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Orange_Omega: Let me start of this review with an overly-quick summarization of my thoughts on the web novel's contents 8 chapters into the story: Enjoyable but lacking in a couple departments

Let me start off with the first area, the release of the chapters. It's quite unpredictable, and that's a problem. The chapters come out a bit whenever and the author (Totally not me) has been a bit lazy. Although, in the latest chapter(ch8), the author(totally not me) did make a statement to release one chapter per week which at least is something.

The second area, the characters. The most interesting character of the cast is without one doubt our 'special' protagonist, Kenjiro Asukara. The character deviates from our average original web novel protagonist who's usually; Cocky, self-confident, half self-aware. Kenjiro is pretty much very different from those protagonists, he feels like he's the worst person out there and tries to live his life by that mindset. The other characters are somewhat interesting. The only characters we have gotten some character-development from are pretty much Anami and Narino so far which is a bit lacking, to say the least.
But, the comedy that is generated by the characters are quite funny so it's okay

Next area, plot. The plot of the story isn't really something to cheer about. The story is basically Kenjiro trying to lose the powers he gained randomly and give them to someone who deserves them, but the other characters(who've forced him into a club full of powerful people) try and succeed to stop him. So far, the plot isn't that great but is somewhat interesting.

Next area, Comedy. The half lackluster plot can be excused because from what I can see, the web novel is mainly a comedy novel. In that area it fairs well, there are a couple of times where I laughed out loud while reading the chapters. The comedy is mostly generated from Kenjiro and his stupid thoughts and actions and then a 'normal' person's reaction to it. Some of the scenes progress in a very satisfying way and keeps one interested

Last area; summary and tips.
The story as a whole is quite enjoyable to read and is sure to make one laugh once or twice, but the plot and characters do need some working on. Characters like Ibuki, Sora, and Eraijo feel quite 1D as of now. It also feels like the author(totally not me) is depending quite a lot on the quirkiness of Kenjiro for making the chapter interesting. It almost feels like the author(totally not me) had an interesting character idea and then decided to make a story out of that. It kind of works so far, but I feel like it's going grow stale after a while. That's only what I think though.
That was my review, I hope the author(totally not me) reads this and fixes the areas I mentioned

Real talk(rohtua eht em morf(<-- backwards)):
I'm so meta that I make extremely (un)funny jokes outside of the chapters now. But seriously, I don't think that my story deserves 5-stars so I didn't rate it that(like quite a lot of other authors tend to do). The review itself is a blend of real thoughts and joking.
Well, that's it for my shenanigans now. If someone's reading this before having read the series; Please do give a read and take the review with a grain of salt.
(I also totally didn't spend like 15 minutes writing this unnecessary review)

Cool I got Super Powers and all, But I don't think I deserve them
2 months ago
alright gotcha
also I'm immortal so yeah your not getting rid of me anytime soon (unless you stop writing I guess?)
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make it look long
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make it look meaningful
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there now I can be shameless
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FleetingClouds: wow, you're still alive! Long time no see lol, I will probably keep to it, cause I am not regularely writing at a specific time of the day like others do. Sometimes I write/feel like it, and sometimes I don't. I will cut the chapters from now on into smaller chapters though and release them at once. I think the format of 1k-2k per chap is more fitting for me. So don't get surprised the next time when there is more chaps, but only half is new stuff :)

Pokemon Untold [Currently Restructured] · C0
2 months ago
that was satisfyingly long but waiting 1 month is kinda long....but then the updates might be more solid becuase It's only one hmmmmmm well after thinking it through I personally enjoy the chapters with this new method over the old one View More
Pokemon Untold [Currently Restructured] · C0
2 months ago
as long as it will be completed I'll stick with it 👍
also that priority list looks familiar......just like most peoples lol live your life have fun View More
Pokemon Untold [Currently Restructured] · C0
2 months ago
was this dropped? View More

yuuta: 👍

Cool I got Super Powers and all, But I don't think I deserve them · C12
6 months ago
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Cool I got Super Powers and all, But I don't think I deserve them · C12
6 months ago
it's based of luck?🤔
-beautiful girl falls from sky and lands on him while accidentally kissing him
-enters the world of cultivation and gains a fiance who is a princess
-happens to cultivate a discouraged skill to find out that it not only lords over the other elements but also saves his life and gaines him a bin level pet

so your saying this thing is based of luck?
hahaha everyone who isn't named hao ren beware and be scared. his luck is defying the heavens. he is literally a man who became a dragon View More
Dragon King's Son-In-Law · C211
7 months ago

alejandrarbls: Thank you. And as an fyi I totally support the ss system as everyone deserves to make a living in one way or another. I also extremely appreciate the fact you have us a heads up before going premium.

Dragon King's Son-In-Law · C211
7 months ago
how about that our boy can enter instinct form View More
Pokemon Untold [Currently Restructured] · C18
7 months ago
good to know and keep going👍


#gen1forever View More
Pokemon Untold [Currently Restructured] · C0
7 months ago

UncleOddball: I can't decide whether I like or dislike thw path this novel took for transmigration, wich says a lot of good. Gonna follow it up eagerly. A pity it's not one of the rapid releases, maybe some day...

Pokemon Untold [Currently Restructured] · C0
8 months ago
I remember that blue was talking about martial arts and MC's pokemon is elusive so probably both View More

Eternity_River: Is the MC going to be training Pokémon or himself?

Pokemon Untold [Currently Restructured] · C0
8 months ago
I wonder what pokemon his father gave him🤔🤔🤔 View More
Pokemon Untold [Currently Restructured] · C0
8 months ago
oh nooo how can this be? I've been hooked after only one chapter! I am bound to suffer. well that aside I hope you go the distance with this one it's a very fresh read View More
Cool I got Super Powers and all, But I don't think I deserve them · C1
8 months ago

Darkdelusion: Lolicon uncle VS the 'uncle'.
Which uncle shall prevail😥😥

Dragon King's Son-In-Law · C145
8 months ago

LuxEmperor: They really know how to grab you by the nuts when they have the chance....what a cliff....No this surpasses cliffs....ladies and gentlemen please look to your left, behold the edge of the world

Red Envelope Group of the Three Realms · C620
8 months ago
not satisfied with trainers united? here are some ways to think of more fitting names

1, name it it's purpose
example:
- united group
- civilian relief team
- world(town?) watchers
ect...

2, it can hace a symbolic title/name example:
- rocket locket
- town's last hope
- hidden hero association
ect...

3, there's also acronyms
example:
- S.T.R, StopThat Rocket
- T.U.F, Trainer's United Front
- M.T.W.A.B.P.F.T, Make The World A Better Place for Tomarrow

just some Ideas and as always thanks for the chapter
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like DaBousss said take your time and write it as you envisioned/revised ideas on the fly? more chapters are good but non rushed chapters are gonna be better 9times out of 10times View More
Pokemon Untold [Currently Restructured] · C14
8 months ago

DaBousss: Take ur time .readers are not going anywhere.write as u intend to write originally.don't rush. Ty fr chapter

Pokemon Untold [Currently Restructured] · C14
8 months ago
*walks in to pawn shop*
"hello I have come to sell my pikachu"-MC
"hmm pikachu's are kinda rare how about-" -shop keep
"It's shiny"-MC
"TAKE MY MONEY!"-shopkeep View More
Pokemon Untold [Currently Restructured] · C0
8 months ago
exp View More

TheSandwichMan: 🥪🥪🥪🥪🥪🥪🥪

Dragon King's Son-In-Law · C106
8 months ago

gamer3012: difficult? no, practice makes perfect!
su, zi, the pres, the carrot, and the two maids makes a full week of practice leaving sunday to rest.

Dragon King's Son-In-Law · C106
8 months ago
oh man I can picture it already the old man walks in when things are about to get past the point of no return(what a cock block). Then he will give mc privacy while secretly giving him his blessing and hoping for a grandchild while things become akward in the room and the atmosphere is gone while lou puti "wake's up" from her "trance" say'ing he's a shameless pervert while blushing and either attack him or send him away View More
Red Envelope Group of the Three Realms · C600
8 months ago
the bonding begins View More
Dragon King's Son-In-Law · C94
9 months ago

PopcornSectGenius: As true as this statement is, you willing to say that in front of the face of a demigod???

Super Gene · C792
9 months ago
exp View More

yuuta: exp

Red Envelope Group of the Three Realms · C586
9 months ago
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Red Envelope Group of the Three Realms · C586
9 months ago
ahh yes ash's biggest weakness plot 😅 View More

FleetingClouds: I had the notion that a lot of people disliked the last chapter and read a lot into it (Pikachu). Then I had a conversation with someone on discord and he was like:
"Of course people hate Pikachu! In one episode he defeats Latios and in the next he loses against a Snivy!" lol, true story ^^

Pokemon Untold [Currently Restructured] · C12
9 months ago
🤔iv'e heard that shiny starter pokemon are 10% stronger than their base form.Some would also say that pikachu is a starter pokemon and don't mind me if I'm reading too much, into it. guess that the mc is gonna have to wait a fat minute before he can hug a pikachu😂
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[pikachu] 🌟nickname: (n/a) ?♀️♂️gender: unkown (shape of tail? heart? lightning?)
ability: plot
ability summery:
someone important who will come to face death in the face multiple times and clutch a victory or escape in crucial moments.they can also defie commen sense
moveset:
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bite. quick attack???
???(tackle?) ???(glare?)
??? ???
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affiliation: wild (captive) View More
Pokemon Untold [Currently Restructured] · C12
9 months ago

1life4death: lol mom just drop the bomb...Ren's mind is probably going : "All hands on deck! this is not a drill! Arm the cannons, man your battle stations! We need an excuse ASAP!!! This is not a drill!!!" lol

Dragon King's Son-In-Law · C79
9 months ago

FleetingClouds: Man, I didnt even know yellow existed before. She is seemingly a Manga character. Dunno which One, but bullapedia is a good place to find out

Pokemon Untold [Currently Restructured] · C10
9 months ago
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