Primit

11mth

Replied to Spelloyal

It was 2 chapters ahead yesterday (when I fell for it and subbed without thinking haha), guess they are building up the stockpile. Though still bad to say 5 chapters when it's not. Could also be a copy paste error with the blurb at the bottom of each chapter, though I might be giving them too much benefit of the doubt there.

There's currently 5 advanced chapters there

Primit

11mth

Commented

Lies, I subbed but there's only 2 chapters in advance.

There's currently 5 advanced chapters there

Primit

1yr

Commented

No kidding, Roshi was able to blow up the Moon with a power level of what, 500 or so?... Our MC has a power level of 8,000,000,000,000,000 and 0 training... Pretty sure he's going to sneeze and accidentally crack the planet like an egg.

[Congratulations! You have designed the person you will become from now on... Remember, the template you have chosen is extremely powerful. With a power level equal to or stronger than Goku in the Super Saiyan God form, and equivalent to half the power of the God of Destruction Beerus, you will be a god in relation to other characters in the time context you have chosen. Your bloodline possesses an innate divine Qi, and the Saiyan bloodline is pure and holds unlimited potential, even stronger than the hero of the story. So be careful not to accidentally destroy the world and, with it, your starting point.]

Dragon Ball: The Legendary Manga Maker!

Anime & Comics · BlackStar_BH

Primit

1yr

Commented

I would have chosen to start with the Cold Clan. They are probably one of if not THE most powerful race in the universe, with Frieza being almost unbeatable just lazing around, and being able to match Super Saiyan Blue Goku/Vegeta after just four months of training, heck if he trained a bit more to let his new form stabilize rather then rushing off to get revenge he wouldn't have ran out of stamina and would have won. Then there's the whole Black Frieza form he unlocks in the Manga after 10 years of training in a Hyperbolic Time Chamber. That's on top of them being the overlords of a hyper advanced alien empire... Yup, they are definitely the strongest choice.

[Frieza Race]

Dragon Ball: The Legendary Manga Maker!

Anime & Comics · BlackStar_BH

Primit

1yr

Replied to HarryBlack

He might not have been able to afford it, pretty sure it and the Lightning Devil Fruit are basically considered the strongest.

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Reborn as an Angel in Custom Made Demon King

Anime & Comics · Sad_Sadist

Primit

1yr

Commented

Maybe if your going to do a rank based system, don't tell us the % bonus, Instead of Novice(+5%), Just leave it as Novice. Would look less clustered that way, and also leaves it open for you to power scale skills appropriately as the story progresses, rather then going for a "Hard" system and locking yourself in. Also no need to have all those empty categories just to say "None", no reason to write them in if they are empty.

Grandmaster (+250%) - None

Reborn as an Angel in Custom Made Demon King

Anime & Comics · Sad_Sadist

Primit

1yr

Commented

I liked the old level based approach for skills better. This new system is so much more cluttered. All those empty categories shown... and you haven't even reduced the bloat after the skills because you still include their %.... Just worse all round.

ch 0 6 Gresit

Reborn as an Angel in Custom Made Demon King

Anime & Comics · Sad_Sadist

Primit

1yr

Commented

I mean... it was said way back that when he gave the police a sketch of the killer angel he didn't even try to hide anything and it was basically just a sketch of himself... The MC be all like.

Duncan hummed. "Well, good luck on your little game, I guess…."

Marvel: The Social Link System

Movies · edgy_incel

Primit

1yr

Replied to Spelloyal

Depends, from memory the "Spider" powers are granted to people chosen by a trans-dimensional entity called "The Weaver", an event such as getting bit by a spider is more of a formality. So it would really depend on if that entity would be interested in our MC... and even if she is, that isn't necessarily a good thing.

"Oww!" exclaimed the girl. When Duncan turned to face the voice, he noticed Cindy Moon scratching her neck.

Marvel: The Social Link System

Movies · edgy_incel

Primit

1yr

Commented

*Conceptual Intelligence*

Conseptual Inteligence.

Bleach: Spiritual Pathway (Multiverse fic)

Anime & Comics · AllBullshit

Primit

1yr

Replied to Nike13K

She can lengthen her vine hair as well as control it... Even if physics apply and aren't negated by "Superpower", then all she would need to do is bend her hair and have it resting on the ground or wrap it around a streetlamp or something. That way she could create leverage and redirect weight away from herself.

If each strand of her hair was able to lift 300 kg of weight, wouldn't she be invincible?

MHA: Living as Mineta is hard

Anime & Comics · akikan40

Primit

1yr

Posted

From reading the synopsis you might be thinking "That sounds nuts....How the hell can the Author make that work?" I am here to tell you that they somehow pull it off, really enjoying it so far and can't wait to see hows things go :)

The Reincarnator's Tavern

Movies · GnomeBob

Primit

1yr

Commented

Well, that's not good. He only got the 1 doctored scan after all.

Viz interrupted, "Or, we could delete the scans. Then, if we decide to send him to Coruscant, we can perform a fresh test at that time. Otherwise, they'd notice the timestamp on the test."

The Reincarnator's Tavern

Movies · GnomeBob

Primit

1yr

Commented

Pretty sure if you ever lose him you will be dead.... that's kinda the disadvantage to becoming a Jinchuriki.

'The only downside to all this I suppose, is if I ever lose you, I'll lose access to your abilities as well.' Daiki mused, perched over the top of a cliff side, overlooking a small mining village.

Naruto: Systematic Shinobi

Anime & Comics · 0_Jordinio_0

Primit

1yr

Replied to DaoistJB

It's a Feudal society and he's buying a few hundred pounds of metal, not to mention there has to be some formation or something on those weights to have something that heavy be so small. Makes sense it would be pricey I guess.

"Eh, one hundred and fifty thousand ryo, pretty cheap compared to the heavier shit." the man shrugged.

Naruto: Systematic Shinobi

Anime & Comics · 0_Jordinio_0

Primit

2yr

Replied to Heavens_Edge

The novel had the same name as his weapon "The Empyrean Overlord". Sorry that it took me so long to reply haha, for some reason I wasn't sent a notification, only noticed because I randomly looked back through some of my comments.

"This is not your ordinary treasure— it's a Soul Weapon," Madam Feng said with a smile on her face. "And it's called the Empyrean Overlord."

Cultivation Online

Games · MyLittleBrother

Primit

2yr

Replied to QCh3ng_Realmlord

I mean, he was obviously bad enough at the game that he needed to install VR Cheat Engine.... stands to reason really that he isn't some combat prodigy or something.

This exposed the weakness of Jiang Li's lack of actual combat experience. He had the advantage in attributes and held a weapon, but he was dragged into a brutish fight by a monster.

Cultivation! My Augmented Statuses Have Unlimited Duration

Eastern · Turtle Shell and Hemp Rope

Primit

2yr

Replied to Heavens_Edge

Pretty sure it's a reference to a certain novel that no longer exists.... caused a fair bit of controversy in the translation scene. Basically, they claimed they were translating a novel, took donations for bonus chapters and stuff, then when no one could find the novel, doubled down and called everyone liars. Turns out they were the liars and it was an original novel, doesn't really mean much now but this was back before original novels became popular and they ended up dropping the book and basically ghosting out of embarassment. Looking back though, it's a shame.... it was a great novel, just a few years too early.

"This is not your ordinary treasure— it's a Soul Weapon," Madam Feng said with a smile on her face. "And it's called the Empyrean Overlord."

Cultivation Online

Games · MyLittleBrother

Primit

2yr

Replied to Nymerio

I'm pretty sure it's a running total, as in it doesn't reset to 0 at each tier, so 99/100 would become 100/200. Which would make sense, it's Qi the same Qi that he uses for techniques, once he reaches the next tier it's not like all the Qi disappears and he becomes mortal.

"Brother Yuan is truly… unfathomable…" Xiao Hua could barely stand still at this moment, feeling as though her common sense regarding the Cultivation world had been flipped upside-down by Yuan's profound existence.

Cultivation Online

Games · MyLittleBrother

Primit

3yr

Posted

Now, I'll be the first to admit I haven't read many chapters of this novel, maybe in 20-30 chapters the quality will improve and it will become the best thing since sliced bread..... However, first impressions matter.... and it's bad, what really lets this novel down is the spelling/grammar mistakes and that the author puts no effort into fixing them.... seriously, I get that English isn't your 1st language, but just get Grammarly, it's free.... you can even install it as an add-on for most browsers if you don't want to use their website. As an example, in chapter 1 some guy went through every sentence and put sentence comments in pointing out the mistakes, that was 3 months ago and the mistakes are still there..... So, yeah.... might be a good story, but at the very least I can tell you it's written very poorly.

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Anime & Comics · Soul_Caliber

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