Badges 12
Moments 14
1yr
Commented yo maybe tone down the exclamation marks. feels like every narration is being yelled or is too hyper. love how the story is going so far tho
ch 56 Going down the goblins' hole!
My Enchanting System
Fantasy · Alen_Tanor
2yr
Commented why is tobi so stupid? isnt he an adult in a childs body?
ch 13 Baby Trap
The Tribrid System
Fantasy · CollinX_BrainZ
2yr
Commented not trying to attack or anything but your word choice and grammar could use some work. like dont use chill to describe the cold feeling, it just doesnt sound right. maybe also use a few less descriptive words. it comes out feeling a bit unnatural
ch 0 1 1 Death and Rebirth
The Cold Flames
Fantasy · EldestLord53
2yr
Commented awesome chapter cant wait for more
ch 55 Chapter 55- Detective Sisters
The Unwanted
Fantasy · Sivios
2yr
Commented am i the only one weirded out by the fact that he is only 14?
ch 0 8 Night Without End
Children of a Lesser God
Urban · Rathan
2yr
Commented your status numbers are all over the place
ch 22 Last Fight
Search *Demon's Evolution* To read book.
Fantasy · Horny_feet
2yr
Commented why dies eric keep getting called tianlong yun?
ch 85 Chapter 85: Eric vs Master Miura (1/?)
The Legacy System
Fantasy · crazy_immortal
3yr
Commented Just want to make sure, no ntr right?
ch 150 "In this life, you can only be my woman!"
Samsara Online
Games · XIETIAN
Sirkeksalot
VRMMORPG: The Online Thief
Games · Solomon_Adams