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Borne A Kitsune · C6
Nanomancer Reborn - I've Become A Snow Girl?
inesbelio22: I really don't want shiro×Lyrica relationship i'm not against yuri or something but it will be so contradicting with shiro's personnallity and her caracter it just feels weirdNanomancer Reborn - I've Become A Snow Girl? · C59
Boss_LingLan: So he is bipolar? But we haven't seen him suddenly change... Wait I am not the only one who feels that Xie Yi acts different around Luo Lang right? *sighs* But with this second personality of Xie Yi, I guess we'll be able to see another set of killer training methods to tamed it and also to be put into good use of the Lingtian mecha clan.It's Not Easy to Be a Man After Travelling to the Future · C533
faisalbudeiri: Humans these greedy pieces of **** such a good thing shiro isn’t human anymore and can’t be associated with that disgusting raceNanomancer Reborn - I've Become A Snow Girl? · C44
MilkGod: Random fact of the day: You can remove any letter from "Seat" and still have a word.Nanomancer Reborn - I've Become A Snow Girl? · C3
LoudHermit: I really like this story but I have some suggestions. Not that you have to follow them as I still will read happily 😁.
First, background on the main character. How does she come off, what type of posture, stance, and walk does she have, and what does her resting face look like? Does she show her true emotions on her face? Does she wear a mask of emotions? Does she have any specific mannerisms like crossing her arms or brushing he fingers through hair? These physical ques show something about the character and give more depth. The fact that she can kill without any remorse, that she seems to be dense to attraction from the opposite sex, or how her personality seems to change constantly should be explained and relevant. Also you should leave some room for development. Not that she has to start off as weak, indecisive, naive or anything of the like, but just that in some way her character will evolve as she interacts with the things around her whether that be in a positive, negative, or neutral. Does she have any interesting ir odd things about her character?
Secondly, there's not much info about the world she's currently in(first arc). I'm picturing Ancient China from context but it would be nice to have some more vivid descriptions of her surrounding. Is she in a realistic world? A mix of modern and ancient? A mystical world? how does she interact with her surroundings, even on an immediate level? Like how she feels about not having proper toilet paper or how her bed is hard. Or maybe because of her past she actually appreciates her current environment more. How does she go about the daily duties that she is most likely unused to? And how much does she really differ from the original host? She seems to be in nature up to chapter 6 as a part of the army, so how does she feel about the climate, terrain, plants, and animals around her? How does her past affect her view on war and violence? Does she have any survival medical or culinary, strategic knowledge? And if she does, why? All of these apply to life in the military in addition to fighting prowess. Then looking forward, what is her understanding of etiquette and interpersonal interaction in this world as she integrates back into society after war is over?
Thirdly, how does she feel when she interacts with the other characters in this world? Does she have a hard time connecting with them because of cultural differences and make little slip ups in her actions and words? Does she have some previous experiences or skills that allow her to assimilate more effortlessly?How does she modify her actions when one character in respect to another or does she not do that at all. Is she good with social interaction in general, or is she socially inept for some reason?
Next it would be nice to have a better understanding of the side characters. What do they look like, and what eccentricities or habits do they have? How does the mc view or percieve them and what are her feelings about each character? What are the other characters opinions of the mc and how do they change once she inhabits the body if they do at all?
Finally, how does she percieve her current situation and what is her main purpose or goal in all of this? What is the main motivator in her actions? How does being in a new body feel to her. She seems to be pretty calm about the whole situation so is there a reason for this? If not try to incorporate more relatable/realistic reactions to the idea of her having a system. An average person wouldn't be calm and collected after dying and being told all of these crazy things. Does she think she's dreaming? Does she go into shock? Does she ignore her feelings and act calm but then later on is affected by the realization of her predicament? Is she scared or even terrified? Or maybe she truly is calm and why would she feel one of these ways?
Anyway thanks for writing and reading my comment if you author. Take my words with a grain of salt👍😋Transmigration System: Arrogant Boss on the Move!
Transmigration System: Arrogant Boss on the Move!
LoudHermit: Lol I was cringing a littleReborn: Legendary Female General is here! · C15
Cringysweets: I was crying while reading the whole chap coz of this😅Reborn: Legendary Female General is here! · C15
The Curse of White Princess
LoudHermit: Matriarch is a female head of the family. I think you mean to say patriarch, which is a male head of the family.Reborn: Legendary Female General is here! · C15
Reborn: Legendary Female General is here! · C15
Chrysenthium: Wow what a multilayered strategy. I gotta give it to the alliance, they literally rolled out a red carpet and let First Men go instead of surrounding them and taking down as many as possible. 😑. Third Men running away literally cements their position as traitors. Moreover, everyone's just done First Men a favour by taking out the attacking team of one of the top four, while thanking First Men. Qiao Ting watches as each side dukes it out, and Boss who probably understood how Qiao Ting will act watches behind him while she plans for the rest...🤤
It's ridiculous how the situation is so messed up. It's like these guys forgot the purpose of battle Royale.
I don't know if I got all of it but damn...how scary 😨😨It's Not Easy to Be a Man After Travelling to the Future · C495
natsuriayuko: Today, Boss manipulates kiddos. In the future, she'll be manipulating bigshots. She'll be below one person and above billions... that one person being her momma lmaoIt's Not Easy to Be a Man After Travelling to the Future · C495
NPC_Daddy: I really want to see how QT will react to Boss Lan being a beautiful ladyyy~ I hope he gets extremely flusteredIt's Not Easy to Be a Man After Travelling to the Future · C495
LoudHermit: I bet profound insight can not only duplicate but also improve techniquesIt's Not Easy to Be a Man After Travelling to the Future · C464
It's Not Easy to Be a Man After Travelling to the Future · C464
Technothepig: "although his force of presence was as strong as ever, it was no longer so keen and sharp that it would irritate others. It seemed as if he had learned how to temper it ..."
nothing drives character development faster than a private lesson with One Punch LanIt's Not Easy to Be a Man After Travelling to the Future · C425
Technothepig: "it was hard to be sure whether the other would not advance to ace in two years."
pfft if shes not an imperial mecha in two years she clearly didnt try at allIt's Not Easy to Be a Man After Travelling to the Future · C425
Technothepig: "She wanted to make it so that Qiao Ting would be plagued by psychological demons and would no longer have the courage to challenge her again!"
damn, Boss Lan's really about to give this dude crippling depression just to avoid doing more work in the future lmaoooIt's Not Easy to Be a Man After Travelling to the Future · C425
Technothepig: Seeing the shock on Qiao Ting's face, a trace of pity appeared in Ling Lan's eyes. She then said, "I'm the main character. Get wrecked."It's Not Easy to Be a Man After Travelling to the Future · C425
Trial Marriage Husband: Need to Work Hard · C393
Yulia_Astanti: Can i get some spirit stones too.. ?? I need it to read the new novels.. 😂😂😂😂😂
Gu Ruoyun, please.. Share it with me.. 😂😂😁Evil Emperor's Wild Consort · C1185
Khem: This is an obvious trap. RIP idiots
Thanks for the chapterEvil Emperor's Wild Consort · C1185
Alliea: Give me some spirit stones too! I need them for the new novels!!!Evil Emperor's Wild Consort · C1185
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