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    Technomancer: Genesis

    Magical Realism Reincarnation Magic Original Fantasy Kingdom Build Weak to Strong Kingdom Building Where is my contract

    4.2

    A quantum physicist with eidetic memory reincarnates in a world of magic. Born in upper nobility, Ezra must balance his pursuit of understanding the world around him, gaining power, and triumphing over the political power struggles that his family is dragged into while using modern knowledge, intellectual prowess and technology to advance his combat capabilities and develop his dominion. _________________________________________________ Disclaimers: 1. This is dual hosted, on webnovel and on Royal Road. If I get a contract I might take it down from there. 2. The novel starts off with a low word count because I did not think that this would gain a following of sorts. After chapter 8 the word count increases to 1k to 1.6k words. Right now my minimum word count is 1.1k but I normally write 1.2k words and above. 3. There will be detailed explanations for certain things in the book if you don't like that then this is not the novel for you. 4. I will try to limit the info dumps as much as possible and release it into bite-sized bits. 5. The novel is not yet fully edited as of this writing, I publish chapters as soon as I finish them. 6. The novel is parental guidance. There will be cussing and some swear words in chapters. 7. Beliefs, stances and opinions of characters in the novel do not represent the beliefs and ideologies of the author 8. Update is one chapter a week for the moment. Editor: NONE Map of Fulmen: https://ibb.co/3MGkzmz

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DugwayKid: I love this story. And was happy to read the authors note that he will not abandon this story. I am constantly looking forward too what will happen next. And the development of the authors world. Kudos and keep writing.

Technomancer: Genesis
3 months ago

VoidGod157: 10 out of 10 I have no words to express how disappointed I was to reach the end thus far(latest chapter at the time of this review was 132) nor do I have any to show how excited I am for more.

Technomancer: Genesis
4 months ago

mitre: Hi earl thanks for the chapter I have a request I understand you've become busy again wishing you all the best in what you're doing (school I assume) so on the chapters could you write them and not upload them then whenever you can upload maybe 1 or 2 or even 3 chapters at a go? Cause anticipation might kill us lol thanks

Technomancer: Genesis · C132
4 months ago
Thank you for finding the time to critique my work. I try my best to find the time to write a reply to those that have given a lengthy review, yes this was never a novel meant for profit so I am sorry for the erratic updates. As for my plans, I was planning to put multiple points of view on this novel, to begin with, akin to Game of Thrones, though certainly not of the same calibre. The main plot is set in stone and I am really sorry for the updates. What happens isn't that I lack ideas on what to put in next, rather, I get sucked into the story too much and prioritize it instead of other tasks. I try so much to be scientifically accurate as possible and when I hope that when I publish on Amazon, I will find competent technical editors. So what people read on this site is definitely the final incarnation of this story.
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TheWiseOldMan: As requested in Chapter 129, this Old Man shall write you a review. I have been watching and reading this for a while and now I feel I shall share my two cents. If you don’t want a review but those quick ratings, just scroll to the bottom for my scores.

The story the author has brought to us is a tale of reincarnation, magical combat, and kingdom building. It’s refreshing in the wake of not being half-baked. There is world building and behind the scenes hints of a developed and thought out main plot line. As far as web novels go, there is a nice cast of characters that are beyond the standard cardboard cutout that so plagues web novels in general. Reincarnation aside, the first volume of his ‘infantile mischief’ was different and amusing.

I find the MC witty, smart, and full of potential. The beginning introduction background of him is a mixture of interesting and necessary. If you have read other reviews that spoil some of the intro, you’ll see some lambasting the author for not ‘science-ing correctly.’ To those I ask, pray tell what is the most correct theory, the least contentious, i.e., one that won’t cause someone to disagree. The answer is none, you can’t please everyone. If anything I look at the whole former emotionless physicist background as one that justifies the characters growth, setbacks, and knowledge. I’m not looking at it as fact, right or wrong, nor should I jump upon the author for a characters thoughts that probably are not the author’s. It’s not always a reflection you know. I’m looking for the story element and it is decent.

Their is great potential for this novel, and I feel some early reviews are not justifiable in their non-constructive remarks. Having also been on the scene of web novels for years and translated web novels as well. I have seen grammar that has your eyes see colors, causes your brain to malfunction, and your mouth to say “WTF.” The only issues in grammar I see are commas placed wrongly or unnecessarily, and the few sentences with some words misplaced. For someone without an editor, it’s good enough and is not on the scale of ruining immersion. As you can likely see already, I favor commas too much as well.

Good things said, let’s speak of updates. ‘Aye, there’s the rub.’ I will say my score is being nice at 2 stars. Their is certainly a priority of education for the author’s own life and that is understandable. I daresay, they don’t see this as a main source of income, nor perhaps are motivated by monetary means to pump out chapters. That aside, if one wishes to garner attention and more readers, a stable update time with minimal deviation is key. I’m not asking for more chapters for selfish reasons, but stating the obvious that for this platform, stability of updates will get you more readers than if the work is actually good, passable, or just not at all. Let me direct you to those 14chp release nonsense translations you see in the powerstone rankings. I can name a few that are utter trope tripe.

This last and final tidbit is more opinionated, but please consider making the chapters at least 2k word count. Often the 2.5k count to the high 4K is a more pleasurable read. Again though, if that is asking a bit much, consider more releases of shorter chapters.

Also please make sure to update your synopsis disclaimer.


Writing 4.4/5 - Seen much worse, needs proofing, good

Story development 4.7/5 - good but updates hamper it

World building 5/5 - The map shows dedication, good lore

Characters 4.8/5 - Some supporters need more shine

Updates 2/5 - Fix this and you’ll gain for sure

Technomancer: Genesis
4 months ago

TheWiseOldMan: As requested in Chapter 129, this Old Man shall write you a review. I have been watching and reading this for a while and now I feel I shall share my two cents. If you don’t want a review but those quick ratings, just scroll to the bottom for my scores.

The story the author has brought to us is a tale of reincarnation, magical combat, and kingdom building. It’s refreshing in the wake of not being half-baked. There is world building and behind the scenes hints of a developed and thought out main plot line. As far as web novels go, there is a nice cast of characters that are beyond the standard cardboard cutout that so plagues web novels in general. Reincarnation aside, the first volume of his ‘infantile mischief’ was different and amusing.

I find the MC witty, smart, and full of potential. The beginning introduction background of him is a mixture of interesting and necessary. If you have read other reviews that spoil some of the intro, you’ll see some lambasting the author for not ‘science-ing correctly.’ To those I ask, pray tell what is the most correct theory, the least contentious, i.e., one that won’t cause someone to disagree. The answer is none, you can’t please everyone. If anything I look at the whole former emotionless physicist background as one that justifies the characters growth, setbacks, and knowledge. I’m not looking at it as fact, right or wrong, nor should I jump upon the author for a characters thoughts that probably are not the author’s. It’s not always a reflection you know. I’m looking for the story element and it is decent.

Their is great potential for this novel, and I feel some early reviews are not justifiable in their non-constructive remarks. Having also been on the scene of web novels for years and translated web novels as well. I have seen grammar that has your eyes see colors, causes your brain to malfunction, and your mouth to say “WTF.” The only issues in grammar I see are commas placed wrongly or unnecessarily, and the few sentences with some words misplaced. For someone without an editor, it’s good enough and is not on the scale of ruining immersion. As you can likely see already, I favor commas too much as well.

Good things said, let’s speak of updates. ‘Aye, there’s the rub.’ I will say my score is being nice at 2 stars. Their is certainly a priority of education for the author’s own life and that is understandable. I daresay, they don’t see this as a main source of income, nor perhaps are motivated by monetary means to pump out chapters. That aside, if one wishes to garner attention and more readers, a stable update time with minimal deviation is key. I’m not asking for more chapters for selfish reasons, but stating the obvious that for this platform, stability of updates will get you more readers than if the work is actually good, passable, or just not at all. Let me direct you to those 14chp release nonsense translations you see in the powerstone rankings. I can name a few that are utter trope tripe.

This last and final tidbit is more opinionated, but please consider making the chapters at least 2k word count. Often the 2.5k count to the high 4K is a more pleasurable read. Again though, if that is asking a bit much, consider more releases of shorter chapters.

Also please make sure to update your synopsis disclaimer.


Writing 4.4/5 - Seen much worse, needs proofing, good

Story development 4.7/5 - good but updates hamper it

World building 5/5 - The map shows dedication, good lore

Characters 4.8/5 - Some supporters need more shine

Updates 2/5 - Fix this and you’ll gain for sure

Technomancer: Genesis
4 months ago

Daoist_Lee: This is a rather enjoyable read. Character progression and plot development are both done really well. Side characters are also well fleshed out and likable. The parents are also very well done and the whole family dynamic is wholesome. Overall a good read I hope the story gets a good conclusion is somewhat stable in the updates. Thanks to the author for letting the readers know of any upcoming hiatuses or changes in scheduling.

Technomancer: Genesis
4 months ago

TenZhanLongNostril: This story is the BOMB.COM

Technomancer Genesis in my opinion is the best among all the stories on webnovel, this platform is great but unfortunately people mostly seem to be into the slice of like stories. I much rather escape to the awesome action packed Science-Fantasy world Earldennison has carefully created to feel so real. The quality of the writing is superb as is the development and of the characters and rationale of the conflicts withing the novel.

Technomancer: Genesis
4 months ago

the_fallen_watcher: And how is he to tell the difference between a man and any other animal especially when looking for strong magical beasts or in the middle of battle 🤨

Technomancer: Genesis · C131
4 months ago

Treviisolion: Magical cloak that hides his aura.

Technomancer: Genesis · C131
4 months ago
It does for me, View More

TwinShot: The map link no longer works 😯

Technomancer: Genesis · C0
4 months ago
Fulmen is the Earldom of the Blackfyre's the empire is way bigger than the map. View More

Titivillus: Fulmen is the whole Kingdom or just his father territory?

Technomancer: Genesis · C108
4 months ago

cbw1: about it being unedited, its not too bad i have not spotted anything that broke immersion so its all good:D

Technomancer: Genesis · C130
4 months ago

NSNChi: great novel ! I hope to read to the end .

Technomancer: Genesis · C130
4 months ago

Myaurico: Thanks for the work

Technomancer: Genesis · C130
4 months ago

Sheenius: I don't get why everyone wants those spies to be disposed of like nothing... Finally we get some plotdevelopment and some tease for one of the future antagonists, and you guys just throw everything out of the window 🤔 some people read way too much superficial stuff of some braindead authors without any depth to their story's 🤷

Technomancer: Genesis · C130
4 months ago

Treviisolion: You know I actually want some of this information to filter it’s way back to the Rex Imperium. I have a feeling he would just laugh and say, “If he proves himself, then I will make him my heir, btw I’m retiring in six month.” He seems like the kind of guy who would happily throw all the responsibility and power to someone he knows can manage it better and has good morals from what little we’ve seen of him. Definitely will be interesting to see what comes next.

Technomancer: Genesis · C129
4 months ago

Ranmza: Ty for the chapter

Technomancer: Genesis · C129
4 months ago

flamestrider: people seem to complain about the 'no magic'... did they fail to read the title of this story?

Technomancer: Genesis · C83
4 months ago

Unkn0wN71: Thanks for the reply! I've enjoyed the story so far, enough that I shared my thoughts and hopes with you. I'm glad you are still taking the time to read and respond to reviews and I hope that as you continue writing I'm the future you can focus on quality over quantity. I know many on this site may not be as vocal as the ones who constantly request chapter dumps, but I'm sure there are plenty including myself who prefer quality rather than having chapters with 'holes' in them. Keep up the good work and I hope for both your success on here and your ventures outside of writing.

Technomancer: Genesis
4 months ago

Carver: This is a nicely paced kingdom building novel. There are very few original ideas, but the execution is fantastic. The antagonists are not one dimensional and there is a hint of a very large conspiracy.

Technomancer: Genesis · C129
4 months ago
Very good points, thanks for your evaluation of some of my characters' shortcomings, and I admit it is bad writing on my part and I am by no means a professional author. However, I'd like to address that because of my poor writing skills, I failed to express to the reader what Heinrich meant. What he wanted was the actual inner workings of the bank, managerial aspects and financial aspects and not the client part of the whole organization, and since the bank has a highly secure bank end, he could not easily put agents inside. I also forgot to Imply that they already applied for a loan from one of their other merchant agents. So I apologize for that.
As for Erela, I won't spoil her for you, but yes, I guess I lacked sufficient dialogue with her to expand on her as a character and also my foreshadowing skills are lacking. But as for her mindset, it just is the typical mindset of a noble in their world but her point of view is so obscured because of the office she possesses. I know you know of what a brilliant man who is indoctrinated by ideological concepts can do.

As for your personal hopes, I'd like to address that so far I don't think I have introduced a chapter that does not contribute to the main plot, all of what the reader synthesizes so far will affect the main plot in the future, even the character development is a plot driver and will let you into a glimpse of what path characters will choose when push comes to shove.
All of your other wishes for the novel are within the scopes of my plans and I have a rough idea on the things that will unfold. Although I do admit that the physics part is time intensive since I am trying to develop somewhat new physics in the book just to explain the magic part, while I do enjoy physics but my background is in computer science so there will be definitely some shortcomings until I get a technical editor when I publish on Amazon. And as you can see the protagonist is trying a different approach to magic so that non-magicians can use it as well. The world in itself is complex and I have strived to design it so that everything is intermingled with one another creating a dynamically realistic world that is actually more than what the readers assume.
Thank you for reading my novel. View More

Unkn0wN71: I enjoy this story a lot for what it has been so far and what it looks like it will build into.

Things I like:
1. Modern science + fantasy world
2. Kingdom building
3. Intrigue
4. Good fight descriptions
5. Mc starts as a newborn
6. Expanded knowledge of magic system
7. Mc has a potential love interest

Spoilers below
Parts of the story that could be improved:
1. Some characters don't fit well within the context of the situation or are simply not explained at all.
I.e. erela - while I understand there should be obstacles and disagreement the mc must overcome, this character just feels so out of place. Perhaps there will be more explanation about her later but her actions from my point of view were not conveyed to the extent of what a fully fleshed out character would do. Instead of having her just show up and begin immediately detracting from an otherwise pleasant environment, we could have had a little more build up. You could have shown a conversation between her and Hestia showing her negativity towards the rumors of changes happening in this territory, could have shown her speaking or trying to subvert Hestia after the first day etc. These would have shown that outside of being obtrusive and obnoxious she had a larger IQ to go along with her large magic which has been espoused as synonymous throughout the novel. Her interactions with the mc overall felt very forced and out of place without much build up and simply base level reasoning.

2. Even the smart or crafty characters are surprisingly dense at times. For example the people from this cartel as it were they want to know how the bank works but based on the descriptions in the novel it doesn't seem like it would be hard to figure out. They could simply go there and propose to take out a loan have the 3 types of contacts explained to them and do the math from there themselves.

Personal hopes for future of novel:
1. Furthering of development of love interest and more development of the side characters outside of having them run into trouble. I enjoy learning about the op ways of fighting they learned from the mc or projects they're working on doesn't have to be oh no assassins and minor plot devices inserted :)

2. More fights!

3. More magic + science learning

4. army or squad warfare where mc's op analyzing ability comes into play, and not just oh yeah we brought bombs and guns to the swords/magic fight.

Overall I don't have too many things to complain about, sure there might be more typos than average but we are reading and enjoying this novel for free and the author has done a decent job communicating about their status and ability to produce the story.

This has been quite interesting so far please keep producing when you have the time. Thank you

Technomancer: Genesis
4 months ago

Unkn0wN71: I enjoy this story a lot for what it has been so far and what it looks like it will build into.

Things I like:
1. Modern science + fantasy world
2. Kingdom building
3. Intrigue
4. Good fight descriptions
5. Mc starts as a newborn
6. Expanded knowledge of magic system
7. Mc has a potential love interest

Spoilers below
Parts of the story that could be improved:
1. Some characters don't fit well within the context of the situation or are simply not explained at all.
I.e. erela - while I understand there should be obstacles and disagreement the mc must overcome, this character just feels so out of place. Perhaps there will be more explanation about her later but her actions from my point of view were not conveyed to the extent of what a fully fleshed out character would do. Instead of having her just show up and begin immediately detracting from an otherwise pleasant environment, we could have had a little more build up. You could have shown a conversation between her and Hestia showing her negativity towards the rumors of changes happening in this territory, could have shown her speaking or trying to subvert Hestia after the first day etc. These would have shown that outside of being obtrusive and obnoxious she had a larger IQ to go along with her large magic which has been espoused as synonymous throughout the novel. Her interactions with the mc overall felt very forced and out of place without much build up and simply base level reasoning.

2. Even the smart or crafty characters are surprisingly dense at times. For example the people from this cartel as it were they want to know how the bank works but based on the descriptions in the novel it doesn't seem like it would be hard to figure out. They could simply go there and propose to take out a loan have the 3 types of contacts explained to them and do the math from there themselves.

Personal hopes for future of novel:
1. Furthering of development of love interest and more development of the side characters outside of having them run into trouble. I enjoy learning about the op ways of fighting they learned from the mc or projects they're working on doesn't have to be oh no assassins and minor plot devices inserted :)

2. More fights!

3. More magic + science learning

4. army or squad warfare where mc's op analyzing ability comes into play, and not just oh yeah we brought bombs and guns to the swords/magic fight.

Overall I don't have too many things to complain about, sure there might be more typos than average but we are reading and enjoying this novel for free and the author has done a decent job communicating about their status and ability to produce the story.

This has been quite interesting so far please keep producing when you have the time. Thank you

Technomancer: Genesis
4 months ago

cbw1: what do u mean u did not think you would get such a following, this is easily one of the best storie in this genre, what i like most is that there is a system to this magic, i mean you explain it, there are tests and stuff, things are not explained as just @magic@ and that si it , maybe with the exception oh how the mc got transported but that is trivial and can probably be explained later when more of the magic's systems are discovered :D

Technomancer: Genesis · C129
4 months ago

FleetingClouds: I think it's good so far. It's sometimes less story driven and has Bits of slice of life every once in a while, but I like it.
I Hope they get Heinrich somehow or at least finally realize they are Constantly being spied upon. The two flys are annoying as hell

Technomancer: Genesis · C129
4 months ago

Tenkay: I hope u continue to write this story. If nothing else we need to find it what happens with that town governing competition!

Thanks for the chapter!!

Technomancer: Genesis · C129
4 months ago

Kingdombuild3: Hmm, I think because they will probably play a major part in the plot that is why the author gives a lot of info. Remember what the spies get the spies will report. Besides they are not ordinary spies, they have high bearing. Plus they have access to that magic cloaking cloth that Ezra wants to get his hands into, pay attention at the little details because from what I've read the author uses that to drive his plot forward.

Technomancer: Genesis · C129
4 months ago

cbw1: man if he used less words to describe everything , the story would turn into, wrza killed dog, erza ate his mum spanked him then he discovered electricity. end of chapter, i like this pace id like more ... but if it went faster tehre would e barely be any... meat to the bones...:D

Technomancer: Genesis · C129
4 months ago

Kingdombuild3: I think he means that you review his novel and give it stars on the front page. I was planning to do a review but I am waiting until the third volume but I guess that won't happen any time soon.

Technomancer: Genesis · C129
4 months ago

Tercyduk: So far development is good but I guess the pace is kinda slow, I know you want to describe the details and the building, but with the dose you gave, it seems slow for one chapter.

And damn man, you put this spy is annoying like he always appear here and there and it raise my curiosity even more and sometime I wanna beat this one

Technomancer: Genesis · C129
4 months ago

Sheenius: This is great! Finally we shift a bit from the kingdom building to erzas personal power :3 I really enjoy both, but some action is nice once in a while 😁 somehow I wish for half a year academy arc even though the teachers would worship Erza really fast 😁

Technomancer: Genesis · C129
4 months ago
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