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DraconicEmperor: Aikido!? Really? One of the very few martial art that tries to prevent harm for both the user and the victim. A martial art that calls other arts 'too violent'. How the hell is that a good choice when going in the violent path! Just WHY?!Supreme Magus · C1
Supreme Magus · C1
Supreme Magus · C1
Atryx10: >father had bipolar,
Jesus fucking christ, I can't read for more than a second before another mistake pops up. You forgot to add "disorder" after 'bipolar'.
This is from the first sentence of the second paragraph.Supreme Magus · C1
Supreme Magus · C1
Atryx10: >life wasn't a good nor a bad.
You forgot to add "one" after 'bad'.
This is also most of the second half of the first sentence of your story.
Please look more carefully for mistakes, and please fix any mistakes that people point out.
There are plenty of free ways to check your chapters for spelling- and grammatical mistakes.Supreme Magus · C1
Supreme Magus · C1
Supreme Magus · C1
Bobette: Ya honestly from a non-reader perspective, the reviewer was right, from your arguments I could tell that the author is actually fairly good at English. (Unless the author actually spent more effort on the argument than on his novel). And the reviewer was actually pretty respectful (?) considering that this was a more neutrally rated review. All the reviewer wanted was to give the author some suggestions but the author reacted pretty negatively and that just made me not want to read this novel.
Author, I know that this novel might be your reverse scale or something but you don’t have to randomly start a scolding battle with someone who just wants to give a friendly suggestion. And if you can’t see that, then you can continue to argue with people and continue to lose potential readers like me who pay attention to the author’s personality. I know that you can’t please everyone and stuff but... really? Your replies to negative reviews are a little over the top.
I know by doing this I might miss a good novel up so what? There is something called an internet and I’ll rather support an author who does good works and has a good personality than an author who has good works but doesn’t even let his readers have a honest review. You can take offence to what I’m saying and be insulted or anything but you need to learn to take everything with a bigger heart than what I can see currently.Spending My Retirement In A Game
AuthorLotus: You won... yay! 🤗 (was rooting for you but didn’t want to interfere)Spending My Retirement In A Game
Fiaran: "Not a native speaker / Don't quote someone if you don't know what you are talking about. "
I *am* a native speaker and a voracious reader, and quoting someone doesn't require knowledge, but correcting them does.
Low *is* used to describe sound volume. Lowly is not. Period. "Soft smile/laughter" conveys intimacy. Even "gentle smile" has emotional overtones you might want to avoid. That still leaves lots of options: small, half, polite, warm, welcoming, wide, even toothy, to name a few.
Language is more than just words with correct meaning stuck together. Inept is a commonly used word in English, but ept, the opposite, is not, except to prove a point. You could have a character say, "I have become quite ept with my new carving tool." It is technically correct, but readers will be jarred.
You are the author, so if you want to keep on jarring your readers, that's your prerogative. I took some of my time to to write my first ever novel review on Web Novel to offer you suggestions to (selfishly) improve my reading experience because your work has quite a lot going for it. It's your choice to listen and possibly learn, or be defensive and argue with me. I will still keep reading you story as long as the characters engage me.Spending My Retirement In A Game
Neveryoumindme: Thanks for sharing! I hope it was clear i wasn't attacking the author/translator, it was more of a fun way to mock the numerous reviews on many novels on this website that blindly vote 5 stars, contribute nothing to the discussion and more often then not are completely based on nothing but the cover image.Unrivaled Medicine God
doast23: just so cliche whit the "evil god " and "good god" that a redflag of an 50iq author no one is realy evil in fantasy setting and the mc is "good man" more like stupid naive and wussCthulhu Gonfalon
Oddballs: Seriously how is this ranked so high? I mean I know my comment will be erased like all my previous comments on other novels but still.
How is the MC even betrayed? The dude literally walked up and stabbed the guy in the chest like some cheater who paid off his opponent if anything I was happy that he was tricked as the guy is literally retarded and then he died? What?? What is this Sword Art online 2.0?
The plot literally jumps from him dying to all of the sudden waking up in the past and he accepts it within seconds/minutes of waking up no problem.
It then jumps to him solving all his family problems and ends up in game where it is suppose to be the first day of the game going live. Instead I don't know what the author was smoking but it feels like the game has been live for years as all of a sudden "elites" and guilds are popping out of nowhere with no real explanation on their backgrounds other than the characters being flat with no real character other than antagonizing the MC.
Don't even get me started on the ridiculous 57000 exp required to level up to like 80% of level 2. I literally felt my balls hurt and want to smash my sexy laptop after reading this crap.
12 chapters in and I feel like this story is one of the worst pieces of crap I have ever seen. There are tons of stories better than this pile of crap ranked a lot lower and somehow this is near the top? Please if you are going to treat your readers as retards as least make it slightly believable Qidian.Reborn: Super God of War
Sithlord: Its not just because a female mc introduced at the start of the novel indicates the probability of a harem. It also means that with the rise of the mc the author would find ways to make the fmc also rise , for which he uses cliche, stupid, boring and repetitive plots. Like special physique, 1 fortuitous encounter elped her rise 100 ranks, mysterous and super duper powerful family background, find some random super expert as master who thinks the mc is not good enough for the fmc and will make the mc work harder for acknowledgment.Summoning the Holy Sword
Sithlord: If the female mc comes at the beginning of the novel, by experience it has a 99% probability of being trash.Summoning the Holy Sword
Naruto is Reincarnated
AhraManyu: There's 'romance', not Romance. I can't write that for ****. Of course there will be that kind of ******* between characters but I will never actually develop a romance. There are couples but that's all there is to it and it's only natural.
Also, I never forced romance in my novel. I don't know where you got that from. I didn't force the romance, rather, I would say that I forced a character in the story.
And yes, I answer this four months later.Life Hunter
Bojayjay: In contrast, because of your review, it drove me to edit the chapters with repetitive parts, but I only got to get rid of a little because those contain the thoughts of the person, so I only got to rid of the dialogues.Dark Lord of Tartarus
Dark Lord of Tartarus
Dark Lord of Tartarus · C26
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Rebirth of a broken demoness. · C11
Hest: The ability to read chapters from the future....Reborn: Apocalypse - Volume 3
Legend of the Gunslinger Mage · C52
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