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Esra01: For reference you can search in google image "Japanese Sengoku Era Trade Ship". Should lead you some wooden single masted ship.

From there you could easily imagine the second sail in front of it with the 3/4 of the mast would be laid down on the deck and the rest of it would go below.

And adding a rotating cannon in the bow of the ship would be doable as well

A Time Traveller's Guide to Feudal Japan · C170
3 days ago
For reference you can search in google image "Japanese Sengoku Era Trade Ship". Should lead you some wooden single masted ship.

From there you could easily imagine the second sail in front of it with the 3/4 of the mast would be laid down on the deck and the rest of it would go below.

And adding a rotating cannon in the bow of the ship would be doable as well View More

Sylph: thanks for the chapter, had a question; do you have a sketch of the ship or a picture of the base ship that you had in your mind? I'm having difficulty warping my head around its looks and size.

A Time Traveller's Guide to Feudal Japan · C170
4 days ago

Esra01: Sorry but this arc really feels like someone else taking over the novel and starts writing bs. Before the piracy and monk arc everything are always grounded in reality making it enjoyable to read since we can sympathize with the characters in it.

But punching air so hard that it creates a wind pressure strong enough to knock an *****? Impossible. Shouting the name of the technique before you are using it? Cringe and useless. Rubbing your body until it sparks flame? Impossible. And don't even try to argue about that little child bs. It seems like the child is an IQ sucking blackhole. The whole cast of character just got dumber for the sake of it.

Seriously this isn't Avatar the last airbender, those men has gone through war where their famiy and friends dying next to them. Being careless around a child is not logical

A Time Traveller's Guide to Feudal Japan · C169
5 days ago
Sorry but this arc really feels like someone else taking over the novel and starts writing bs. Before the piracy and monk arc everything are always grounded in reality making it enjoyable to read since we can sympathize with the characters in it.

But punching air so hard that it creates a wind pressure strong enough to knock an *****? Impossible. Shouting the name of the technique before you are using it? Cringe and useless. Rubbing your body until it sparks flame? Impossible. And don't even try to argue about that little child bs. It seems like the child is an IQ sucking blackhole. The whole cast of character just got dumber for the sake of it.

Seriously this isn't Avatar the last airbender, those men has gone through war where their famiy and friends dying next to them. Being careless around a child is not logical View More
A Time Traveller's Guide to Feudal Japan · C169
5 days ago
Reading Status: C247
First of all this review would point out the negative aspects of this novel since there's plenty of positives one already. For the most part Rise of the Undead Legion has a solid foundation with characters and world design. But sadly the quality and story development isn't that great.

1. Writing Quality + Story Development
The story development at first 100 ch is pretty enjoyable although it's not a masterpiece it's still a nice morning read that would leave you wanting more. But, after that the story took a massive hit to its quality so much that if i reviewed the later chapter i would rate it as 1/5.

The story in the first arc of rebuilding the undead legion is very good. I'm really immersed in how the MC slowly builds up his army and power. His story of roaming around the world collecting strong capable undead are enjoyable.

But after it's just meh. For the 100 ++ ch, the story keeps giving more and more obstacle for our MC to solve. The obstacle itself is not a problem since it presents a real trouble that even makes me wonder if our MC could solve it or not. But, the way he solved it are always anticlimatic, every single boss fight at later chapter always leave me saying "That's it?".

For example there are 2 major bosses in 200++ ch that is killed with a lucky coincidence and a lucky instant hit kill. There's always a huge build up for each of those bosses but somehow it always ends with our MC getting a 1% instant kill chance or a lucky coincidence negating all of the ******* that the author builds up towards it. Totally unrewarding for the readers.

It really boggles my mind when the author decided to kill a boss in a single chapter in a totally anti-climatic way. The boss has been build up as a stalking predator that could assassinate the MC at any time. But, since our MC received a major power up the boss just got used as a punching bag. I mean c'mon you already build up the fight with this boss for 100 chapters! And he got killed in a single chapter.

And also it seems like the author is in a rush to finish the story(?).There are a few major arc that just happens. Like for example the story needs our MC to do this 5 task so he just did the 5 task with no actual problem in doing it. And sometime during the fights that are sprinkled in during the quest that absolutely have no ******* at all the author suddenly said "Oh yeah he's at 1% health" to create artificial sense of urgency.

Plus some of the power up during later chapter are totally undeserved.
For example, there's a problem about the lack of boats. So suddenly our MC has the capability of building boats in the next chapter. And suddenly in the next chapter he's building the best legendary boat since the boatyard coincidentally has the guy that build the legendary boat during his life as a human. Yeah.... that's kinda pushing it

That problem above has occurred lots of times during the story. The MC has a problem of reach when he is mounted. So the blacksmith in the next chapter has a legendary glaive that he could buy. Then MC has a problem of obtaining the blood of a lvl 999 monster. Yeah the monster is selling it in exchange for something that the MC is already producing. Wait he doesn't have enough? Worry not the monster accept loans without any interest.

2. Stability of Updates
In my experience it's quite stable. 1 ch/day is enough for this kind of novel. Nothing interesting to review in this part

3. Character Design
The novel has tons of unique characters that I think are very interesting to read. Each of them has an unique characteristic and design that I think other novel could take this novel as an example on how to create an interesting character. But during fights the story really struggles in making them look useful, especially the parts that includes the undead army.

4. World Background
For the undead world the author did a really great job in creating a believable environment for our skeleton guy to wander around and have an adventure. But sadly some of the times in the living world some places feels like they are just plopped there since they are not that well developed except for the Wild region.

---- End of the review ----

Also the during equipment upgrade part the author really loves copy and pasting the same exact paragraph 5 times. Although it's how an equipment is presented in MMO it's still pretty strange looking at the same exact paragraph 5 times in a row. This problem still exists in the later chapter, quite weird since I think the readers would complain about it already

Also the during equipment upgrade part the author really loves copy and pasting the same exact paragraph 5 times. Although it's how an equipment is presented in VRMMO it's still pretty strange looking at the same exact paragraph 5 times in a row. This problem still exists in the later chapter, quite weird since I think the readers would complain about it already

Also the during equipment upgrade part the author really loves copy and pasting the same exact paragraph 5 times. Although it's how an equipment is presented in VRMMO it's still pretty strange looking at the same exact paragraph 5 times in a row. This problem still exists in the later chapter, quite weird since I think the readers would complain about it already

Also the during equipment upgrade part the author really loves copy and pasting the same exact paragraph 5 times. Although it's how an equipment is presented in VRMMO it's still pretty strange looking at the same exact paragraph 5 times in a row. This problem still exists in the later chapter, quite weird since I think the readers would complain about it already

Also the during equipment upgrade part the author really loves copy and pasting the same exact paragraph 5 times. Although it's how an equipment is presented in VRMMO it's still pretty strange looking at the same exact paragraph 5 times in a row. This problem still exists in the later chapter, quite weird since I think the readers would complain about it already View More
Rise of The Undead Legion
3 weeks ago
I mean i agreed with how UN do their operation of placing trackers and trailing them after they are relaxed.

But i'm having a bit of trouble with how shabby they are hiding their place in a magical world. Since you know someone with a really good nose or any skilled spy with stealth buff could easily trace them. Plus they are operating from a run down building as well.

But yeah i think i'm too quick to judge the whole situation View More

CoffeePanda: If they would have tried following right away, there is a good chance of failure. Those stalkers can have damn good countermeasures. That is why they went to their hideout only after the tracker was placed and negotiations ended, stalkers were relaxed.

Out of Space · C328
1 month ago
Why it's so easy to trace the stalker guild?

If using tracker is the only thing that it takes then just following them back to their base should be plausible. I really don't know how their base remains a secret until now View More
Out of Space · C328
1 month ago
I don't know how i feel about this...

This is basicly NTR but the MC is the one that is doing it View More
Lilim Heritage Online · C164
1 month ago

Esra01: Well seems like herlous is experiencing the mythical tentacle hentai scene.

The Legendary Mechanic · C478
2 months ago
Well seems like herlous is experiencing the mythical tentacle hentai scene. View More
The Legendary Mechanic · C478
2 months ago

Esra01: The karma of selling lootboxes comes back huh

The Legendary Mechanic · C467
3 months ago
The karma of selling lootboxes comes back huh View More
The Legendary Mechanic · C467
3 months ago

Esra01: This isekai novel starts with rather interesting start with the MC inhabits a golem. But strangely enough thr author rather than making the golem the main part of the character design he decides to make the golem part more human.

Seriously the golem needs to sleep, eat, drink, and needs to be mentally healthy. And around 20 chapters in he obtained an upgrade that makes his robotic part of him less robotic and obtaining human like skin. Makes me wonder why bother making him a golem then?

After that it's basically your isekai fantasy novel with serviceable world building and characters.

The Golem Adventurer
4 months ago
Reading Status: C35
This isekai novel starts with rather interesting start with the MC inhabits a golem. But strangely enough thr author rather than making the golem the main part of the character design he decides to make the golem part more human.

Seriously the golem needs to sleep, eat, drink, and needs to be mentally healthy. And around 20 chapters in he obtained an upgrade that makes his robotic part of him less robotic and obtaining human like skin. Makes me wonder why bother making him a golem then?

After that it's basically your isekai fantasy novel with serviceable world building and characters. View More
The Golem Adventurer
4 months ago
Man really brought back memories back when i play WoW religiously. Creating a guild from a party of randoms and slowly improving it overtime into a fully pledged guild that does large scale raid pretty frequently.
But dunno about HX plan since he is creating a faction like the horde or the alliance not a guild View More
The Legendary Mechanic · C351
5 months ago
Man everytime i think the mc will hit a speedbump and will have to face the problem himself our author always made up something in Haeirfa that will completely flatten that speed bumb View More
I Found A Planet · C82
5 months ago

Esra01: So instead of scamming the players Han Xiao scammed the readers. What a 4th wall scammer

The Legendary Mechanic · C329
6 months ago
So instead of scamming the players Han Xiao scammed the readers. What a 4th wall scammer View More
The Legendary Mechanic · C329
6 months ago

MinxMean: I would have saved their number if that is what happened.
But if they didn't give their number in advanced, then sorry about that. xD

I Found A Planet · C74
6 months ago
Man the writer really overused this wah wah robot. This arc is just full off cringy reaction "ha ha this robot is funny lmao lol". I hope this arc ends faster and mc resumes his other world expedition View More
I Found A Planet · C74
6 months ago
IT'S OVER 9000!!!!! View More
Out of Space · C223
7 months ago
I Found A Planet · C28
7 months ago
The Legendary Mechanic · C146
9 months ago

diluma62: exp

The Legendary Mechanic · C146
9 months ago
I'm sorry but you really should hire someone as an editor. Right now there are some part that are just unbearable to read where both grammar and sentence structure are in total chaos ( ex : 3rd paragraph from bottom ).

But still i liked your story and will be waiting for future releases. View More
Doomsday Pillars · C38
9 months ago
Hey ghost have their own life man. After 12 hour of hard work at chen ge house they deserve to go home to mu yang high school View More

Gross_Toad: Oh, that's true, Mu Yang is not that evil... Wait, but didn't most of the ghosts transmigrate to his Haunted House? Or do they commute?

My House of Horrors · C172
11 months ago
Man sometime you need to consider the game balance. This item set that could take a lvl 220 player to being able to match lvl 400 player is just way too op View More
Rise of The Undead Legion · C151
11 months ago
Wait how could there be 3 normal daily missions? ( hire crew , fix door , and more security ). Isn't there supposed to be a single nightmare mission each day or did i misunderstood something View More
My House of Horrors · C147
11 months ago

Esra01: So lucien is jesus now?

Throne of Magical Arcana · C372
1 year ago
So lucien is jesus now? View More
Throne of Magical Arcana · C372
1 year ago
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