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Reading Status: C0
Okay, just don't make it a harem or make an idiot MC, I'm tired of reading that guy.................................................................................................................................................................... View More
Reborn Might Guy
5 days ago

yamachy: Sorry for bad English.
Here a normal fic about semi gamer, op glich and fast pace story yeah I like those, 4 star here.

But after Minecraft final chapter the MC become a friking S*x addict, pick a useless character for his s*x activity in his 13yr old body! That look like 16 and have s*x every forking days, man what an idiot.
I pull all my hope after that useless chapter/plot, why do author in this platform (Webnovel) always slip a forking useless S*x friking chapter. This is why forum like SV and SB have a friking 18ban rule so a new author can write story with good story flow, and not just trow a friking useless scene.
2 star for this, so yeah overall 3 🌟

Playing in fate
1 week ago
Whell, I think it was supposed to be Unforeseen Simulation Joint View More
Capacitance · C16
1 week ago
It doesn't work ... Li Qiye will not be with anyone like that, take that woman who became pregnant with him to have the next guardian, that was the only one he stayed with during the novel, I am not saying that he already had several in the past, I'm just saying what was shown, I still think he better make them maids just like he did before View More

_Cooldude_: Finally su rou entered and please add su rou and su mei in the harem definitely. Man it's a good idea to give mc's all women those 13 immortal physiques so they don't be too behind him.

Li Qiye Reincarnated as Chu Feng in MGA · C5
1 week ago
Eh ... you know that Li Qiye is not going to be with any woman right? Take that woman from the old country or wherever, she was the only one in the 9 worlds and probably in the entire novel, so a harem here wouldn’t work, unless you make them maids just like he did in the 9 worlds View More
Li Qiye Reincarnated as Chu Feng in MGA · C5
1 week ago
no harem View More
Rebirth in ATG as Haku Yuki · C0
2 weeks ago

Kuka14: Hail the anti-harem sect!

Rebirth in ATG as Haku Yuki · C0
2 weeks ago

Chubbikis: It’s an ok book, the MC is a man child with the whole Japanese MC “I’ll return kindness with kindness and and hate with hate 100 times over” it’s played out and immature. The world building is fine it’s a pretty generic cultivation world. The power system is also pretty generic. I’m not going to continue reading but I recommend going to chapter 10 to make a decision

Re-Birth of a Genius. Creator/Destroyer
2 weeks ago

AnActualLivingPoet: The story started out quite well, it was interesting, it had action, but it turned to sh*t at the 200 or so chapter mark.

I mean don't get me wrong, your writing quality and updates are still awesome, but the way you introduced the heroine's from Danmachi was in a word slutty.

They became generic Dating Sim gals on easy mode. They easily- no brainlessly fell for a pathetic guy who can "Emphatize" with them. In 3 mere months nonetheless. (F*ck! I can do that, hold my beer)

I won't go into anymore details about this as I've already read a few reviews that were more specific about this topic.

As for Vahn, I just plainly don't like him. You have great skills author, but Vahn is ****. He's just a cheap knock off of Bell. Without his plot armor "The path" he can't even compare. He's just a sad child that didn't know how to belong in the world, but somehow became a great socialite that could get every heroine(although braindead) to bed with only a few interactions.

Give an autistic person a chance to reincarnate as a normal one, then give him "The Path", a handsome face and a large dick. I guarantee he'll do a better job than this faggot.

Anyways,
Writing quality - 5

Stability in updates - 5

Story Development - 1 (because 7/10 chapters are more on Vahn's daily life flirting with who knows how many girls especially in the early chapters)

Character Design - 1 (You designed Vahn enough said)

World Background - 1 (Danmachi is a great world don't get me wrong, but it's nothing new. I already read about it in the original don't want to read the same thing here)

Overall : 2.6

Little advice bro, criticism isn't bad, you can learn and grow from them. But if you insist that everyone is wrong and you are right then you'll never be number 1.

Endless Path : Infinite Cosmos
1 month ago
I died laughing here with your comment, but seriously, I even endured Ein's fanfic, but it gets to the point where unfortunately I have to agree with this exaggerated harem and sex often, although I don't say that the story is bad or anything like that. type. View More

hiiamme123: What credibility? Are they a movie star?
Short answer: no, so they can not ‘ruin’ it you dipsh*t .
Who cares if they finished your unfinished ‘book’, he/she can still comment on it. They have the freedom of speech.
I am not even going to go on about the leniency bit it is simply a moronic word to use.
If they are a troll you are a piece of sh*t waiting to get a prize of a pat on the back because you need the confidence boost you pathetic excuse of a human,
e.g. you have bots giving you fake 5 star reviews giving yourself a nonexistent high five for faking your ‘ability’ to write ‘good’ relationships.

Get your childish overinflated ego and shove it right up your god forsaken a** where your so called ‘book’ came from.


Ps. it is a stupid excuse. ‘oh my wonderful almighty mc that I made is just too perfect, all the imaginary girls will of course fall deeply in love after knowing the amazingness of my mc for a few days, I do not have a hidden trauma from my past so please make me my mc so I can get all that p*ssy ahhh I get hard just thinking about it’

Is what you are probably thinking

PPs. go to a doctor quick your brain is probably deformed.

Endless Path : Infinite Cosmos
1 month ago
Reading Status: C0
I haven't read it yet, but this synopsis left me confused..................................................................................................... View More
Soul Power System
1 month ago
Reading Status: C0
Vandalieu has the power of death, and I don’t think a golem could have, could make the golem have elemental powers of earth and stone, make constructs, other golems and things like that, and because it’s a golem it would be physically stronger than the living being and not to mention the stamina that does not exist in it, with the exception of not having mana to regenerate the body of earth or stone.

Although I haven't read this fanfic yet, but I wish you luck View More
This Golem Mage doesn't want a fourth time
2 months ago
More please View More
Akame Ga Kill: Garou · C37
5 months ago
I had a little idea, let MC learn the Great Buddha Way, as it basically makes use of vitality as well as greatly increasing arm strength, and can also make full use of Hakai without being destroyed together. View More
Ancient Saiyan in ATG · C2
6 months ago
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Solo Leveling on Danmachi · C0
6 months ago
more please View More
Akame Ga Kill: Garou · C33
6 months ago
More please! View More
Solo Leveling on Danmachi · C10
6 months ago
First View More
Solo Leveling on Danmachi · C10
6 months ago

Kuromego: Or Danmachi and do Bell's OOC, making brave or something and the love interest Tiona Hiryute, I like her lol

Hail the Ant King · C18
6 months ago
Or Danmachi and do Bell's OOC, making brave or something and the love interest Tiona Hiryute, I like her lol View More

General_Paragon: Not planned yet

Hail the Ant King · C18
6 months ago

Kuromego: How about making a fanfic of Sousei on Onmyouji? Being of the manga of course, but instead of adding OC, how about doing OOC on Rokuro, making it badass, but lower the language of course, I'm not saying to make a mc-smelling pussy either.

Hail the Ant King · C18
6 months ago
How about making a fanfic of Sousei on Onmyouji? Being of the manga of course, but instead of adding OC, how about doing OOC on Rokuro, making it badass, but lower the language of course, I'm not saying to make a mc-smelling pussy either. View More

General_Paragon: Not planned yet

Hail the Ant King · C18
6 months ago

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Solo Leveling on Danmachi · C9
6 months ago

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Solo Leveling on Danmachi · C9
6 months ago

Kuromego: More please

Solo Leveling on Danmachi · C9
6 months ago
More please View More
Solo Leveling on Danmachi · C9
6 months ago
Reading Status: C7
Keep writing, currently it has potential to be great 👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻 View More
Solo Leveling on Danmachi
6 months ago

Kuromego: Up

Solo Leveling on Danmachi · C7
6 months ago

Zeffur: thanks for the chapter

Solo Leveling on Danmachi · C7
6 months ago
Is it the enhanced version of Neito Monoma Copy? View More
Adaptation : MHA fanfiction · C2
6 months ago
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