SexyYoungMaster

1h

Replied to SexyYoungMaster

Inexperiences*

SexyYoungMaster

1h

Replied to Felixxx

Author isn’t smart and it reads like he used chat gpt to fill in his inabilities. This the worst type of author.

SexyYoungMaster

2h

Commented

So he didn’t learn at all from his last life about not ’becoming a target’??? He received attention people corrupt and greedy officals bc he was so smart. Now he does the same thing here with no caution at all. People at UNSC can be just as evil as the people we was with before. Is he really the genius you say he is?

Commander Cole had read about the brilliance of this young child and wanted him to join the UNSC in the future once he is of age. Commander Cole was not doing this out of the kindness of his heart, no he was doing it because if he manages to get somebody like that in the UNSC and he thrives then he would be able to get Promoted fast.

Halo Reborn

Video Games · Dr_Dred

SexyYoungMaster

6d

Replied to Master_Cheif

Dawg the chapter was full of grammatical errors, mainly run-ons. What do you mean ‘little to none’.

ch 0 1 Chapter 1

A Hollow in DC and Beyond.

Anime & Comics · Azazyel

SexyYoungMaster

7d

Replied to ObamaUchiha

It’s basically super speed. I’d imagine he’d be able to react and position his body to stay on the ground.

Victor kept his focus up as he ran at his top speed, making him look like a blur. Every second, he traveled 10 miles, and thanks to his heavily enhanced senses, he could perfectly control his run so he didn't run into buildings, cars, people, or anything else in his way.

Toji Fushiguro: Young Justice.

Anime & Comics · A_Real_Werewolf234

SexyYoungMaster

7d

Commented

Liking the new updates to the chapter. Good luck!

"Yup, dude, sticks a needle in your eyes and injects the ink. They were really painful, but they are sick. Thanks for the help offer; you are a doll."

Toji Fushiguro: Young Justice.

Anime & Comics · A_Real_Werewolf234

SexyYoungMaster

9d

Replied to Gurnoor_Singh_4533

Not to mention his descriptions are full of run on sentences. It makes it soooo difficult to read.

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Dragon from Winterfell

Book&Literature · Arcane_Eso

SexyYoungMaster

10d

Replied to Shiftingreapers

Yeah seeing is the same thing as sensing I realize

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Toji Fushiguro: Young Justice.

Anime & Comics · A_Real_Werewolf234

SexyYoungMaster

11d

Replied to A_Real_Werewolf234

I understand lol. Sorry for my comments if you’ve seen the others

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Toji Fushiguro: Young Justice.

Anime & Comics · A_Real_Werewolf234

SexyYoungMaster

11d

Commented

I’m literally a prophet. Next is gonna be Batman looking into him as per annoying cliches go.

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Toji Fushiguro: Young Justice.

Anime & Comics · A_Real_Werewolf234

SexyYoungMaster

11d

Commented

Now the league will most likely know one of their identities was found, making the mc a prime target for observation. Batman will start trying to look into the mc, won’t find anything, and will start something. The mc will fight with the league because he lied make a truce, and be put with young justice team. The team saves world. The end.

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Toji Fushiguro: Young Justice.

Anime & Comics · A_Real_Werewolf234

SexyYoungMaster

11d

Replied to A_Real_Werewolf234

Why is he in front of the flash in the first place?? Dude should have just walked away.

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Toji Fushiguro: Young Justice.

Anime & Comics · A_Real_Werewolf234

SexyYoungMaster

11d

Commented

And yet they are still gonna be suspicious and then look into you, I’m calling it. Should’ve just said no to help.

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Toji Fushiguro: Young Justice.

Anime & Comics · A_Real_Werewolf234

SexyYoungMaster

11d

Replied to Wachdog

You’re an actual degenerate, get some help

He seemed happy that Victor was up and awake. From what he could tell, Victor looked at his surroundings, seeing that he was in the middle of a city—Central City. His senses were wild, and he reached up and touched his head.

Toji Fushiguro: Young Justice.

Anime & Comics · A_Real_Werewolf234

SexyYoungMaster

11d

Replied to Shiftingreapers

He cannot see cursed energy? He only senses curses and their shape no?

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Toji Fushiguro: Young Justice.

Anime & Comics · A_Real_Werewolf234

SexyYoungMaster

11d

Commented

You do not need so many question marks. Two of them were wholly unnecessary as they were statements and not even a question.

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Toji Fushiguro: Young Justice.

Anime & Comics · A_Real_Werewolf234

SexyYoungMaster

11d

Replied to Nyx_Alexander17

Degenerate

Late at night in his Colledge Dorm, Victor scrolled through the internet, reading his favorite Reddit posts or opening Webnovels he liked to read. Some were better than others, and some were not so much, but he did not care about the ratings.