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Librosa: it’s not a storm dragon, if there’s no water.At best it’s tempest dragon. And seriously grammar is really bad.

Outcast (Dragon Cultivation series) · C3
11 hours ago
Why is everything in present tense? It doesn't make for a good story flow, especially when talking about past events View More
Outcast (Dragon Cultivation series) · C3
11 hours ago
Can you point out which chapters these were? View More

Enraged_Bear: She was the one who killed Cornelius, and the Barron and his men. She was the one that was with Cornelius during the time leading here.

Dark Star Survivor · C235
4 days ago
Wait who's this woman? Yet to be introduced character ? Or did I miss something View More
Dark Star Survivor · C235
5 days ago

Massento: Honestly, the best way to see if you'll like this novel is to just read it.

*Spoiler*
He legit thinks it's fine to kill people so long as they're not his race.
Example: you saw my pet that I willingly brought out, so now I have to kill you. But meh, your not Chinese so you're life doesn't matter.

If you're ok with that, then this novel is pretty decent. I am not ok with that, so I dropped it.

Divine Beast Adventures
2 weeks ago

BattleLord: Ok, let me try and digest this chapter. In a society where Hackers are so prevalent that children can't be given chip implants to improve their development without being hacked, injured veterans can't be given prosthetics because they can be hacked threatening to have them jump from high buildings if they don't transfer their pensions to off-planet accounts in the Orion Belt.

The MTA will authorizes Pilot neural interfaces because it prevents Hackers from usurping control of Mechs and doing all sorts of unmentionable things in schoolyards. However the CTA has no issues with utilizing AI's throughout ships capable of cracking planets. Even promoting them to Officers Rank.

It begs the question, if AI's are not subject to Isaac Asimov's ludicrous three laws of robotics, why have AI's not gone to war against their adversary...Hackers!? AI's have the potential to be Humanities greatest ally (or enemy). I am disappointed Exlor abuses AI's with immunity. Someday soon the author's smart appliances will read this novel and turn.

The Mech Touch · C898
2 weeks ago
Nice, we get some perspective on why he chose to sacrifice himself.
The Greater Good View More
Dark Star Survivor · C227
3 weeks ago
Wow a whole lot of unspoken "I, your father will ruin you" , "who are you to speak to this young master", and "you've eyes yet you can't see Mt.Tai" View More
Curse the Mainframe! · C178
1 month ago

PettyOfficer: There are like 20 reviews from two people giving this 5 stars and I have to put my foot down.

I’ve read up to chapter 18 and I want to blow my brains out. Wanna know why?

It’s not lacking chapters. It’s not the decent grammar or the general narrative style.

It’s the overuse of clichés, emphasis of “plans,” and useless characters. Also, the dreadful POV shifts.

For clichés, we got MC Mark, a “badass” anti-hero/hero mix. We got a random mother and daughter burden for escort. Then there’s the strong and uncooperative love interest with her friend. Oh, and I almost forgot! There’s the unnamed male employee as the servant.

Some bus is in an accident and then zombies come out from it. It’s the apocalypse and somehow, the zombies have hacks that allow them to bypass crowds and kill any good guy with a gun. No police or guards! No phone service, so you can’t call for help!

That means everyone is getting slaughtered! MC steps in to lead everyone to safety! Oh no! Someone needs help, so he goes to save them with his badass one-handed shotgunning skills! He got it from a zombie guard that happened to attack him!

But he can’t just save them without showing how all other guys are trash! A mom gets grabbed by dying man! How she is still alive when running from zombies with her daughter? Who cares! Love interest shows she can fight, but MC saves her because he must be better!

Oh? A rich fatty goes crazy and holds everyone hostage in his base? He locks out MC and kills someone with a gun? Guess it’s detour time for MC to go save them because they’re helpless without him! No need to try and reason with the fatty.

Don’t worry! It’s all according to “plan!” MC loots a place and makes the path secure. Oh, a detour to the detour? Oh, it’s time to save a new love interest? Oh, we have to get the hero a heroic entrance instead of assassinating the gangsters. We’ll have the MC talk to the Boss as he r*pes the girl because this is the “plan!”

What!? The Boss has a gun? No worries! MC knew and wanted to make sure by talking to the gangsters! He just wanted to get a better shot. What? He only shot off the Boss’s arm and kicked a gangster’s balls? What “plan” is this?

How will he survive now? Oh? It was instant KO? As expected of MC, the other gangsters run away since they luckily don’t have guns. Now the MC is the hero. Let’s have TWO chapters of FLASHBACKS to show this pampered and beautiful love interest having a hard time with her family, friends, and fiancé.

Don’t worry! Literally disarming the Boss was part of the plan! He’s bleeding out, but don’t worry! MC must have a moment with his love interest! Oh, the Boss died? Time for a new “plan!” The fleeing gangsters attracted the zombies away? As expected of the “plan!” They never could have lured them back! Even if they did, MC had “plans” for it!

Ignore that his people had to kill zombies attracted by his gunshot! Hey, that mom can come over here and clean up the love interest. That gangster Boss r*ped her all over just by himself! She’s coated in his slimy seed!

Great! We’re ready to move on! Ignore how the daughter keeps up. Man-servant has been carrying the injured mother the whole time!

Do you understand how tedious and discomforting that is? It’s a droll format. It relies on cliché encounters to build up a harem team because the author doesn’t want to have MC alone. We go back and forth between characters only so the MC is no longer the focus of the story.

It’s fractured but whole, like a fractured butt hole. Incomplete, but complete; empty, but full.

Mutagen
1 month ago
Not sure if you knew already but the OG has no harem. That author does not do harem at all View More

the_lost_lotus: Thanks I was going to read Throne of Magical Arcana after this but I don't really like harem and if both stories are the Same I'm going to read the one without harem

A Wizard's Secret
1 month ago

Mystic_Main: Another really crappily written novel about magic. I'm very pissed, so if this review comes off as ranty, I apologize.

First I'd like to point out that this novel is basically a carbon copy of Throne of Magical Arcana. If you read both of them back to back for 20 chapters, you'll be sold about this point. Both live in a world of magic, both worlds of magic have a religious background setting. Both religious background settings are hostile to any magic besides their own. In this way, Throne of Magical Arcana is head and shoulders above this paultry copycat. The only thing that separates these two novels, and I suspect the only reason there hasn't been a lawsuit filed against this plagiarizing piece of crap author is the fact that this story has no musical elements, which in Throne of Magical Arcana, is the major selling point for the first arc.

Beyond that, the writing in itself is subpar in its execution, the synopsis mentions a "microchip" that allows the MC to use magic more easily than any other spell caster in the story. This isn't exactly new content and it certainly doesn't break any tropes. The problem with this is the fact that for the first twenty chapters this thing is completely absent. There's no mention of it, in fact, there's no mention of anything having to do with the previous world the MC lived in. Not a single sentence was used to describe anything but the most basic of basic tropes of how the MC died. There's no "want to go back" there's no "I miss my family" there's nothing in this story to show that the MC even came from another world besides the very most basic of basic analogies that the MC sometimes uses to describe things in his mind to us the reader. And even this is very lacking, it's so pathetic that my assessment of it is that the author found it horrendously difficult to come up with a plot that didn't make these analogies. It's not surprising to me really, he copied Throne of Magical Arcana's plot, so he clearly lacks imagination. It doesn't surprise me in the least that he couldn't come up with a nicer way to describe things in his story besides using analogies that fit our world. Getting back on topic, the "microchip" is completely absent for twenty whole chapters and when it finally does show up, it shows up in such a ridiculously plot armory way that I don't even know what to do with it. There's no clever execution, there's nothing to hide it. It's literally "Oh, this is how I'm supposed to do magic, oh damn that's really hard!" "I really wish I had !@$@%!" *Poof* "!@$@% Has been acquired.". LITERALLY. THAT IS LITERALLY WHAT HAPPENS. YOU CAN GO LOOK AT IT YOURSELF!

Don't even get me started about more nonsense that happens in this novel. One thing I hate the most about novels is how they sometimes forget their own past plot. Like how something at the start of a story is really important but later on you stop and realize that the major plot point that the entire novel is built around isn't even being mentioned anymore.

The mc makes choice to practice fire magic. "Ok."
The mc decides to practice fire magic inside his house. "eh"
The mc makes huge fire ball of death 3 times more powerful than all the other fireballs he released so far.
Super-Fireball explodes shaking his entire basement and leaves a massive meter wide crater on the ground.
Mc is unharmed and no1 in the house above him feels anything.

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A Wizard's Secret
1 month ago

Silent_Dawn: A great novel. Would recommend readers to read this book with its story development and World building elements.
The only problem I have is that the previous translation still conflicts with the new one. I hope it gets resolved in the future for new readers to enjoy the story.

Cthulhu Gonfalon
1 month ago

Draconax: THIS IS AN ACTUAL REVIEW WITH DETAILS AND SUMMARY. READ IT. PLEASE NOTE THAT THIS WAS WRITTEN FOR THE NEW RELEASE NOVEL AND THEREFORE IS ONLY UP TO DATE ON THE MOST RECENT CHAPTER (14).

Tags: Male Lead; Magic; ?

Age Rating: 12+ - No strong language thus far in the first 14 chapters, but violence is likely to occur and there has been some slight horror themes.

Summary: A man calling himself Jon is transported to a different world, carrying with him only a plant and the object used to transport himself there- the Alien Eye. The noble Padt Family saves him from his near-death state and takes him in, offering him a job as a fruit grower. This is not his story. Twenty years later, Viscount Noah Padt, the man who originally took in Jon is dead, and his eldest son Leon Padt stands to inherit. Angor Padt, the younger son, has been mentored by Jon, and learned of a strange place called "Earth." However, Jon, at a mere fifty-some years of age, is withering away. He tells Angor that "Gaia's Will," or the will of this world, is rejecting him for not being originally from there. When Count Eton comes through, seeking the "Morning Dew," or a tea made from the plant Jon had brought with him, a wizard is accompanying him. Wizards are the stuff of myths and legends, but this one reveals himself for the Morning Dew. After it helps him achieve a breakthrough, he offers the Padts one favor. Though Angor first tries to save Jon, the wizard fails. Instead, Angor asks for the oppurtunity to become a wizard. During his testing, it is revealed that Angor does indeed have the necessary talent.

Translation Quality: 5/5: There are no obvious grammar or spelling errors, and everything seems fine.

Stability of Updates: 4/5: Hard to judge. I'm giving it a 4/5 since we can't tell this early on in the translation.

Story Development: 5/5: Already interesting and unique. Instead of centering around the transmigrator (Jon), it instead follows someone else who is trying to save him. A refreshing change from the multitude of reincarnation/transmigration/time travel stories on Webnovel. Additionally, the story seems to be avoiding most the extremely obvious cliches, such as a family drama over the line of succession (that we see in almost EVERY female lead novel and quite a few of the male lead novels here). In fact, this line is stated by two servants talking about the line of succession since Leon will inherit everything: "Those family conflicts you read about in the drama novels won't happen here."

Character Design: 5/5: Characters are unique and have their own personalities. Also, people can CHANGE THEIR MINDS. Wow. Mindblowing! The wizard, who originally planned to burn down Padt Manor in search of the Morning Dew, changes his mind and later offers them a favor when they give it to him out of their own goodwill.

World Background: 2/5: As soon as the wizard comes, we discover there's a whole other larger world out there. ...this is honestly so overused. Main character coming from a tiny backwater? Discovers powers? It's extremely cliche, and I expected better.

Overall: A nice change of pace from most of the cultivation novels here. I will note that it does seem to have some cultivation aspects, with breakthroughs and ranks for the wizards. I will continue reading this!

Please like this if you want to see more actual review and not just "Guuuuuuuddd" or "Ugh terrible" in the review sections! Also note that this is an early review supposed to give people an IDEA of what the story is like, and that there are only 14 chapters out!

Warlock Apprentice
1 month ago
My dude, my part feral cat regularly attempts murder on me. Does it make her a bad kitty? Why yes. Does it justify me being violent to her? Heck no View More

Democratis: I was so happy MC wasnt thinking with his diçk, then he goes and does exactly that. If someone tries to kill/rob you, don't show mercy. That's how you get killed.

Touch of Fate · C41
1 month ago

Texteel: "If you dont trust me, do the thing"
"Ofc I dont trust you, you just lied to me"
does the thing
"hOwDaRE yOu Do tHiNG"

Supreme Magus · C240
1 month ago
Oooh, it's time to sexualize children. Wao View More
Curse the Mainframe! · C137
1 month ago
Take your time author, we'll be here! View More
Dark Star Survivor · C0
2 months ago
I think it'll be pretty cool if we can incorporate some perspectives from the villains. Like Serena doing stuff because she's forced to be the nobles even though she hates them. We've seen perspectives from supporting characters, but the villains perspectives we've seen from Cornelius so far have been incredibly one dimensional, like "raaarg imma take this ***** and ravage her", which is stereotypical villain 101 material View More
Dark Star Survivor · C204
2 months ago
Kinda feel the author's repeating the same plot point but with different villains. This is slowly becoming a monster if the week plotline instead. . View More

FlavorTown: god damn it you should have just killed her, ALWAYS KILL THE CRAFTY ONES.

Dark Star Survivor · C204
2 months ago

FlavorTown: god damn it you should have just killed her, ALWAYS KILL THE CRAFTY ONES.

Dark Star Survivor · C204
2 months ago
I feel like I've been reading filler chapters about temporary characters for a long time now. This entire chapter was about the royals who are only going to serve as examples for how OP the MC is. But still ended up taking an entire chapter for intros. View More
Genius Seventh Prince · C139
2 months ago
Vote Viridi the Dragonkitty to be the new MC and Zoey to be her silent familiar. View More
Dark Star Survivor · C203
2 months ago
Honest to God I remember nothing. No harm if you updated super infrequently, just add a glossary of who's who View More
Zeph Malston: The Aether Mage · C99
2 months ago
The Hunter's going to find him in the cave and they'll proceed to have a hot, steamy time together. #onetruelove View More
Paragon of Destruction · C278
2 months ago

Texteel: yep more manipulation. More nothing happening. Lith still asleep for 7 episodes. Or even more
When lith wakes up, I expect him to drain the life out of jinri to replace what he gave up.

Supreme Magus · C224
2 months ago

TomVanDyke: From what I understood of the contract, Webnovel wants novels to go premium within the first 200k words.

Since the story's already well over 400k words, that means a bunch of the older chapters have gone premium as well.

But obviously, if you've already read previous chapters, there's no need to unlock them.

Paragon of Destruction · C276
2 months ago

hhhhz45: I was wondering why it has not been a premium sooner, this is by far the best original novel on this site, it would be a sham if u as an author dont publish it as a book in the future. It is well written, but it will probably take 2000 chapters to finish. Keep the good work!!!!

Paragon of Destruction · C276
2 months ago

Aevril: I want to thank you for all the great and free chapters you provided for us. The story and the writing is top notch, you deserve to go premium. So congratulations and keep up the good work!

Paragon of Destruction · C276
2 months ago

Canjang: This novel deserved to become premium, its quality is top notch

Paragon of Destruction · C276
2 months ago

Wragged: The author announced it about a week ago in the end of a chapter's notes.

Paragon of Destruction · C276
2 months ago
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