Webnovel Author: empressblackrose09 - Novel Collection

So, it's a love story between a ghost and a living person. An interesting plot indeed. I hope this work should be contracted because it's so unique. Keep up! 🙂

The romance in this novel is just a sub-romance and it wouldn't focus on that. ^_^

This is really interesting on how he just suddenly got this unique ability and even though it's a unique ability but the MC needs to strive harder in order to grow strong. Keep writing! Love this!

I am not much familiar with the plot of Lord of Mysteries since I haven't read it but what I can tell in this fanfic is that, you have a potential to create your own original novel. Keep up on writing! ^_^

I'm loving this novel! It feels like a fantasy version of Spy Kids to me and the details are so great that I myself couldn't help but immerse myself in the novel. Also, I like that this is not the usual OP MC at the beginning. Keep writing! ^_^

The plot is so intense as you immerse yourself into reading on it. The pacing is good which I like it. Waiting for more updates and keep writing! ^_^

The novel is really interesting. A very detailed about the world-building and how the characters interact with each other are unique. For me, it got the Divergent-vibe to me the way how the plot goes on. Keep up on writing! ^_^ My only advice was about your synopsis. Might as well you tone-down a bit because it's too long or much better put a vague description on it so that readers would be curious on how your story goes on. That's all for now. Add this to my library. ^_^

Thanks for the review. ^_^

I am not sure for the romance part since this novel is just the beginning and if I would put romance to it, I think it would be a sub-romance though. As for the harem part, no. I can assure you that there will be nothing like the usual harem trope. Not really sure for now though.

It's too early for me to say this but I can tell you that the MC is an anti-hero but not to the point that he would do villainous deeds without reasons. ^_^ Also, thank you for leaving a review! I'll do my best to update more chapters ^_^

It feels like you are really in the real-life historical drama when reading through the scenes that it makes you to fully immerse on the story. I'm not much into fully historical romance but I love this one. Good job! ^_^ Keep writing! ^_^

First of all, I love your book cover! This will help you drawn new readers because of how cool it looks however, I suggest that you may add some at least a little filler on it that would make it like a 'wow' factor if new readers would see it. ^_^ Second, your synopsis. It can be considered part of a prologue or chapter 01 because it's too long. I suggest that you may summarize it or make it short. Put a little vague detail on it but not too much so that your readers would be curious on how the story of the plot goes on. Third and last. The plot. I get it that this might be the usual amnesiac MC that got thrown to another world (harsh word for to be thrown xD xD xD) but even if that is the case, I like how you put an effort to the plot and the interaction of Milo and Lok that seems like a natural to me. Keep writing! ^_^