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Mathro

Mathro

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Spends all day reading.

2018-01-17 Joined United Kingdom

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Replied to HIIAMAREADER
Correct. However, in English we write in two tenses, past or present. When I say entirely, I mean that there are no tense switches like there would be if you used flashbacks (Present -> Past).
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Replied to Sfayte
The only time that “grammar correction” is right, is if the main character also thinks that PTSD happens instantly after an event, which is wrong. (And my comment is saying that is wrong).
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“Not necessarily” means that the correct wording may or may not be that. However, if they were trying to “make a grammar correction”, them they are wrong. The entire chapter is in present tense. There are two possibilities for why the “correction” is made: 1. They are just wrong. 2. They are under the assumption that PTSD happens instantly, which is wrong.
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“Casting down your own brother” ??? I don’t understand. What does this mean? I feel like I’ve forgotten a key part of this novel.

"And you are? Arceana is?" I asked with a tilted head as she stood. "Your Kingdom is built upon the blood of everyone else besides you and Arceana!" Moving towards her, I raised my voice as I looked at her unkempt appearance. "What did you ever do for this Kingdom?! Fight Rudnurth!" Clapping as I continued my approach, I stopped in front of her and clapped a few more times with her hair hanging partially in front of her face. "Congratulations on casting down your own brother!"

Star Eater

Star Eater

Fantasy · Von_5371

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Replied to MinoMax
Not necessarily, symptoms of PTSD don’t always show up instantly. It is very common for them to show up a month later. (Tried and tested).
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Replied to lordseven
A previous paragraph says that he pulled that guy away from the group first.

Bai Zemin looked at him indifferently before saying in a deep voice, "Zhong De, Fu Xuefeng. Take two of these guys away and see if you can get some information."

Blood Warlock: Succubus Partner in the Apocalypse

Blood Warlock: Succubus Partner in the Apocalypse

Fantasy · XIETIAN

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Replied to Neninho
Who and where? Missed that one.

[Skill(s): [Healing Light: 53 (C)] > [Healing Blight: 1 (B)], [Dhampir: - (S)], [Subordinate's Loyalty: - (A)], [Undying Body: 1 (A)], [Waves of Erosion: 1 (B)]

Vampire Overlord System in the Apocalypse

Vampire Overlord System in the Apocalypse

Fantasy · PancakesWitch

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Replied to ryker10x
I’d have to be able to remember it first.

The final person, the old man who wore casual clothes and had a light stubble introduced himself last. "I'm Valentine Debrau, but you may know me as Kubrick."

Darius Supreme

Darius Supreme

Fantasy · Kotario

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Replied to easyread
….

[You have dismembered his arms and torso from a horizontal attack]

The Ancients World

The Ancients World

Games · easyread

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Replied to micha4flame
Such great resolve. Don’t know how long you did this for, will be sad if I no longer see you correcting.

Samuel Mart takes a deep breath and releases a long sigh. He knows that both The Pope and The Saintess are not going to be happy with what happened. He should inform them and get the bad news over with. Its even worse since they don't have any good news. "I'll inform the church back at the temporary headquarters we set up. Stay here and see if you can find anything that would be useful in our search. Let me know if you find something." Samuel leaves the the area of the the statue and makes his way out of the park being escorted by the very best of his regiment. As he is walking back to headquarters Hamon begins casting magic to see if he cant find out something.

The Ancients World

The Ancients World

Games · easyread

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Replied to Kilian_Karan
I doubt it. Author seemed a bit aggressive in a response a couple months ago about. Most of them won’t get corrected anyway. No point in pointing them out if the author can’t be bothered. Only a third of them were pointed out before chapter 22, then almost no one bothered afterwards. It is the same mistakes which does annoy me. To/too There/their Cant -> Can’t

I wait in the darkness as the next opponent and battlefield are being prepared. My next boss fight is the most hard working of the 3 disciples and made a name for herself as a brilliant tactician. Her title was Strategy Master Vayra. She led the armies against Vederfalls enemies. Sword Saint Monrell became disgusted with the government of Vederfall by the end of his time in the capital. They wanted him to solve all there problems and he began to resent their lack of growth despite how much he contributed to the country. He left the capital and his disciples since he could no longer tolerate the incompetence of the government.

The Ancients World

The Ancients World

Games · easyread

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Replied to easyread
Around 1/3 of the mistakes have been commented on. So far it has just been to/too and their/there.

She just pokes her food with her fork and doesn't look at me. "I'm okay Cera, just worried is all..." Parents don't get enough of the credit they should get. My mom and dad sacrificed everything to give us a good life. They gave up there futures and families to be together. They ask for nothing in return and receive not nearly enough thank you's from us.

The Ancients World

The Ancients World

Games · easyread

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Replied to Dags_DAGS
The noble family’s daughter who was feeding the poor with soup and bread. We now know that the soup’s meat was human. They were doing experiments on bodies and made it into soup when they failed.

'I thought I'm never going to see him again... I need to prove that I'm not a cheap slut! I have to know why I'm so attached to him. Yes, I need to get close to him so that I can figure out the reason. Nothing more. For researchers purposes only!'

Sacrifice: Time of Mine

Sacrifice: Time of Mine

Fantasy · JhiThan_Ser

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