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Danada

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not a review. i will change the score later probably. QUESTION!! have spoilers I don't know if matters since is about the beginning of the story. I want to know if the lack of details in certain moments, that bothered me, happens frequently in this novel or if I'm impatient and some of these details are explained later in the story, like when he was choosing his character's race, the Race of the Elves have many variations and with him choosing the High Elves I thought there would be a strong reaction from the NPCs since the high Elves are, as described in the story considered Nobility and the true Elves, so I thought the appearance of one of them would be a shock. right after the MC's encounter with the npc I thought that his lack of reaction would have been because he couldn't identify very that he was an High Elve or know all the difference between the variations of Elves since maybe (I assume) that all Elves have in general one similar appearance, but some time after this npc or his daughter (I don't remember) calls him High Elve so theory discarted. you can say that the lack of reaction was because of their God's warned themabout something, i don't know, but by the description of the High Elve's Race it looked like they were compared demi gods or whatever since it had written that they are depicted as supreme beings, so I thought he deserved a bit of reaction from the npcs. another moment that bothered me was when that guild that was looking at him him sleeping under a tree and after their talk they just disappeared, I expected there would be some interaction between them and the MC about the training as they were, apparently, in a training location, I felt their appearance was kind of forced and that bothered me, i don't know maybe I thought too much about it in this one. another moment was when the MC taught Vivian how to see the progress of her weapon skills and it seemed like an important function to learn and i wish she had told the blacksmith right away, i know she said the function is not very important for people of higher levels, and as I stopped reading the story a little while after that, I don't know if she talks about it to anyone or it disappears as if it didn't exist since it's just a minor detail. The MC wanting to learn how to be a Blacksmith, there's been no mention of him wanting to be one before, this one annoyed me big time and seemed pretty forced. and again I want to know if the storyline is going to have a lot of these "loopholes" because I know I'm going to get frustrated and probably drop the novel and I wouldn't want to drop a novel that looks promising with features that I care like magic. I heard that this story has a magic system like another story I read a while ago, as I have an interest in stories with magic and with a interesting magic system like that one. I thought that the MC of this story was going to focus on using magic which is my interest, and maybe he will i just didn't got there yet. perhaps this lack of certain detail is due to the author maybe being a novice writer and as the story progresses these minor errors no longer appear. I don't want to put down a story that I would probably read to the end because of these minor lacks of detail at the beginning of the story that I hope don't happen later in the story.
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QUESTION have spoilers I don't know if matters since is about the beginning of the story. I want to know if the lack of details in certain moments, that bothered me, happens frequently in this novel or if I'm impatient and some of these details are explained later in the story, like when he was choosing his character's race, the Race of the Elves have many variations and with him choosing the High Elves I thought there would be a strong reaction from the NPCs since the high Elves are, as described in the story considered Nobility and the true Elves, so I thought the appearance of one of them would be a shock. right after the MC's encounter with the npc I thought that his lack of reaction would have been because he couldn't identify very that he was an High Elve or know all the difference between the variations of Elves since maybe (I assume) that all Elves have in general one similar appearance, but some time after this npc or his daughter (I don't remember) calls him High Elve so theory discarted. you can say that the lack of reaction was because of their God's warned themabout something, i don't know, but by the description of the High Elve's Race it looked like they were compared demi gods or whatever since it had written that they are depicted as supreme beings, so I thought he deserved a bit of reaction from the npcs. another moment that bothered me was when that guild that was looking at him him sleeping under a tree and after their talk they just disappeared, I expected there would be some interaction between them and the MC about the training as they were, apparently, in a training location, I felt their appearance was kind of forced and that bothered me, i don't know maybe I thought too much about it in this one. another moment was when the MC taught Vivian how to see the progress of her weapon skills and it seemed like an important function to learn and i wish she had told the blacksmith right away, i know she said the function is not very important for people of higher levels, and as I stopped reading the story a little while after that, I don't know if she talks about it to anyone or it disappears as if it didn't exist since it's just a minor detail. The MC wanting to learn how to be a Blacksmith, there's been no mention of him wanting to be one before, this one annoyed me big time and seemed pretty forced. and again I want to know if the storyline is going to have a lot of these "loopholes" because I know I'm going to get frustrated and probably drop the novel and I wouldn't want to drop a novel that looks promising with features that I care like magic. I heard that this story has a magic system like another story I read a while ago, as I have an interest in stories with magic and with a interesting magic system like that one. I thought that the MC of this story was going to focus on using magic which is my interest, and maybe he will i just didn't got there yet. perhaps this lack of certain detail is due to the author maybe being a novice writer and as the story progresses these minor errors no longer appear. I don't want to put down a story that I would probably read to the end because of these minor lacks of detail at the beginning of the story that I hope don't happen later in the story.
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i think is kinda confusing

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