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i like the story, but this is hard to read. bad grammar

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why make a story when you dislike the main character i dont't understand his why he is reincarnated, it don't add anything to the story. he is an orphan and didn't get any familial love. So why cut out the mother from the story? I as a reader have no idea why he is acting like a bad guy. just another story going way too fast.