri headband. He bowed slightly and ran in the direction from whence they came.

Naruto: Scrolls of the Dragonborn

Anime & Comics · Myumaraboi

JustDontKnow

1yr

Commented

Humm, my drama senses and pessimistic nature are saying his sister is one of this captured elves.... I just hope I am not right.

"Due to the birth of the sun and the loss of their commander, the orcs fled towards the mountains of Ered Lomin, from there they will flee to the shadowy mountains, Ered Wethrin." Fingon stated calmly as he glanced in our direction and then continued, "They managed to take some of our own as hostages. We have two choices, chase them towards the north and go through Ered Wethrin to the plains of Dor Daedeloth or make camp at Hithlum to the east, regroup and march towards Thangorodrim to intercept them."

Transmigrated in Middle-earth

Anime & Comics · ArcaneWriter

JustDontKnow

1yr

Commented

Queen of Nightmares: "Agreed, Aster has that cool prince vibe yet you look like mob 27 among the hillbillies."

Winter Spirit with a Chat Group

Anime & Comics · PuRplE

JustDontKnow

2yr

Commented

Thanks for the chapter

ch 15 Chapter 15

Naruto: Wraith of Konoha

Anime & Comics · Bigbaby

JustDontKnow

2yr

Commented

'I made the mistake of allowing you to second guess my orders before, in the presence of the enemy no less. And don't think I didn't realize your manipulation in my unstable state. Though, I must thank you, for you have brought to light a weakness I had. One I will endeavor to rectify.' Ashidon thought as he eyed the two jonin, waiting for their response.

Naruto: Wraith of Konoha

Anime & Comics · Bigbaby

JustDontKnow

2yr

Commented

Ok, so I am going to give a tip because I really like the history and I want it to do well. You just have a chance for character growth here. The mistake of not sending the crowns instead of other ninjas, a lack of caution in general and weak mental fortitude (he was manipulated by his teamate easily) are all problems the MC can work on. If you can show that the MC is better than before (at least in this cases) and not drop his level after the growth for plot reasons, you are one step closer to making a good history, and learning for the future if your objective is being an full time author. Also, thanks for the chapter Obs: English is not my first language, sorry for any mistakes

ch 13 Chapter 13

Naruto: Wraith of Konoha

Anime & Comics · Bigbaby

JustDontKnow

2yr

Commented

Shots fired

Call me petty, but I won't care for anyone's opinion of me. Did they go through what I went through? I scoff at when some children I see get moody because their father ignores them. What a joke, at least they have a father, at least they have have a home. There are others who are struggling, yet you have the audacity to feel like the world is against you because your dad isn't spending enough time with you!

Naruto the Uzumaki

Anime & Comics · UchihaFanatic

JustDontKnow

2yr

Commented

You might be thinking, what the fuck is this weirdo even talking about? Why is he being so needlessly vague for no reason? And who is he even talking to right now? Well, I'm talking to you, silly, don't make stupid questions!

Reincarnated: Life in Highschool DxD

Anime & Comics · BiscuIt

JustDontKnow

2yr

Commented

Natsumi-san resolveu falar pra terminar com a disputa " Pelo que eu entendi a disputa é sobre se o clã Tsuki vai ser útil ou não para a vila, eu pessoalmente acho que sim. Mas entendo o receio de Chinoike-Dono, eu proponho um duelo entre alguém do clã Tsuki contra um um membro do clã Chinoike, se Tsuki ganhar ele poderão ingressar à nossa vila, se perder eu temo que não, o que vocês acham?"l

O Clã Tsuki (Naruto fanfiction PT-BR)

Anime & Comics · ElderPaez

JustDontKnow

2yr

Commented

"... Did the old man change his mind?" I said, with a tone of hope "Get me out of this shit hole old man!" I said, opening my arms waiting for the lightning to hit me and take me anywhere, I was ready to embrace my destruction.