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unwashed_heathen: The protagonist is constantly saying something stupid or making awful decisions. It's somehow more annoying by the fact that a lot of the side characters feel well written and in character.

Fate/Heroes
3 weeks ago
At that point, the MC should have the strength to defend himself from Dumbledore and would of chipped away most of Dumbledore's supporters or at least his political power. View More

THE_EVIL_IMMORTAL: But as soon as Dumbledore finds out how talented he is he's going to be an enemy to the light side anyway Dumbledore will try to paint him as the second Voldemort

Rise of House Falken - Harry Potter Fan Fiction · C55
1 month ago
There is too much plot in my little slice of life. Whats with the MC training these two... he could be spending time consoling his daughters or plotting out on how to give the SHIELD group that eats at his shop a trail on all Hydra activity that will ruin all of Hydra's plans forcing their hand sooner than they are prepared for... but instead he is focusing on training Spiderman and his sidekick... feels weird that he just decided to train them both to be heroes. What about Natasha and all of them, she will be going up against monsters like Thanos and his ilk but she gets no training just a new suit. View More
Marvels Strongest Father · C55
1 month ago

MotherOfEvil: Indeed. Fluffy is innocent in all this.

Rise of House Falken - Harry Potter Fan Fiction · C58
1 month ago

Lomyril: This is definitely well thought out. The consequences make sense and the other wizards are rightfully outraged. While I agree the punishments to the teachers are appropriate, I still hope Fluffy will be ok. :)

Rise of House Falken - Harry Potter Fan Fiction · C58
1 month ago

HappyLittleSloth: It would be best for the MC to just ignore Harry at this point, there is no point in the MC trying to take Harry from Dumbledore since it would make him an enemy of both the Light and Dark side (Light for stealing Harry and Dark for taking over House Black).

At most it would benefit the MC to just plant seeds of doubt into Harry so he begins to question the motives of those around him. I get that Harry is sticking with Ron and Hermione because he never had friends and wants to keep the ones he does have even if he has to live a lie to keep them close. I think ruining the friendship between Ron and Harry in 2nd year using Toms Diary (giving it to Ron and not Ginny) would be a good first step of changing the story and preventing some of Dumbledore's plans and it would be a good way of causing Harry to distance himself from Dumbledore if he removes the memories from harry and have the MC make copies of the fallout and of Dumbledore removing memories. One of the smartest things the MC can do is rule from the shadows and making other people do his bidding without them knowing it. Knowing how to duel does not mean he knows how to fight, nor does it grant experience of fighting living beings who tend to be unpredictable.

Rise of House Falken - Harry Potter Fan Fiction · C55
1 month ago
It would be best for the MC to just ignore Harry at this point, there is no point in the MC trying to take Harry from Dumbledore since it would make him an enemy of both the Light and Dark side (Light for stealing Harry and Dark for taking over House Black).

At most it would benefit the MC to just plant seeds of doubt into Harry so he begins to question the motives of those around him. I get that Harry is sticking with Ron and Hermione because he never had friends and wants to keep the ones he does have even if he has to live a lie to keep them close. I think ruining the friendship between Ron and Harry in 2nd year using Toms Diary (giving it to Ron and not Ginny) would be a good first step of changing the story and preventing some of Dumbledore's plans and it would be a good way of causing Harry to distance himself from Dumbledore if he removes the memories from harry and have the MC make copies of the fallout and of Dumbledore removing memories. One of the smartest things the MC can do is rule from the shadows and making other people do his bidding without them knowing it. Knowing how to duel does not mean he knows how to fight, nor does it grant experience of fighting living beings who tend to be unpredictable. View More
Rise of House Falken - Harry Potter Fan Fiction · C55
1 month ago
Type it out and i'll look for it tomorrow when Discord finishes updating. (going to update it over night since its been a year since I last opened it) View More

MrMerlin: Come to discord and I will try to explain the whole thing about the talent

Skyrim system in Harry Potter World · C35
2 months ago

HappyLittleSloth: If Ron can be considered a great wizard, Harry must be like Merlin. Ron was one of the most useless characters to the point that he is only there to show that while Harry is pathetic he is at least not as bad as Ron. Also the "talent" aspect of the story is a bit weird since you said Dumbledore has like 11-12 talent. were the Founders Four like at 20 talent, with Merlin at 40-50? its a bit confusing since Dumbledore has such low talent if we are going by a 0-100 scale.

I feel like the power scaling is just to keep the MC weak so he abuses save/reload to degrade his skills to show that while the MC has a system he is not OP. I feel like the system would of been fine w/o the talent so the MC just works harder to keep up with and then surpass the others, now it just seems like as long as he raises his talent he can slack then force a "character reflection" arc where the MC gets beat down into oblivion and makes him realize he was to arrogant and he should work even harder than before.

Skyrim system in Harry Potter World · C35
2 months ago
If Ron can be considered a great wizard, Harry must be like Merlin. Ron was one of the most useless characters to the point that he is only there to show that while Harry is pathetic he is at least not as bad as Ron. Also the "talent" aspect of the story is a bit weird since you said Dumbledore has like 11-12 talent. were the Founders Four like at 20 talent, with Merlin at 40-50? its a bit confusing since Dumbledore has such low talent if we are going by a 0-100 scale.

I feel like the power scaling is just to keep the MC weak so he abuses save/reload to degrade his skills to show that while the MC has a system he is not OP. I feel like the system would of been fine w/o the talent so the MC just works harder to keep up with and then surpass the others, now it just seems like as long as he raises his talent he can slack then force a "character reflection" arc where the MC gets beat down into oblivion and makes him realize he was to arrogant and he should work even harder than before. View More
Skyrim system in Harry Potter World · C35
2 months ago
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Harry Potter And The Rise Of Golden Falcon · C62
3 months ago

F1nal: The heck why would you need 2ch for a quidditch match lol do you think this is dbz? XD

Wizardry System · C27
3 months ago

Lebensohl: Haha, Lu Chong is such a good student. Taking care of his teachers problems unlike the rest that just cause more

Library of Heaven's Path · C372
3 months ago

Raze_: Between programming and magic theory the mc can probably start modifying some basic first-year spells, for example the lumos spell, if he were to dual cast lumos, increase the mana supplied to the spell, and modify lumos to shorten the duration to a fraction of a second but increasing the brightness a few times over then our mc would basically have a flash grenade spell, which would probably be pretty effective in duels.

Skyrim system in Harry Potter World · C28
3 months ago
He was born a few months at the very most before Naruto as it showed in a flashback when Kushina and the 3rds wife walking past Sasuke's mom with him in her arms as they were going to the bunker (or wherever they were) to deliver Naruto and she told them that they named him after the 3rds father. Considering Sasuke was born to a clan head, his birth should of been announced to the village so it was either a very recent birth or it was kept a secret till he was a few months old to make sure everything went fine.

Or Sasuke is a bit older than his generation and they just decided to make him look the same age as his generation like they did with Kakashi. Kakashi was 5 when he graduated and the others of his graduating class were like 12... but then again like you said, the timeline is a mess and considering the author did not think the manga/anime would be on for as long as it was, probably didn't really put as much effort into the backstory since it played no big part into the plot until the very end and that was when they did a ton of flashbacks in order to fill in the void that was left at the very start. View More

Kid_Kayor: No they ignore it because the timeline is ****ed or naruto tried to advance and be like the sanin or itachi, sasuke was born before naruto

Gamer Naruto · C11
4 months ago
I am sure Neji at one point during the Chunin Exams said he remembered Naruto being tied as the "dead last" with Lee. Naruto wasn't older than them but he did join the academy early because he kept begging the 3rd, just kept failing because of the high amount of chakra and no control. (I would have to reread that part to be 100% sure or it could of just been from a fanfic I read and am confusing it with canon, it happens sometimes since 99% of fanfics never change canon no matter how OP they make Naruto View More

Nameless_Godless: Actually Naruto tried to graduate early twice not that he was older than his classmates that why it got made fun of so much

Gamer Naruto · C11
4 months ago

Hanshi: Maybe you were trying to say that his birthday came and got confused with Christmas?

Harry Potter: Orphans Ascension · C22
4 months ago

DonnutHermit: Xmas in Summer vacation in England? In confused...

Harry Potter: Orphans Ascension · C22
4 months ago

Licorice: its sad.... any novel with 2 male mc/oc is either meh or utter crap.... if Leo was female and not this cringe boy whould be much better

My Hero Academia: The Ajin Gamer · C20
5 months ago

BoredKing: The quality of this has dropped substantially. The earlier chapters showed lots of promise and made sense. The last few read like a different author wrote them.

My Hero Academia: The Ajin Gamer · C20
5 months ago

HappyLittleSloth: https://naruto(dot)fandom(dot)com/wiki/Naruto_Uzumaki you can use this site for just about anything related for the series.

Swift (Lightning+Wind) is the fastest element

Wood was strong because it could suppress the tailed beasts. I think its just because Hashirama and Madara (senju and Uchiha) are related to the sage of six paths.

None of the clan heads hated Naruto but if I had to pick one I would say Fugaku Uchiha because the Uchiha wanted power and they would of blamed naruto for the attack causing people to distrust the clan.

Boruto's Vanashing Rasengan was created by using wind durring the creation of Rasengan rather than adding it after.

I would say the best Sagemode would be the one Hashirama used since it was not part of any summons contract but rather part of nature itself and he seemed to be able to enter it at will (might be because of his wood element being about nature)

For Uzu being destroyed, I think that was done shortly after Kushina moved to Konoha and if I had to say who did it... prob Kiri and Kumo (Kiri to gain more land and Kumo to get the Uzumaki bloodline like when they tried to kidnap Kushina)

https://naruto(dot)fandom(dot)com/wiki/Narutopedia this site will help you a lot when it comes to finding info about just about anything in naruto since its updated by fans who are willing to do the research and stuff like that

Gamer Naruto · C0
5 months ago
https://naruto(dot)fandom(dot)com/wiki/Naruto_Uzumaki you can use this site for just about anything related for the series.

Swift (Lightning+Wind) is the fastest element

Wood was strong because it could suppress the tailed beasts. I think its just because Hashirama and Madara (senju and Uchiha) are related to the sage of six paths.

None of the clan heads hated Naruto but if I had to pick one I would say Fugaku Uchiha because the Uchiha wanted power and they would of blamed naruto for the attack causing people to distrust the clan.

Boruto's Vanashing Rasengan was created by using wind durring the creation of Rasengan rather than adding it after.

I would say the best Sagemode would be the one Hashirama used since it was not part of any summons contract but rather part of nature itself and he seemed to be able to enter it at will (might be because of his wood element being about nature)

For Uzu being destroyed, I think that was done shortly after Kushina moved to Konoha and if I had to say who did it... prob Kiri and Kumo (Kiri to gain more land and Kumo to get the Uzumaki bloodline like when they tried to kidnap Kushina)

https://naruto(dot)fandom(dot)com/wiki/Narutopedia this site will help you a lot when it comes to finding info about just about anything in naruto since its updated by fans who are willing to do the research and stuff like that View More
Gamer Naruto · C0
5 months ago
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Gamer Naruto · C0
5 months ago
I think that most of the students start at 8 and graduate at 12 (so about 4 years of school), Naruto joined when he was 6 because he kept begging the Hokage, but the teachers taught him wrong info so he would die on a mission or so they could keep failing him and then kick him out. Neji stated Naruto and Lee were both tied for "Dead Last" for their year and they are both about a year older than Naruto. I think I remember the 3rd let naruto join early but didn't let him test out early if he was going to join early. View More

Microy4: Didnt he fail twice because he wanted to graduate early?Most ninja in the village became genin when they were twelve.

Gamer Naruto · C11
5 months ago
Take your time, real life problems always come first. View More
Harry Potter: Orphans Ascension · C17
5 months ago
No golden trio plz, Hermione only stayed with them because of the troll. she would be a good researcher for the MC and would probably fight against the wizerding world if she is shown how corrupt it is and how muggleborns can't be anything higher than a secretary in the Ministry. Neville would most likely join Harry and Ron once they find out Nevilles mom was his Godmother thus making the Golden Trio (Neville and Hermione would play the roll of the 'voice of reason' in their respective groups) View More

JakeElliott: Yesh she is confirmed :D

Harry Potter: Orphans Ascension · C14
5 months ago
I didn't reread any of the past chapters you fixed, but if you are going to change the entire story I feel like I am either going to be forced to reread the entire story or just try and understand why so many things got changed... View More
Gamer Naruto · C21
5 months ago
I decided to give it a try and currently have 3 chapters down (pretty much just the prologue and the introduction to the MC and the way the system works (I will most likely just write as I go instead of planning it all out, like the old saying goes "no plan survives first contact with the enemy"). but it is not published yet because I want to stockpile up some chapters for when I can't think of the direction I want to take the story so there won't be times when I go a week without posting chapters. View More

DAIMMY: Well thanks for the reply. Also you have the creativity. My recommendation to you is don't write your stories in Arcs. Like the big Arcs in bnha like training Arc festival Arc etc. Instead write it in smaller Arcs or bullet points like the goals of the MC's or the storyline's. This mostly works for fanfics as there is already an established plot.

Also your problem with writing fillers might be cured be just imaging the character's interaction in your head. You can modify their personalities and then imagine them. And then write about them in filler chapters.

Do note that this does not work for everyone. But still worth a shot. If it doesn't work out for you then my apologies.

My Hero Academia: The Ajin Gamer · C5
6 months ago
I was thinking of making my own but I have always had a problem of getting straight to the point and leaving out the fluff and filler. A good story needs a bit of filler to flesh out the character and world building while my story would end up being a giant info dump that reads like a list of objectives. If anything I would have to start writing the info dump/list of objectives then use it as a storyboard and foundation of the story and add filler to make it into a proper story.

The only problem with writing like that is; I would have to write the full story (at least in arcs) before I even release a single chapter as a single change towards the end of the arc could force me to go back and rework the story to fit the change rather than just tell the readers to imagine the main character did something. (now that I think of it I could just add a chapter with a flashback to a past time skip where it shows the MC starting to lean w/e power up I give him.)

To get to my point: it would be very time consuming and the odds of me not getting fed up with my own inability to get my point across with as few words as possible or just not being able to convey whats in my head onto paper without sounding crazy. (Also it was pointed out to me that when I try to fight my own writing style and let the story flow rather than getting straight to the point, my writing tends to look forced and I end up rambling to the point where I get nothing done. A prime example would be this reply since I wanted it to be three sentences max.) View More

DAIMMY: Great man I really liked the idea why don't you try your luck at writing a fanfic with a gamer quirk maybe. You seem very good at it.

My Hero Academia: The Ajin Gamer · C5
6 months ago
100% if he gets the Sharingan, Orochimaru and/or Danzo will try and kidnap him. View More
The Gamer [Naruto] · C2
6 months ago
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