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One Piece : Sea Devil Sanji · C22
2 hours ago

Cheeky_Monkey: oh hestia already crushing on bell.... weird thats a bit quick

Danmachi: Legend of the Argonauts · C6
12 hours ago

Kilaske: Don't know how to feel about the early bias. Now mc feels just like an extra who's also a butler(waking up the others and leading the fight).

Danmachi: Legend of the Argonauts · C6
12 hours ago
Hah.... so ball will be the cute one and get a harem while mc is ... well there and he will probebly get oc as usual
Well not going to jump to conclutions but i feel its going to become like that haha View More
Danmachi: Legend of the Argonauts · C6
12 hours ago

Obito_Tobi: all this suggestion is nog selfish alone but in fact my intention is to see this story being successfull and become better and better so don't take any offense from my words as i hold none

Reincarnated into the One Piece world with the Zushi-Zushi no Mi · C6
21 hours ago

Obito_Tobi: i don't remember them killing and you are 100% right but must authors that pair their mc with straw hats make their mc evil or a little evil and still be accepted by luffy they simply make a forced story with this that will be dropped fastly

and not only luffy will reject him but all the crew

this fact was simple with cabone gang beige they work with him sure but they didn't trust him at all they allied to survive against big mom this simple fact prove one serious problem in all fanfiction authors all of them try to force things up that's why more than 90% of fanfictions are always dropped because of their forced actions that ruin the story some say they will not follow the story line cause they think it's bad

buddy what you call bad is millions of peoples favorite and saying that like you are better than oda

saying it needed something like you say you know more than oda


hell some idiots made some unreasonable devil fruits like water logia originally this should never exist as water is devil fruit userd weakness and it take away their devil fruit power make them weakned humans not even in their human peak stats but weaker shown luffy in hot springs with brook from Z film

also zoan water based creatures be it fish or mythical they should not exist you turn into a water basef creature jump into sea return back into human and sink this is your fate so useless devil fruits


some have good start but they eventually make forced scenes and actions
all one piece fanfictions does not live to even 1% of the original one piece in my eye all fanfiction does not live to 1% of their original look at fantasy genre or any other they are simply better all of them are by far better than fanfic not only in webnovel but fanfic authors are by far dead last from all type of authors

i challange any author to make his story long without having borng chapters this is how original ones are they are long but was never boring but fanfic if it's long it's boring

simple fanfiction author lack talents to become real authors none of them are expert all are moobs


i have a lot more to talk about but this enough even if i didn't talk even 1% of what in my mind

Reincarnated into the One Piece world with the Zushi-Zushi no Mi · C6
21 hours ago
Secound that View More

Obito_Tobi: this much of ruthless is not needed in fact it's bad yes some ruthless is good but you are overdoing it too much and i don't see any benefits from his staying in baroaque works he should leave and please do stop this romance developpement cause anyone with brain know you develop a love with robin here so please stop cause it's weird for his short stay to develop it and also robin open up after her living with all this organizations and betraying them there is nothing special on mc to make her open up to him in case she would be more carfull around him with his ruthless behavours and her more kind personality so in short it does not fit only if you force it out with your words since it's a simple fact for you that the fall in love even in first sight and all but those things ruin story need to make things reasonable please

Reincarnated into the One Piece world with the Zushi-Zushi no Mi · C6
1 day ago
I may be wrong but you wrote he was going to be samling with the straw hats, if that is to happend he cant be to ruthless luffy will never agree to mat min join if he is to dark, its like his secound instinct knowing if People is Good or bad person . Just saying and having a ruthless person Salming with the strawhats is a party pooper they are dreamers not conqurers sure they kill if they need to but they dont actully go för the kill Every time they fight they leave Most of their opponents alive but sure they kill sometimes but are they ruthless not at all View More
Reincarnated into the One Piece world with the Zushi-Zushi no Mi · C6
1 day ago

Obito_Tobi: this much of ruthless is not needed in fact it's bad yes some ruthless is good but you are overdoing it too much and i don't see any benefits from his staying in baroaque works he should leave and please do stop this romance developpement cause anyone with brain know you develop a love with robin here so please stop cause it's weird for his short stay to develop it and also robin open up after her living with all this organizations and betraying them there is nothing special on mc to make her open up to him in case she would be more carfull around him with his ruthless behavours and her more kind personality so in short it does not fit only if you force it out with your words since it's a simple fact for you that the fall in love even in first sight and all but those things ruin story need to make things reasonable please

Reincarnated into the One Piece world with the Zushi-Zushi no Mi · C6
1 day ago
Lol they are devils ... dont try out your stupid human view on them ,
they are training for rating game etc ofcourse this training will be like that , Ppl need to stop leting the atmospher in rias cannon story to cloud thrir minds .. peacefull? The tree races are in cold war lol , one snees in wrong direction and a full blown war will be starting .their world ia really fkn dangeroùse View More

Peace12345: This is a mostly peaceful world at this point so his family pushing things to far like this does not really make sense. The wars have been over for a very long time so them trying to essentially kill the kids with training makes no sense. Especially when it was stated that he is as strong as an ultimate class already. There are very few humans who can match an ultimate class so they should not be that worried about his trip either. Unless he runs into Griselda, Vasco, or Dulio he should be fine. Also it should not be up to his family who stands by his side. That would make me feel like I was being manipulated instead of loved.

How to survive in the World DxD with Fragment Memories · C16
2 days ago

Marduko: pfffftttt No offense my friend but Do you think where you live is safe? that there is absolutely no chance of someone thinking of breaking in?

Not to mention from the looks of the books we only explored the family and training. There is minimal combat so far.

As for Ultimate class being the strongest? my friend have you ever heard of poison can take out a giant? The world of DxD which is a world full of mythologies and super natural you think a ultimate rank is safe? I mean there is a weapon thaf can kill OPHIS you know? like really?

Yes you can say that the chances of such weapon appearing could be minimal but the chances are there... unless you tell me if you live in such world you going to be like Riser kick back and believe your power of immortality is unbeatable?

How to survive in the World DxD with Fragment Memories · C16
2 days ago

Glitner: Er..... il just point it out ... erzas Magic isent like a skills tree ya know what is their to unlock lol
... you know erza have to buy her armors then store it in the requip space .

It got me a laugh atleast

Natsu Dragneel travelling the Multiverse · C10
2 days ago
Er..... il just point it out ... erzas Magic isent like a skills tree ya know what is their to unlock lol
... you know erza have to buy her armors then store it in the requip space .

It got me a laugh atleast View More
Natsu Dragneel travelling the Multiverse · C10
2 days ago
Why are you making sauske a jelouse girl aswell ? Isent enough with the menma who Always got his "cold" eyes 24/7
And now sauske is starting to feel inferior to him and then their relationship will strain blabla yadayada View More
Namikaze Naruto · C18
3 days ago
It was really Good .. i just it was robin Scwhan instead ufufu View More
One Piece : Sea Devil Sanji · C21
5 days ago
So... Naofmi or whatever his name is will have a slave harem and his brother dont get to have any companions if they arent the older Brothers slave ... hey my name is kaito my girlfreind is my Brothers slave ... sounds kinda .... View More
Rising of the Shield and Spirit Hero · C3
6 days ago
Dropping this cuz he dont like furrys... shame on you View More
Fire Emblem: The Lion's Blade · C4
6 days ago
Why does he run from them ? Free sex and he wont die so itmakes no sense to run. Skiping the whole boat scene was just laizy tsktsk View More
Monster Girl Quest as a Human Character · C15
6 days ago
Its Good , but damn stop writing karna as a she its so annoying View More
Sun Prince · C3
1 week ago
Yeah gotta say this is going downward pretty damn fast, last Chapter the magical iPhone was build by Tony stark i mean comon stop filling the plot holes with **** ... what next Poseidon from dc universe came trough a portal and gave him the water fruit .. its a bit to chaotic for my taste il Think i jump the train here

Honestly the iPhone ruin the whole story , and somone like nami and robin vouldent start fighting over a male so fast not saying its impossible its just way to fast for their characters you know they both got serious trust issuse right i mean not the normal one that 14 year old girls get when their boyfreinds cheat on em i mean me against the world issuse and they just started out with the crew and here he comes and in 2 weeks they are like im going to jump his d b4 you thehe

Its just those 3 things that ruin the story imo if you take away the iPhone and slow down the pace with the girls
And give a reasonble plot for his water fruit , then this story vould have been Gold but meh beggers cant be choosers i guess

Anyway your writing is Good and easy to get , me like

But il jump the train here View More
Ultimate Fruit · C15
1 week ago
BeenThinking he got from Earth to one piece in the same body right ? If so then he wont ever be as strong then as luffy zorro or them guys i mean he har normal Earth body not one piece body ultra fail he will be weaker then usopp im pretty sure People from one piece universe have somthing diffrent in their body cuz ya know even without devil fruit power they can get to the top of the world with hard work and training their normal bodies.... so how is phoneboy going to get trough that huh? Download a app and poff get a one piece body or somthing ? View More
Ultimate Fruit · C12
1 week ago
Lets name him lucas the phoneboy View More
Ultimate Fruit · C12
1 week ago

Glitner: Hah, i kinda hate when a mc comes to a New world and they be like i wanna go Home buhu ... yeah mate you go Home and study to be a nurse or somthing il take your place and hang out with cool ppl and powers ..

"Imo" it Always ruining the feeling of adventure all are happy go and mc is standing in the corner like "i miss mum"...

And why does the authors Always need an explenation for the mc why he is where the crew finds him "i come from Another world" all he could have Said was i woke up in the middle of the sea with no memory

Yet here he is flashing his iPhone and gets some rare fruit for no reason

Other than that i love the story :)

Ultimate Fruit · C7
1 week ago
Nope Tried, will defently drop this ... to much wuxia **** , there is no cultivation in one piece and i know its a fanfic bit if you put cultivation in one piece world the world will suck you better go write some wuxia instead cant belivie your going to ruin this Good world with wuxia crap shame on you

Joke aside it was a bit to much wuxia for me and in my opinion it does not mash well with one piece universe View More
One Piece: Bouny System · C5
1 week ago
Comon stop with the fucking wuxia talk ... its one fucking piece there is no cultivation here its normal training no fucking cultivation ugh il try some chapters more but your writing style lean towards wuxia so i might drop it View More
One Piece: Bouny System · C4
1 week ago
Please dont say this is goi going to be a story where the mc try to hide his power for no reason.
even if he have god level strenght this world vouldent give a **** if he so choose to sell condoms for money or just live a simpel life so why even bother hiding his ability ..... View More
One Psycho 100 · C5
1 week ago
Why do he keep running away from her ... it make no sense he want to go on a adventure with her yet... he runs away from her and leave her this whole Chapter makes no sense at all

And he cant really run away from her tough if she want she can flick him to death or just jog and yawn beseds him running för his life so yet again .... this Chapter makes no sense View More
Monster Girl Quest as a Human Character · C7
2 weeks ago
Isent this exactly the same start as the one with warframe?. Anyway its Good View More
Reincarnated into Destiny Universe · C1
2 weeks ago

ZeroTh: I hope Naruto really stops caring about them .and is not the same as Fanfic "Naruto: Sage Neglected" where he and his family simply begin to mend their relationship

Namikaze Naruto · C7
2 weeks ago
Yeah i really Think he should drop all hes feelings for them he dont need to hate them just make him stop,feeling anything for them , let him treat them like some distant relative or somthing View More
Namikaze Naruto · C7
2 weeks ago
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