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Veiled Princess: Why do you have that bottle?

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The Spider Queen · C34
4 hours ago
Please don't drop this novel if possible author. It's really good. View More
Defend the Queen · C12
1 day ago

LoudHermit: Thanks for the chapter. Although I'm sad about you dropping your other book I am excited for this one. It has great potential. I hope you don't drop it. No pressure though.

Moving Accounts · C10
3 weeks ago
Thanks for the chapter. Although I'm sad about you dropping your other book I am excited for this one. It has great potential. I hope you don't drop it. No pressure though. View More
Moving Accounts · C10
3 weeks ago

Roy_Senou: Since the 20th chapter is coming out soon, I decided to give my work a review. To be honest, the pacing is kind of slow and the world building is almost non existant at this point. Rules for the world have been introduced so once the main protagonist starts her adventure things should get better.

Overall, if you like isekai stories with a leveling system, adventure, some comedy, weak to strong, and female? protagonist, you can give this novel a try.

High School Girl's Adventure in Another World?
4 weeks ago

LoudHermit: I really live this story. It's quite interesting and unique. The main character is sensible and smart. There is a lot of potential for plot development. Good luck writing author. I will be reading

High School Girl's Adventure in Another World?
4 weeks ago
Lol I can't spell... love not live 😩 View More

LoudHermit: I really live this story. It's quite interesting and unique. The main character is sensible and smart. There is a lot of potential for plot development. Good luck writing author. I will be reading

High School Girl's Adventure in Another World?
4 weeks ago
Reading Status: C23
I really live this story. It's quite interesting and unique. The main character is sensible and smart. There is a lot of potential for plot development. Good luck writing author. I will be reading View More
High School Girl's Adventure in Another World?
4 weeks ago

Isaactomace: Aka the giant fat chicken

Nanomancer Reborn - I've Become A Snow Girl? · C406
1 month ago

darkoneko: "OH COME ON !" -- Lucian

Nanomancer Reborn - I've Become A Snow Girl? · C406
1 month ago

Kastper: 380 chapters just to see a snow woman that was spoken about in some of the first chapters well better late than never

Nanomancer Reborn - I've Become A Snow Girl? · C380
1 month ago

Haname: Hm... A human is reborn into a monster who pretends to be a human who pretends to be a monster.

Nanomancer Reborn - I've Become A Snow Girl? · C380
1 month ago
It's called anime logic View More

HydroNL: Why would she go with a random guy wtf? Really bizarre

Maiden Of The Splitting Moon · C88
1 month ago
🤣lol tru she just raised a flag View More

Jaren376: They're in Japan,and are Japanese, the is not jinx, it's flag

Full Dive: Eternal Phantasy · C38
2 months ago

Jaren376: They're in Japan,and are Japanese, the is not jinx, it's flag

Full Dive: Eternal Phantasy · C38
2 months ago
Oh no a love triangle is on😫😭 View More
Divine Enchantress: Night Emperor's Beloved Consort · C108
4 months ago
Chinese dragons do View More

Not_A_Nenuphar: I didn't know that dragons had eyebrows lol

Primordial System · C10
5 months ago
Reading Status: C178
This book is sooooo good I'm literally addicted. It keeps your interest and the updates are steady. I live the development of the main character and how she grows stronger View More
Nanomancer Reborn - I've Become A Snow Girl?
6 months ago
I cringe so hard View More
Young Miss Strike Back! · C1
6 months ago

AlephTav: I laughed, I cried, I GAVE BIRTH.

Swordmeister of Rome · C1
7 months ago

MilkGod: MilkGod's Fact: The earliest recorded case of a man giving up smoking was on April 5, 1679, when Johan Katsu, Sheriff of Turku, Finland, wrote in his diary "I quit smoking tobacco." He died one month later.

Oof, it be like that sometimes.

Nanomancer Reborn - I've Become A Snow Girl? · C119
8 months ago
Sure I would love to read your story View More

MasterMonsoon: LoudHermit. I liked your review. Would you be willing to read a story I'm working on and tell me your thoughts?

Transmigration System: Arrogant Boss on the Move!
8 months ago
Tsk tsk he doesn't even realize that he's already found his mate and his fate is sealed smh View More
Borne A Kitsune · C6
9 months ago
Reading Status: C59
It's really enjoyable 💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜 View More
Nanomancer Reborn - I've Become A Snow Girl?
10 months ago
Yeet View More

Davi05Fei: I really don't want shiro×Lyrica relationship i'm not against yuri or something but it will be so contradicting with shiro's personnallity and her caracter it just feels weird

Nanomancer Reborn - I've Become A Snow Girl? · C59
10 months ago
Yeet View More
Nanomancer Reborn - I've Become A Snow Girl? · C59
10 months ago
Bipolar isn't the correct terminology. Bipolar disorder is when a person has cycles of extreme depressive and manic periods but they still have the same personality or identity. The term you are looking for is multiple personality disorder or dissociative identity disorder. View More

RegCommander_Ling: So he is bipolar? But we haven't seen him suddenly change... Wait I am not the only one who feels that Xie Yi acts different around Luo Lang right? *sighs* But with this second personality of Xie Yi, I guess we'll be able to see another set of killer training methods to tamed it and also to be put into good use of the Lingtian mecha clan.

It's Not Easy to Be a Man After Travelling to the Future · C533
10 months ago
... and what species are you again...?lmao🧐🤔😏😅 View More

ChaoticLuck: Humans these greedy pieces of **** such a good thing shiro isn’t human anymore and can’t be associated with that disgusting race

Nanomancer Reborn - I've Become A Snow Girl? · C44
10 months ago
I very much appreciate this intellectual nugget View More

MilkGod: Random fact of the day: You can remove any letter from "Seat" and still have a word.

Nanomancer Reborn - I've Become A Snow Girl? · C3
10 months ago

LoudHermit: I really like this story but I have some suggestions. Not that you have to follow them as I still will read happily 😁.
First, background on the main character. How does she come off, what type of posture, stance, and walk does she have, and what does her resting face look like? Does she show her true emotions on her face? Does she wear a mask of emotions? Does she have any specific mannerisms like crossing her arms or brushing he fingers through hair? These physical ques show something about the character and give more depth. The fact that she can kill without any remorse, that she seems to be dense to attraction from the opposite sex, or how her personality seems to change constantly should be explained and relevant. Also you should leave some room for development. Not that she has to start off as weak, indecisive, naive or anything of the like, but just that in some way her character will evolve as she interacts with the things around her whether that be in a positive, negative, or neutral. Does she have any interesting ir odd things about her character?
Secondly, there's not much info about the world she's currently in(first arc). I'm picturing Ancient China from context but it would be nice to have some more vivid descriptions of her surrounding. Is she in a realistic world? A mix of modern and ancient? A mystical world? how does she interact with her surroundings, even on an immediate level? Like how she feels about not having proper toilet paper or how her bed is hard. Or maybe because of her past she actually appreciates her current environment more. How does she go about the daily duties that she is most likely unused to? And how much does she really differ from the original host? She seems to be in nature up to chapter 6 as a part of the army, so how does she feel about the climate, terrain, plants, and animals around her? How does her past affect her view on war and violence? Does she have any survival medical or culinary, strategic knowledge? And if she does, why? All of these apply to life in the military in addition to fighting prowess. Then looking forward, what is her understanding of etiquette and interpersonal interaction in this world as she integrates back into society after war is over?
Thirdly, how does she feel when she interacts with the other characters in this world? Does she have a hard time connecting with them because of cultural differences and make little slip ups in her actions and words? Does she have some previous experiences or skills that allow her to assimilate more effortlessly?How does she modify her actions when one character in respect to another or does she not do that at all. Is she good with social interaction in general, or is she socially inept for some reason?
Next it would be nice to have a better understanding of the side characters. What do they look like, and what eccentricities or habits do they have? How does the mc view or percieve them and what are her feelings about each character? What are the other characters opinions of the mc and how do they change once she inhabits the body if they do at all?
Finally, how does she percieve her current situation and what is her main purpose or goal in all of this? What is the main motivator in her actions? How does being in a new body feel to her. She seems to be pretty calm about the whole situation so is there a reason for this? If not try to incorporate more relatable/realistic reactions to the idea of her having a system. An average person wouldn't be calm and collected after dying and being told all of these crazy things. Does she think she's dreaming? Does she go into shock? Does she ignore her feelings and act calm but then later on is affected by the realization of her predicament? Is she scared or even terrified? Or maybe she truly is calm and why would she feel one of these ways?

Anyway thanks for writing and reading my comment if you author. Take my words with a grain of salt👍😋

Transmigration System: Arrogant Boss on the Move!
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