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Overall this is really starting to catch on. Finding myself wanting more. Thank you for the chapter and hope they keep comming.

ch 36 Chapter 36 Making it rain on the System

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I think that with his advancement as a Swordsman as well as Haki devolopment, that Logia is likely out, and Zoan is questionable unless its a Human type. I would pick a Paramecia, something that would synergize with him as a swordsman, perhaps Speed-Speed Fruit ? Would synergize well with his current strengths, and act as a tool that could allow him to escape tricky situations. Its also in the hands of a strong swordsman, a really strong fruit.

I would like to know what your thoughts about MC getting a devil fruit is, if he should get one or not, if yes then what would be a good fit ?even non cañon fruit can be considered, please share me your thoughts on comments.

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Anime & Comics · Silent_stiele

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By all means continue as so. Have been enjoying your story greatly and now that its reaching the starting point of the original timelines i am very curious how things will devolop and what ripples will spread and change the world

Damn, it took me forever to get to this point. Initially I only wanted to do a dozen chapters before getting here, but the ideas came and... anyway, I'll speed up a little.

Seimeigakure: The Hidden Village of Life

Anime & Comics · Cadenadeaventuras

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I wanted to like this novel, the premise sounded fun, the first chapter set a good premise. However over 60 chapters in, and frankly, nothing has been done. It feels like watching anime fillers that serves no purpouse then to add chapters. There has been meetings, that holds no meaning. There have been abilities gained, that is not used. I am ending my reading of this novel 67 chapters. I just can't feel any excitement to even try to read anymore. I do not recomend it.

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Anime & Comics · Odayaka

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5mth

Commented

Better busy then sick. Better late then gone. Welcome back, you have been missed

ch 1034 Giratina and Cocoon of the Stars

I Am The Owner Of A Pokémon Day Care In The Pokémon World

Anime & Comics · bearnard_bear97

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6mth

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So. A lot of to say here, first off. I highly enjoy it, its a new take and the way its being done makes it different. The various ways its intregrated characters are also perfectly fine. The stability of updates however has gotten quite poor compared to before, so this is my biggest worry about it going forward. But overall while the score is 3.6 for me, do give this a try and support the author, I hope this wont get dropped.

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Movies · NunuXD

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Something like this ?

Appearance: Short light blue hair, dark blue eyes, wears a red rectangle shaped glasses sometimes (she's nearsighted, I forgot to write about it in previous chapters...)

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