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gonna give this a try again cause i saw this comment lol i dont really remember it, but whatever lol View More

Xuyi: LMAO

Ultimate Naruto System in a Different World · C4
8 hours ago
been almost a year, totally didnt even notice you responded lol View More

Xuyi: LMAO

Ultimate Naruto System in a Different World · C4
8 hours ago
the main problem i see with it, is that as a military officer, the title makes no sense. also, for future reference, sovereign almost always makes titles seem more edgy, its just not a good word for titles, its only really used in noting the ruler of a nation, unlike king, which while still somewhat childish, still makes sense in a wierd sort of way, but the point is that he is part of the military, and not even the leader, so anything denoting a ruler wouldnt make sense in a title for him, gun demon or something similiar would work better. just for futture reference ofcourse, also, love how you named one colonel sanders, nice reference ;) View More

Condemned: Perhaps I am edgy. And there is something wrong with my naming sense. Pardon me 🙉

The Black Market · C1
19 hours ago

Mytaw: So his title is gun sovereign? It sounds like a edgy teenager made it

The Black Market · C1
19 hours ago
i was gonna read this, but once it hit the fucking ksill book part i gave up, thats retarded, idk even know what the **** the novels about because the synoopsis doesnt say, so yeah, **** it. View More
Tales of Magic Swordsman · C4
2 days ago
i think its funny how they're called the 7 deadly sins, when 6 of them are natural parts of humanity. the only one that isnt natural is envy, its basically a twisted form of greed,so i can see why its a sin, but the other 6 are parts of humanity, so i never understood why they are called sins. View More

Ryouha: ...7 Deadly Sins? Are they in somekind of trial for the sin or something? Only Big Brain Scholar Imp was able to prevent being pulled into it?

Demon's Virtue · C38
4 days ago
the ingrediants remind me of terraria
lol View More
Rebirth of Abium · C3
5 days ago
any good ides? lol. also, you know of any novels similiar to yours i could read while i wait for updates? View More

MikXL_23: Sorry... I'm always trying to not **** up this novel, so when I'm out of ideias I do not even try to produce chapters. ;(

Insect King · C14
6 days ago
people say blood is thicker than water, i say all the easier it is to drown in. View More

Inviken: Whether its novel , drama or real life..treasure your parents especially if they are so hardworking for the family...show them you care so you wont have regrets...💗

King of Sports · C5
6 days ago
dude, i haven't even read the second chapter yet, but i can already tell, this is fucking garbage. your not going to get any readers with this **** fi you dont fix it. clearly show who is talking, make the paragraphs waaaaay smaller, giant blobs of **** like this, are not something anyone likes to read. im out, i looked forward 6 chapters, you never changed those from the advice in chapter one so you obviously dont care or are lazy, but yeah, **** you. View More

Martialasura11: Thanks for reading

The Ultimate Host · C2
6 days ago
haven't read the chapter yet, just gotta say, for the name, my first thought, is Bigger the Hope, Smaller the Dick, just aying lol View More
King of Magical Golems · C6
6 days ago
thanks for the update, loving it so far, can't wait for more. View More
Son of the Spirit Beast · C68
3 weeks ago
and thanks for the update. also, since you said i should point out issues with grammar. about half way through this, when they get to the banquet, the sect leader says "in no way do you have to bring disgrace to the sect" it should be rephrased to "in no way are you to bring disgrace to the sect". i didn't really notice anything other than that, if there were any errors, they were small. thanks for the update, can't wait for more! View More
Son of the Spirit Beast · C66
1 month ago
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Son of the Spirit Beast · C66
1 month ago

NagatoSaitou: Ok, Thanks. If you see other mistakes you can tell me. As not native English, it happens I forgot something in the translation italian - English

Son of the Spirit Beast · C65
1 month ago
thanks for the update, im lovin this so far, btw, the giant forest elephant, the first two or three times you typed it, you accidentally called it giant elephant forest, if you could correct that it'd be great. but other thahn that, lovin it. View More
Son of the Spirit Beast · C65
1 month ago
a very good point, and most likely he'll "randomly" stumble upon some demonic inheritance type ****, or become an aprentice to some wierde old dude, those are almost always the only things people use in novells lately. but we'll see. View More

JPNovelFan: The only issue I see is just the complete lack of available abilities to raise his own cultivation. He’s struggling so incredibly with rank 0-3 abilities and barely pushed himself to the limits to get his body rank 4 with that lower rank ability. I’m just wondering how we’ll ever see him having stronger rank abilities when everything is so secretive. Even this countries abilities wouldn’t help him. I would’ve thought creating a technique would’ve made this easier but he is nearly dying just dissecting a rank 0 movement technique. What the hell is he going to do to get a technique that is rank 4+ that he needs literally right now to get stronger????

Birth of the Demonic Sword · C270
1 month ago
lol right, with an evergrowing individual power, godhood is an eventuality. View More

JPNovelFan: Interesting. A god. Wonder what rank that is.

Birth of the Demonic Sword · C270
1 month ago
i always thought it interesting how only 1 of the 7 deadly sins, always counts as a sin, and how the others only count as sins when you experience too much of them. envy is the only sin of the 7, that is truly a sin, the rest are human nature, but too much of something turns it bad, hence, they count. interesting, is it not? View More

Kerail: Well greed is one of the 7 sins. Ego as pride is also there. Oy demonic master and its folowers ... sadly no one plans to redeem themselvs.😔

Birth of the Demonic Sword · C268
1 month ago
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Birth of the Demonic Sword · C254
1 month ago
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Birth of the Demonic Sword · C253
1 month ago
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Birth of the Demonic Sword · C250
1 month ago
lol, i just got borderlands 3, your lucky i forgot to check :) View More

DevilsArray: 1st for the 1st time

Birth of the Demonic Sword · C240
2 months ago
yeha im out, the first chapter was already pretty bad, but fucking aura? really? View More
Fate Online: Shadow · C2
2 months ago
thats not actually a thing mate. View More

ApocalypseX: Must be because you haven't met soldiers who has been through wars before. Killing intent might not exist but a murderous aura is. It's basic instict for a human to always feel danger whenever they are around a dangerous individual.

Like how an ordinary individual would feel when they meet face to face with a murderer or something similar.

Fate Online: Shadow · C2
2 months ago

PPSH7: The back story seems... a bit forced but okay...

Fate Online: Shadow · C1
2 months ago
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Birth of the Demonic Sword · C238
2 months ago
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Birth of the Demonic Sword · C237
2 months ago
if your talking about planaria worms, then its a whole other category, assuming the worms in this novel are of a type similiar to those, then the "blood inheritence" **** would work, barely, and really only in this one case, but with how it's mentioned, it's apperently a thing for any type of animal, which is why it doesn't make sense. my problem isn't with the thoery of blood inhertance itself persay, it's what having such a theory in your novel means. essentially, because will is that powerful, anyone with a strong enough will, can not only become immortal(the whole ressurection through 1 blood drop trope) but also influence all their descendents any way they choose. bear in mind, that will can't be quantifiably measured, or restrained, meaning, the weakest person, who has never cultivated, could be immortal, if they imbued their blood with their will, and willed themselves the ability to regenerate. any novel where "will" is an actual factor for how strong you are, and can influence the world around you, is by default, in my eyes, not worth reading, cause there are no limits to anything or anyone, and the entire story is pointless. View More

Gamedevil: Why don't you Google for "can memories be transferred by eating them" you will find that worms learning faster by eating a previous generation that was trained, needing less time to learn the same behaviour. So while it might sound ridiculous, it is actually more scientific than cultivation, it's still fringe science though, 😎😁😎 I'm not defending the author here, just pointing out that he might have read or seen things that make this a valid plot line to him, so calling it "retarded" is harsh

Birth of the Demonic Sword · C228
2 months ago
lol exactly, the only case in which emotions giving power(and by giving, i mean boosting, or otherwise affecting the inherent power, such as fight or flight response, itll overtax you, but still) is plausible, is if it's something inherent(the power, as in harry potter, where wizards have power naturally)like if your born with the power, if it's naturally a part of you, then ofcourse, it will react as you do, such a in anger lashing out. but in cases like this, where a writer makes emotions create a source of power, it's just idiotic. View More

WakelessMars: I agree so dumb emotions give powers-_- come on thats just stupid this isnt naruto

Birth of the Demonic Sword · C228
2 months ago
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