KaosuKishi

7mth

Commented

I've been gone for a while due to school .. but now it's great to see one of the HP fanfic novels i've followed years ago 😁🫡... Thank you author for a wonderful adventure with aedan

"You've got yourself a deal."

Harry Potter and the Rise of the Protector

Book&Literature · Alexander_the_grey

KaosuKishi

1yr

Commented

Chapter 69 -------------》《-----------

KaosuKishi

1yr

Replied to Daoistqm3CV0

well they did go through somewhat same circumstances in life...( e.g. how the people in their village treat them)

Naruto was stunned hearing the news before a look of anger appeared on his face, as Gaara was one of his close friends.

KaosuKishi

1yr

Commented

thanks for the chap !! 💪

ch 1248 First Day Of School (3)

KaosuKishi

1yr

Replied to Aseijuro

in google translate please?

I will no longer translate this book

KaosuKishi

1yr

Replied to SilverKingLord

i first thought of bruce banner and i was like... ' I don't remember him being like that'... then i remembered the other bruce from DC 😅

Su Xiaoxiao: "You are Tony Stark after all!"

KaosuKishi

1yr

Replied to Nekomiko_succubus

he was thinking that he might made a mistake when he develop a cure... since he remembered he will make ultron to make the earth better only to see it became a murder-hobo A.I. in the end

The main reason for being so cautious is that because Tony was afraid he had made a mistake like Avengers 2 and would do bad things with good intentions, the result was catastrophic.

KaosuKishi

1yr

Replied to SlothElephant2k18

it should be paw since you don't eat the nails/claws LOL

"Saiki Kusuo, I remember your favorite food is coffee jelly! By the way, are you interested in tasting the claws of a beast emperor level bear?"

KaosuKishi

1yr

Commented

Symbol of Peace : "Reasonable... Undeniable..."

KaosuKishi

1yr

Replied to SlothElephant2k18

bear paw actually

"Saiki Kusuo, I remember your favorite food is coffee jelly! By the way, are you interested in tasting the claws of a beast emperor level bear?"

KaosuKishi

1yr

Replied to Aseijuro

do you know the original's name ? and where to find it?

The memorial service did not last long, after the end of the ceremony of honoring the dead, Sarutobi Hiruzen made a statement that shocked everyone. Stating that the village had suffered too many casualties in this war and that most of it was due to his incompetence, Hiruzen announced his resignation as Hokage just after the election of the Fourth Hokage was over. Although many of the villagers objected, Hiruzen did not go back on his words and announced two candidates for the position of the Fourth Hokage. One of them was his own student and one of the three legendary Sannin Orochimaru, and the second was the man who made a big name for himself in the Third World War - the Yellow Lightning of Konoha - Namikaze Minato.

Naruto: Ryujin Jakka

Anime & Comics · Aseijuro

KaosuKishi

1yr

Replied to Kingsav_Savage

ahh how's it BS? 🤨

Mrs Reynolds smiled. "What nonsense. You are our son, and nothing can change that."

Superman: Doomsday Future

Anime & Comics · ScionOfDegeneracy

KaosuKishi

1yr

Replied to Sleepy_Neko_God

she speak out*

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Superman: Doomsday Future

Anime & Comics · ScionOfDegeneracy

KaosuKishi

1yr

Replied to 18484746

well now she DID looked down on the MC 🤷🤷

Honestly, he remembered her being quite bitchy in the original timeline as well, looking down on Naruto and the like. And he'd never really been a big fan of her.

Naruto: Systematic Shinobi

Anime & Comics · 0_Jordinio_0

KaosuKishi

1yr

Commented

if its too op you could just end it early and finish it without you forcing it to last more chapters.. or you could make OC more stronger enemies that could give the MC a challenge.... 🤷🤷 usually OP mc are being partnered with the slice of life genre since they don't have enemies that are a threat to them.... and they last longer than the usual since the author is focused on the slice of life part... but hey at least your learning and that's what matters👌💪

What I learned the most in my first novel was not to make an mc too strong at the start if you want to write a good plot, hell, I had to bring four Otsutsuki from the future to give mc a challenge in my first novel to keep the story alive.

Naruto: Aokiji Yuki

Anime & Comics · Navy_King

KaosuKishi

1yr

Replied to ScionOfDegeneracy

love this author/translator already 😆💪 no homo though

Superman: Doomsday Future

Anime & Comics · ScionOfDegeneracy

KaosuKishi

1yr

Commented

The next moment, Orochimaru who was thrown in the air, due to force of gravity began to fall down, Azuma down pulled out the blade on his back, pointing it towards the falling Orochimaru.

Naruto: The Great Swordsman

Anime & Comics · Navy_King

KaosuKishi

1yr

Replied to Abordoaj

he's confident of his cockroach skills 🤷

He has heard about the deeds of Azuma and from his old friend, he even learned the details, showing Azuma had the strength to fight Kage Rank Shinobi, but he is also the legendary Sannin.