Badges 11
Moments 62
2mth
Commented I would like to keep with the main characters with kingdom developement :)
ch 149 [interlude]The army with a state II
Blood And Iron (ASOIAF/GoT)
TV · Chill_ean_GUY
5mth
Commented The stats part does not make that much sense. There should be a difference. 15 levels x2 stats are 30 more strength.
ch 45 Training Outside Part 1
Azimuth: The Elden Throne (New Version)
Games · Follower_of_Abadom
7mth
Commented How many times are her looks going to be mentioned? Yes, green eyes, blond hair, looks like a fairy…is it for word count?
ch 105 0105 The Door to Ruins
Harry Potter: The Golden Viper
Book&Literature · FicFrenzy
7mth
Replied to FicFrenzy Because even though you have written him as always being careful, he is risking it by getting cursed on purpose. He could instead get his memories back, less risky and since it was information maybe related to the development of the world he is at, definitely indispensable.
ch 35 035 The Curse Of The Dark Lord
Harry Potter: The Golden Viper
Book&Literature · FicFrenzy
8mth
Commented this was not a chapter...it was complete filler.
ch 119 Chapter 119
HP: The Arcane Thief
Book&Literature · Snollygoster
1yr
Commented This last chapters are way to forced.
ch 106 Chapter 106: Sorry Hufflepuff
HP: The Arcane Thief
Book&Literature · Snollygoster
1yr
Replied to Galanar He is a gnome, low heath and a glass canon. On the other side our MC has quite an amazing DPS, so that it’s not a really valid reason. It’s the same as the king, you need an antagonist, but since you made them quite hateful, the reasons for allowing them to live are not enough to push through logic.
ch 71 Ranged Enemies, Part 2
New Eden: Live to Play, Play to Live
Games · Galanar
1yr
Commented 75% of the chapter is filler description. After a great fight on the one before I expected more.
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1yr
Commented How can he equip anything if he doesn’t have the necessary stats that are required to equip it?
ch 0 9 Chapter 9 - Abundant Loot and Upgrading
Infinite Evolution: A spy in multiverse
Movies · _Crimson_
1yr
Commented I’m really liking the novel…but I don’t understand this chapter at all. You are saying that 2 booklets of outdated skill to increase mana reg (that I’m sure asking their parents would have helped) cost the same (actually more) of 5 chances that give you in cases 50% in others lower probability of having more affinity? I don’t think it’s a good trade at all.
ch 23 Cultivation Skills
The Over-Break System
Fantasy · ScotchTy
1yr
Commented How does hammer have the suits made if the twins didn’t allow Rhodes to take the suit to the us Army?
ch 19 Chapter 19 – Responsibility
Silverfire - A MCU Fan-Fiction
Movies · GodOfFreedom
2yr
Commented Great chapter. BTW, will the mass release happen?
ch 596 Big Brother
The Oracle Paths
Sci-fi · Arkinslize
2yr
Replied to Althen The same with moving around London by himself.
ch 13 Going Home
Magus of the Wizarding World
Book&Literature · Arrowinmyknee
Althen
ch 190 Misunderstanding Dragons
Out of Space
Sci-fi · Neobear