Kali_Grapy
Lv 5- Joined Jan 2018
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Kali_Grapy: Oh wait you're not the author, I'm sorry😅😅. Never mind.
Bang Dream! My New Life Story · C0
Rin_Phenex: otaku god is a true god who has one of the biggest cult in the planet hehe
Bang Dream! My New Life Story · C0
Rin_Phenex: nope just u know College and stuff only got time to read not write and i suck at writing hahahaha
Bang Dream! My New Life Story · C0
vashurajput269: Hey man why is this getting in pretty much many fanfic like 3or 4 years old and already chunin I mean clam down bro and do some time skip
Journey of a Soul- A Naruto Fanfic · C5
TycKa: And his fuckin.g goal is to become a monster, not some kind of lame ass shi.t hero.. And this is not a way a self proclaim monster should do..
Akame Ga Kill: Garou · C5
Kali_Grapy: Dude, have you watch the anime haru's from? He's a scum way before this novel. And that's why he's this book most fitting protagonist😂😂.
Sis-Con with Dimensional Chat Group · C246
Bruhnoe: I don´t like the way the relationships of Haru are going. He is a scum, and worse is that he getting girls in different worlds is bad in my opinion.
Sis-Con with Dimensional Chat Group · C246
Kali_Grapy: Is it me or the author really don't like midoriya? I for one actually like midoriya for his commitment and unyielding will. If you watch the anime or read the manga you know how much he has grown. He basically has the heart of a hero like spider-man. It doesn't matter how much hit he take, he'll suck it up and move forward even if the future seems bleak. So I commend midoriya for that. And you know that he won't get crippled. He's a protagonist for damn sake😂😂.
Jurassic Hero (Boku no Hero Academia Fanfic). · C101
Jurassic Hero (Boku no Hero Academia Fanfic). · C101
xcution409: option 3: genius hero: Warrior type, gets Scathach out from the Land of Shadows
Fate/King of Swords · C7
Kali_Grapy: Now that would be awesome. Gin being an excellent swordsman plus a breathing technique would give such a boost.
Sis-Con with Dimensional Chat Group · C241
Asura_Vajra: HOLY SHIT, THE HYPE!
Imagine Gintoki with Breath Style!!
Kuh...! If only this book updated with more chapters!Sis-Con with Dimensional Chat Group · C241
raviant: Three pervert together.The most dangerous combo
Sis-Con with Dimensional Chat Group · C241
Asura_Vajra: HOLY SHIT, THE HYPE!
Imagine Gintoki with Breath Style!!
Kuh...! If only this book updated with more chapters!Sis-Con with Dimensional Chat Group · C241
Kali_Grapy: He doesn't like seeing a woman be r*ped but he won't hesitate to use them as way to satisfy his future subordinate? What's the difference? I don't like the fact that you're not making him value people. As in like a person. Right now he looked like the assh*le in every anime that everyone's rooting for to be beat up. The person who sees people as things and judge them by how useful they are. How am I suppose to root for a guy this psychotic? He has a everything yet he's this psychotic. Going back to her sister and being willing to do anything makes him a goddamn sis-con and then he treat other people by there usefulness make the MC not worth rooting for and frankly, disgusting.
But how come when they're other people like the MC but people still root for them? Like Thanos for example (movie Thanos). He's willing to do everything for his goal and even if we don't agree to it, people actually like him. But your MC made me, disgusted, turn off, uncomfortable. Its because of bad writing and lack of proper conviction that made him human. Thanos made people feel what it feels like to be in his shoes and understand why he would be insistent on doing what he wants to do but he also has a creed, a bottom line. He doesn't seem hypocritical but a man of sheer will and commitment. But your MC is looking like a hypocrite that doesn't care what happen to his surroundings and only think for himself. He's inconsistent. And his goal is just seeing someone, that's not healthy, that's obsession. Which frankly made him even more unlikeable. He's basically looking a lot like comic book Thanos which everyone wants to defeat and no person actually root for. Because he's psychotic and just basically a villain.
TLDR: YOUR MC IS UNLIKEABLE AND NOT WORTH ROOTING FOR BECAUSE OF BAD WRITING. WORK ON THAT. AN MC IS SOMEONE WORTH ROOTING FOR NO MATTER IF HE'S A VILLAIN OR A HERO, AND ITS THE AUTHOR'S JOB TO DO SO.
p.s. I'm not saying this to upset you but an actual criticism. Peace.The Legendary Apostle · C12
But how come when they're other people like the MC but people still root for them? Like Thanos for example (movie Thanos). He's willing to do everything for his goal and even if we don't agree to it, people actually like him. But your MC made me, disgusted, turn off, uncomfortable. Its because of bad writing and lack of proper conviction that made him human. Thanos made people feel what it feels like to be in his shoes and understand why he would be insistent on doing what he wants to do but he also has a creed, a bottom line. He doesn't seem hypocritical but a man of sheer will and commitment. But your MC is looking like a hypocrite that doesn't care what happen to his surroundings and only think for himself. He's inconsistent. And his goal is just seeing someone, that's not healthy, that's obsession. Which frankly made him even more unlikeable. He's basically looking a lot like comic book Thanos which everyone wants to defeat and no person actually root for. Because he's psychotic and just basically a villain.
TLDR: YOUR MC IS UNLIKEABLE AND NOT WORTH ROOTING FOR BECAUSE OF BAD WRITING. WORK ON THAT. AN MC IS SOMEONE WORTH ROOTING FOR NO MATTER IF HE'S A VILLAIN OR A HERO, AND ITS THE AUTHOR'S JOB TO DO SO.
p.s. I'm not saying this to upset you but an actual criticism. Peace. View More
Solate: Certainly your comment has given me some and many ideas, are you interested in contacting me at discord?
Solate#5373The Legendary Apostle · C12
McRead: So he doesn't like woman to be r*ped in front of him but also doesn't mind forcing his own female supordinates to please other? Where's the difference?
The Legendary Apostle · C12
SD_Liv: It seems to me alone, or does the author want to add a manga called Yuragi-sou no Yuuna-san ??
Sis-Con with Dimensional Chat Group · C238
SD_Liv: It seems to me alone, or does the author want to add a manga called Yuragi-sou no Yuuna-san ??
Sis-Con with Dimensional Chat Group · C238
PPSH7: T-Rex doing some jabs at the air xD
Jurassic Hero (Boku no Hero Academia Fanfic). · C60
MilkGod: Imagine your relaxing in the beach and all you see is a giant dinosaur running while the Rocky theme song plays in the background.
Jurassic Hero (Boku no Hero Academia Fanfic). · C60
Xion_77: Burn the heretic. Kill the mutant. Purge the unclean.
It is better to die for the Emperor than to live for yourself.
P.S - We need to rename the Maid squad to the Inquisition
For the Emperor!How Much For Your Soul? · C49
Kali_Grapy: Are you going to create marines and ultramarines? Hahahahaha. I mean you already have the god-emperor so just make it a full blown 4k warhammer 😂😂.
Purge the heretics!! For the emperor!!!How Much For Your Soul? · C49
Purge the heretics!! For the emperor!!! View More
How Much For Your Soul? · C49
Kali_Grapy: Now that she's gone, how the hell would the strawhats get the going merry? Also, usopp is now one of the best character in one piece after the 2 years time skip. He goes from a scaredy cat to a real warrior of the sea. People who say usopp is still a loser didn't watch the anime properly or just plain ignorant. Out of all the strawhats, he is the one with the most development.
Before anyone started calling me a usopp fanboy, I'm not, I'm actually a zoro fanboy. I just like usopp because of how much he has grown and people who keep underestimating him makes me feel like they didn't even bother to understand the anime or manga.My new life in One Piece · C52
Before anyone started calling me a usopp fanboy, I'm not, I'm actually a zoro fanboy. I just like usopp because of how much he has grown and people who keep underestimating him makes me feel like they didn't even bother to understand the anime or manga. View More
My new life in One Piece · C52
Kali_Grapy: Bug catcher ken is a legend. Even legendaries will fall under his level 5 caterpie.
Journey Towards Greatness · C287
HasaDigaEebowai: Paul is like those annoying NPCs who challenge you with their caterpie when you walking around with Groudon and Kyogre
Journey Towards Greatness · C287
