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Right, so at the beginning you have like two commas, but then from the "All 5 superpowers...", pretty much no commas at all. I can't see the text while I'm writing this, but do have a look.

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Replied to Daoist945497

It's not for everyone, so I'm not offended. You gave it a go, and that counts. Have fun with other novels.

ch 57 Tracking the Prey

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I'm not sure if you need 'luck', perhaps a bit patience. Anyway, tell me how you feel about it after reading a bit. Maybe there's something I could improve for the e-books. Thanks.

ch 01 My Name is Anna

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Yea... Kind of predicted the future, eh?

ch 424 Strong Poison

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Replied to SimpleSlash

Because the chapter has been rewritten. I replaced the boar with a bear (a tougher opponent). The comments are like over 1 year old as well :D Anyway, if you read a bit further, you'll encounter a massive difference in the story. That should be the place where rewritten chapters end. Hence the story will make a bit less sense for a while, and then continue as usual.

ch 60 A Book with Diagrams

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Replied to Carmine_Maurone

I'm still doing what I did... hopefully better :D If that's good news to you :D

ch 157 The Rural Village

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Sure, have fun :D

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Yes, we can finally move on to something else :D

ch 149 Course of Reflections

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Good luck, but you won't need it so long you are prepared :D Make sure you are prepared :D

ch 143 The Past Events

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Hi, today. I'm sorry for lack of updates, but due to exams (which are now done and dusted), I had no time to write. So you may expect a new chapter today in the evening. (If anyone wonders, I've passed all my tests no issues).

ch 143 The Past Events

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You are welcomed.

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Replied to GOLD_plate_turtle

Fraction: a dissenting group within a larger one. "the dominant classes or fractions in capitalist societies" It's not incorrect per se, but yea, I'll correct that in the future. I'll be rewriting these chapters, but thank you for pointing it out anyway.

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I'm glad you liked it. I'm Anna is the sequel of Limits, so I'd recommend (it's not romance, just because the MC is female). Anyway, have fun reading other novels and thanks for kind words.

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Hehe, I know, but the joke was aimed for the previous editing. It doesn't matter as such, since titles are necessary by design. In my e-book, the first volume has something like 5 chapters. In my estimates, after the whole novel is edited, there will be even less chapters, since I'll be removing repetitions and such. Anyway, glad you liked it anyway.

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Sure, just make sure to feed it well :D

ch 136 Wolf Puppies

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I'll post one more today, since they gave me a break :D I'll try to publish one or two tomorrow as well. Thanks for reading.

ch 134 The Result

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Hehe, thanks. I'm glad you enjoyed it. It's a shame I don't have much time to rewrite the story, and make the quality better. Though I'll get to that once my second book is done. On that topic, you might want to give it a try. I'm Anna is a sequel to Limits, but of course the MC is different, and the tone is different too. Anyway, have fun with other novels.

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In that case, I'll let you know once the story's rewritten... If I don't forget :D Thanks for reading anyway, have fun with other novels.

ch 78 Silver Bear

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