_ThisKing_

1mth

Posted

Was great until around chapter 600, after that it becomes like every other bad written xianxia with jade beauties left and right and no actual progession. The protagonist has been stuck in like the second realm of cultivation for like a thousand chapters.

_ThisKing_

5mth

Commented

what

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One Piece: The Unreal Adventure

Anime & Comics · Fallen_Crown

_ThisKing_

1yr

Commented

perfect, godly, divine... that guy is 15, is the narrator some kind of fanboy?

After reaching the realm of Great Spear Master and raising his spear skills to a nearly divine level, Xue Ying’s senses had grown much stronger. Just like how he had discovered the bandits before their ambush, something ahead of him now filled him with terror.

Lord Xue Ying

Eastern · I Eat Tomatoes

_ThisKing_

1yr

Posted

Love it. Its a very good and original book. Love the story, love the characters. The second book starts quite slow and some of the chapters feel like they could be summarized by two sentences. But they were still interesting enough for me to binge read all available chapters. I would absolutely recommend this to anyone.

Shadow Slave

Fantasy · Guiltythree

_ThisKing_

2yr

Posted

Very nice fanfic. I very much recomment this story to everyone. Not having Harry as a protagonist is a breath of fresh air. Quinn kind of is a Mary Sue, but he does make mistakes and learns from them, and everything he can do is earned through hard work.

HP: A Magical Journey [Complete]

Book&Literature · FictionOnlyReader

_ThisKing_

2yr

Commented

Thanks for the chapter. And dont get pressured by readers to up your release rate. 1 chapter a day is already a lot, anything more is just a bonus.

ch 619 Chapter 614: Choices Begets Fortune

Paragon of Sin

Eastern · KevinAscending

_ThisKing_

2yr

Posted

An awesome novel. Got kind of annoyed at the memory loss, but those few chapers are absolutely worth reading to continue this story. Characters are amazing and I love this protagonist. Blessed can be annoying, but thats the whole point of them. I would very much recommend this story to anyone who wants to read a xianxia story of very high quality.

Paragon of Sin

Eastern · KevinAscending

_ThisKing_

2yr

Commented

Through the mask?

Handing me my card back, the sales employee smiled and started serving the next client.

The Author's POV

Fantasy · Entrail_JI

_ThisKing_

2yr

Replied to Gilgamos

Thats what I did? xD

"I finally able to meet you again." She happily smiled while tried to hug the man, but the man awkwardly dodged her hug.

Douluo Dalu: The Legend of Heavenly Ruler

Anime & Comics · Nine_Clouds

_ThisKing_

2yr

Commented

*I was finally able to give birth

'After nine months, I finally able to give a birth.'' She thought while gently touching her baby's face.

Douluo Dalu: The Legend of Heavenly Ruler

Anime & Comics · Nine_Clouds

_ThisKing_

2yr

Commented

*Announce

"Announced that I need to enter a seclusion to breakthrough into the next level!"

Douluo Dalu: The Legend of Heavenly Ruler

Anime & Comics · Nine_Clouds

_ThisKing_

2yr

Commented

*were closed

Spirit Hall, In the supreme pontiff palace, Bibi Dong is calmly sat on her throne while her eyes closed.

Douluo Dalu: The Legend of Heavenly Ruler

Anime & Comics · Nine_Clouds

_ThisKing_

2yr

Commented

*sitting

Spirit Hall, In the supreme pontiff palace, Bibi Dong is calmly sat on her throne while her eyes closed.

Douluo Dalu: The Legend of Heavenly Ruler

Anime & Comics · Nine_Clouds

_ThisKing_

2yr

Commented

*will have, * were flashing

'Xiaogang, if I can't be together with you, then I would have your child as the replacement.' Bibi Dong thought while her eyes are flashing with an indifferent light.

Douluo Dalu: The Legend of Heavenly Ruler

Anime & Comics · Nine_Clouds

_ThisKing_

2yr

Commented

didn't*

''Thank You...'' Bibi Dong hugged him, and this time Xiaogang don't dodge as both of them hugged each other silently.

Douluo Dalu: The Legend of Heavenly Ruler

Anime & Comics · Nine_Clouds

_ThisKing_

2yr

Commented

*have

"Is it because I already been defiled by that man." She gloomily stated, making Xiaogang shifted his gaze away from her.

Douluo Dalu: The Legend of Heavenly Ruler

Anime & Comics · Nine_Clouds

_ThisKing_

2yr

Commented

The grammar is so repulsive

"I finally able to meet you again." She happily smiled while tried to hug the man, but the man awkwardly dodged her hug.

Douluo Dalu: The Legend of Heavenly Ruler

Anime & Comics · Nine_Clouds

_ThisKing_

2yr

Commented

If you have to make these notes, why don't you directly add it to the story in some way? These author comments always take my immersion away.

(AN; Sorry for another note, I just wanted to clarify this for some people. If you find Yoru's personality a bit different, that's becuse here she was still the Heiress of a Noble Clan, and was educated about proper etiquette since young)