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DarkRay

DarkRay

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If you see the light, remember that, there always is a ray of darkness following it! I AM THE DARK RAY!

2018-02-24 Joined United Kingdom

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Right, so at the beginning you have like two commas, but then from the "All 5 superpowers...", pretty much no commas at all. I can't see the text while I'm writing this, but do have a look.
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THE CONSPIRACY OF THE ELITES.

THE CONSPIRACY OF THE ELITES.

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Sure, have fun :D

ch 471 After Thought & Final Message

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You are welcomed.

ch 471 After Thought & Final Message

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