Tallon

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Thank you for the chapter.

ch 145 Escape

Tallon

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This book is a fucking masterpiece, easily one of the best I've read on this site, if not the best. lets start of with a big check box for a lot of people. is it readable? Yes, absolutely, there's the odd spelling or grammar mistake at most once or twice a chapter. but they are always small mistakes that you can easily understand what the author actually meant. That out of the way let's talk about the story. It takes two relatively clichei story settings and seamlessly mixes them together and into the world as a whole. The two main characters are incredible well fleshed out, their staarting motivations and personalities smoothly carved out of the first chapter creating a brilliant premise not only built off of the story's gimmick. The two main characters interact with each other in a way that promotes each other's character development. The reborn mc is done amazingly in this way, she is purposely left with several character flaws that are unraveled as she interacts with the system mc and experiences a completely different perspective prompting her to change how she treats him which cha get how he treats her etc. etc. Finally the wold building, I wouldn't call it the revolutionary or completely original but it lays solid ground rules for itself and sticks to them. They're not complex so it's easy to follow along, and a lot of the story contextually makes sense within this world. The power system is quit fluid and isn't locked down but has fundamental rules that the author doesn't violate, or if they do, always has an explanation as to why. Which is a lot better than most other stories on this site. Chapter updates: fucking consistent. tldr: read it, you won't regret it.

Tallon

1yr

Commented

just caught up, and hands down one of if not the best novel on this site.

ch 141 Connection

Tallon

1yr

Replied to Krypton71

15, so her behaviour makes a lot of sense. Good job author.

"One, don't sniff him! second, he has gone through the trouble of going in secret, I can't just call someone now!" Sofia said, thinking hard about what she should do.

Tallon

1yr

Commented

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Tallon

2yr

Replied to Dovos

nah she should cast it at max hp, that way you're healing 50% of your max hp every second for 2 mins. Ngl the author didn't really think this through.

Zach's HP increased by 150% every passing second. His initial HP was 500, so Zach's HP was increasing by 750 every passing second.

Tallon

2yr

Commented

These gods remind me of the ones in Danmachi

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Fantasy · Elyon

Tallon

3yr

Commented

you said Nik whenn you probably meant tony

His vacation house, however, was equipped with old school tech that almost made all of Shield's spyware redundant and the tech he did keep was extremely safe from being breached. Jarvis, Tony's A.I. for example. Shield simply did not have that level of sophisticated technology to breach through Jarvis that kept on changing its own protective measures by tiny margins on a daily basis. Like usual, he was in a dark-grey tank top with the middle of his chest glowing bluish, his arc reactor. "Pepper?" Tony inquired while accepting the call as Pepper's face emerged on the screen, her facial expression anything but pleased.

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Anime & Comics · FanHarem

Tallon

3yr

Replied to The_Faggotten_Ones

expert

Louise nodded. "We were lucky this time. Who would have expected that prince Claus has a hidden powerhouse as his teacher?"

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Fantasy · Aidka

Tallon

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Did you copy the text straight from the books?

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Anime & Comics · GreatSage_Master1

Tallon

3yr

Replied to Nickaido

no as in isn't it golden tier-> legendary tier-> supreme tier. why has legendary tier suddenly disappeared?

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Fantasy · Nickaido

Tallon

3yr

Commented

what happened to legendary tier?

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Fantasy · Nickaido

Tallon

3yr

Replied to Nickaido

exactly! why start at lvl 1 go up to lvl 7 only to jump back to lvl 0 I guess it's similar to s rank in the letter grading system but it's just so confusing numerically.

You all already know that there were classed by levels, Level 7 to Level 0, with Level 0 being the most dangerous, followed by Level 7,6,5,4,3,2 and 1, the weakest. There's no Level 1, nor there Level 2. However, there is a Level 3 forbidden zone, Well, it's artificial, an artificial forbidden zone

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Fantasy · Nickaido

Tallon

3yr

Commented

why? this is so confusing, lvl 7 then lvl 0?

You all already know that there were classed by levels, Level 7 to Level 0, with Level 0 being the most dangerous, followed by Level 7,6,5,4,3,2 and 1, the weakest. There's no Level 1, nor there Level 2. However, there is a Level 3 forbidden zone, Well, it's artificial, an artificial forbidden zone

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Fantasy · Nickaido

Tallon

3yr

Replied to Darkstar11051999

Well the God of the Bible sealed the Trihexia, right? The thing that everyone was extremely scared of, even the gods of the many pantheons? He was apparently exhausted after doing it and still fought the great war with fallen angels and devils on par with those pantheons gods. Maybe he was just of a different tier to the gods of the other pantheons? If he could make sacred gears on the level of longius then isn't it also possible he made weapons just as op for his own use. Hell I wouldn't want to **** with someone like that if I was a God of a pantheon.

"This is not a real shield, but a gift from my father. The real shield was turned into a Sacred Gear, after all."

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Anime & Comics · GreatSage_Master1

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