LazyBear

3yr

Commented

Do you believe in Magic? As a child with an endless supply of money, I went to various circuses where I saw the so-called Magicians perform tricks and entertain the crowd with their antics, pulling a rabbit out of their hats, or making something disappear. I knew that they weren't real, that their magic was nothing but a very good set of skillful manipulations of the crowd and their incredibly helpful props.

Percy Jackson: The God of Magic

Book&Literature · CORNBRINGER

LazyBear

3yr

Commented

Wait a sec, you are telling me that the orphanage left a 1 year old go out into the city by himself?

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Fangs of the sea, Fenris! (One Piece fanfic)

Anime & Comics · Brainstorming

LazyBear

3yr

Commented

It's not a bad story so far, but you should polish your grammar a bit more. As for the MC, I like his power, it fits pretty well with the rest of the cursed techniques and personality wise I don't think there's been enough time to show that much of it. Anyways so far so good, keep it up

ch 0 6 Disrespect

JuJutsu kaisen - Vanished

Anime & Comics · AndyWhite

LazyBear

3yr

Commented

Good chapter

ch 0 5 Frost

Of Blood & Darkness A Marvel Fanfic

Anime & Comics · lazinessaboveall

LazyBear

3yr

Commented

I thought he was bullet proof

"I'm fine," Zagreus answered. A few bullets had hit him in the back, but they cause nothing more than flesh wounds that already healed up.

Of Blood & Darkness A Marvel Fanfic

Anime & Comics · lazinessaboveall

LazyBear

3yr

Commented

I need you to get aaaaaaall the way off my back about how I got these IDs

"No, it was super easy, barely an inconvenience," Michael answered.

Of Blood & Darkness A Marvel Fanfic

Anime & Comics · lazinessaboveall

LazyBear

3yr

Commented

Ok.... HOW?? Again, he is 13.

All the money he got from the manga publishing company was invested back to buy shares of the company till he blackmailed the owner to sell the company to him or that he would stop serializing the Manga after which he reluctantly sold him the company. Now he was super rich and was making huge amounts of money from all the merchandise sales and the company profits, and It took only an hour every week to make the chapters because of transmutation.

The Alchemist Hero : Alchemo

Anime & Comics · Daonexus

LazyBear

3yr

Commented

This I like

While he had success with martial arts he had failed in creating or using Ki, maybe it was because of the different universal laws but he could not create Ki, thus his hopes of crushing missiles with bare hands like Hayato Fuurinji were dashed but he still understood and practised all the martial arts.

The Alchemist Hero : Alchemo

Anime & Comics · Daonexus

LazyBear

3yr

Commented

I'm calling bull on this. He can't have perfectly trained his muscles into pink muscles already when he is still 13, his body hasn't stopped developing at all. While Kenichi got pretty buff during the manga he didn't reach that lvl until much latter. I suppose he could do it with his medical knowledge, but even then I'd say he would be cutting it pretty close to UA.

From that knowledge and with the help of Fuurinji's Anatomy control he had perfectly trained all his muscles into pink muscles and then started creating his own martial arts style suitable to use in conjunction with his alchemy.

The Alchemist Hero : Alchemo

Anime & Comics · Daonexus

LazyBear

3yr

Commented

I think that mastering the mind arts doesn't give you control over your mind. From what I know it was more about stopping people from reading your memories and looking at the memories of other people. I mean, I guess it could give you a perrfect memory. Also pretty sure it's impossible to completely control your emotions, unless you mean that he woulnd't show them on the outside and still be able to think calmly under pressure. Those are my "complains"/questions

First, his Mind arts over the years he had completely mastered his mind arts and thus he now had complete control over his mind, he now had a perfect memory, was able to control his emotional outbursts, and he had an absolute mental barrier to stop people from using mental skills on him.

The Alchemist Hero : Alchemo

Anime & Comics · Daonexus

LazyBear

3yr

Commented

I haven't watched AoT but I'm pretty sure Naruto is more ****ed up. At least in terms of danger levels

He released a shaky breath of relief that even though MHA was dangerous, it wasn't on the scale of Naruto, One piece or worst-case scenario Attack on Titan.