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Khavos_Rudd
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6mth
Commented I think an uninfluenced Ves would have directly interacted with the Ace. He knows by now that there is serious trouble coming over from Messer 87. Moreover, the more high-profile he is the better for him and his clan. At the end of the day, even if the Red Asso. values him, they will not coddle his brilliance by restricting his movements. They might actually permanently assign on ace pilot on his guard unit and still let him run around.
I think the decision to go such a long way around with Alexa is a flawed decision influenced by the Crown. Sure, Ketis is 't an 'official' apprentice if this chapter is correct, but she has been with him for years and still hasn't grasped his skill. What makes Alexa special enough to succeed?
ch 5268 A Difficult Offer
The Mech Touch
Sci-fi · Exlor
6mth
Commented I expect the nxt few dozen or so chapters to be slower, more "slice of life" so to speak.
ch 5257 Hot Commodity
The Mech Touch
Sci-fi · Exlor
6mth
Replied to smgo27911 warlords are the Expedition or Pioneer leaders in charge of any raiding parties. Warfighters are the mech pilots, fighter pilots, and warship pilots doing the fighting.
ch 5247 The Rise of the New Elites
The Mech Touch
Sci-fi · Exlor
6mth
Commented Ok Exlor, you proved why this is the only novel over 2500 words that I have kept at.
ch 5226 Cast the Votes
The Mech Touch
Sci-fi · Exlor
1yr
Commented Still missing your work. The world you created hard a way of making cultivation matter.
ch 419 Into Harm's Way (1)
Paragon of Destruction
Fantasy · TomVanDyke
2yr
Replied to Rushinator Not sure about the mechanisms, but they can ve forced to resign. Even sell shares.
Share dilution into scrap paper is one of the more common ways. There can be a 'round' of financing forcing him to infuse more into the company to keep shares.
We already know he wasnt keen on money, implying he was careless about his shares.
His company may hv bn in csr with organizatiins like the orphanage. They culd threaten to cease all support etc
Still, it was a bit rushed.
ch 0 1 The Beginning
The Golden Throne
Fantasy · jdbeue
2yr
Commented You should stop this chauvinist nonsense. His family's fate is unknown and these people are the first sent out to find him. Regardless of whatever tactical genius he has, he cannot afford to be merciful. Neither should he be in that state.
ch 16 Vera's Magic
Legacy of the Dark Sage
Fantasy · Lessyr
2yr
Commented Poorly executed plot
ch 228 Prison Break?
Complete Martial Arts Attributes
Eastern · Don't Enter The Jianghu
2yr
Commented here comes the nerf...skipping 10 chapters instead of the usual 100. This novel won't survive without the MC showing off so we dont have long to wait
ch 428 Heavenly Punishment Seal, The End Of An Era
Unparalleled After Ten Consecutive Draws
Eastern · Carefree Smile
2yr
Replied to Christopher_Hill_ The first 25 chapters that I read - and the next 5 I scrolled through looking for interactions - were void of dialogue.
Leaving aside the bullied trope, the self-isolation is a big problem. If the bullying is what is being used to justify the lack of character interactions, then it doubly makes the novel a failure. This is because it means the author is completely incapable of adding this crucial part of any work of literature.
Honestly, can you distinguish what is happening from something going on in his head? Even if the novel is indeed about someone in a coma and simply dreaming about having an adventure, what is the point of it all?
ch 28 Home sweet home!
Primordial Dimensions
Fantasy · HideousGrain
Khavos_Rudd
Divine Path System
Fantasy · _Transcendent