dominion629

5mth

Commented

I read somewhere but couldn't find it again that your block come from the fact that you send him to kill a lot of beast and that it wasn't really how he should act because of the Force. I thought you could maybe use a loophole where the beast are controlled by someone to attack so they are considered as the attack of that personne. So if he is hurt three time total by any or a collective of the beast technicaly he should be able to use the force to attack. So just have him only use his swordmanship at the begining and the force after three attacks.

ch 64 Hiatus and New Story Sample

dominion629

7mth

Posted

I love this story. The multiverse part of the story is really well thought through, and i always love a good jedi start in a mixed world story. I followed the story since the first day the first chapter was posted. I give this story 3 power stones daily, even with the hiatus statut, it's really worth it and worth reading. Already re-read it two times since the hiatus.

dominion629

8mth

Posted

It's a good story somewhat different from other marvel fanfiction and the translation is pretty good. I'm happy someone picked it up again.

I Am in Marvel with Unlimited Cards

Movies · DarkShadow95

dominion629

8mth

Commented

I miss you...

ch 64 Hiatus and New Story Sample

Reincarnated into Twilight & The Multiverse

Movies · FallenEnt

dominion629

2yr

Commented

"card" est pour un jeu de carte. Pour une carte de type carte du monde utilise "map".

Joz was immediately delighted and asked David if there was a card onboard.

dominion629

2yr

Commented

"fly" est voler comme un avion ou un oiseau. tu veux utiliser "steal" pour voler comme un voleur.

His incarnation wouldn't usually be here, but thanks to his wish, This character was there. Joz lived in poverty and had to fly to survive, especially since he was an orphan. Unfortunately, he was caught by several traffickers and had arrived here. Joz did not know he had eaten a devil's fruit; the devil's fruits were only of a simple legend like the dragons on the four seas.