Webnovel Author: JPNovelFan - Novel Collection

Good to see the dad back and this was a creative way to time skip. I appreciated it a lot! Thanks.

Crazy how she knew.

Thank you for another gift! Woo! I added a thanks in today’s chapter as well in the author’s thoughts.

Probably will.

Ah, waiting for tomorrow sucks. I wish I skipped reading today. X__X someone MIB mind erase me real quick so I can forget and reread tomorrow.

Wonderful chapter. Sad end for his ally, but I hope this forces Khan to rethink his attachment to humans. I hope he immediately sells out to the empire and we see a large backlash against the humans by the empire and Khan once he makes it out of this alive.

Well, he knew it was “too perfect” since the start and that they would probably try and kill him on this planet at some point. At least he’s still reliably paranoid. Sadly he was still too trusting. Fk the humans. They all deserve to die.

I hope this is the case! Fk the humans man! They’ve done nothing to benefit him and they just constantly use him.

Thank you!!! Wow! My first ever gift!

I’ve thought about it, but my novel isn’t super popular yet so I’ve felt like it’s a little cringe to just have one with no people in it. 😅 if you want to add me and message me, you can! My username is jpnovelfan

He really hasn’t. He’s so consistent. It’s why, a year later, I pay for the highest tier privilege and have for several months. It’s too good of a story fr.

Idk this chapter kind of feels out of place. Like, he’s positing a theory to which he himself just made up on the spot with zero reference or grounds. Why is his first thought “WHY HASNT THE BEAST DOMAIN ATTACKED OMG THEYRE SO SCARY.” When like, bro chill out, I wasn’t even thinking about something nonsensical as the beast domain attacked. Nothing in the story so far has even suggested that was a possibility? Why even bring it up?

I would love to see some sages actually wanting to help Rui in his quest for the Doctor Sage honestly. I think it would be cool to get that kind of support so he could stay a martial artist.

What a nice resolution.

I appreciate the reply and explanation but I’ve already taken the book out of my collection. I won’t be reading this anymore. Good luck with the rest of the story but I don’t want to spend any more coins on this when it’s so frustrating for me to read. Like the other commenter said, this whole arc is “mid” and just not very entertaining. They said there are a lot of useless chapters and while I mostly agree, I think that’s not even the biggest problem. I think the biggest issue is just how the story feels so aimless. The in-story narrator isn’t being reliable in giving direction or giving an omniscient view to the reader, leaving the reader in a worse position than the characters themselves with understanding what’s going on in the story. Theres no understanding of what the next “goal” is in the story. Is it graduate? Is it murder the entire academy and staff for treating him so poorly and like a guinea pig for experiments? Is it battle other races and be a savior to humanity? Is it join forces with other races and become an evil god? I can speculate all day with a million other directions but in all of them I’ll just be disappointed because it’s like I’m doing the narrator’s job for them. Good luck on your story man but my complaint last time was my peak frustration and now I’m just over it. I have you another several hundred of my coins, but it’s not worth it to me anymore. I liked the premise of the story, initially at least, so there’s that.

Alright, I can’t deal with this anymore. The whole pretense of the school being ridiculously cruel for no reason. Unrealistic in its “training” methods that make zero sense. All this does will just raise Atticus, through the magic power of plot armor, to survive barely and become more and more of a villain. I’m really tired and upset with the whole “nerf” the Mc down to nothing instead of the progressive building up you had been doing. It seems like you’ve just completely lost sense of the original direction you were going with the story once we got to this school and none of it makes sense for humanity’s benefit. It’s just idiocy on every level of thinking this is a benefit for humanity. Honestly, I was really curious how the story would advance and you really started out strong with the camp disaster and the cool ability of Atticus with the sword, but I’ve gotta stop wasting my coins on this story now. Sorry bud but you’ve just gone in a different direction and he barely even uses his katana at all. Every powerup he gets just doesn’t matter if you strip them away and if he plays around and only uses elements to fight with. You even made the suit have such a downside that he doesn’t even want to use it. Theres too many negatives here. I’m done. I’ll let the door hit me on the way out but sorry man, I just can’t keep reading this.