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Nanomancer Reborn - I've Become A Snow Girl? · C200
Reborn in DxD with OP Barrier and Enhancement Magic · C91
Nanomancer Reborn - I've Become A Snow Girl? · C177
A New Path · C153
Reili: so should I continue the mini chaps in authors notes or stop them?
Nanomancer Reborn - I've Become A Snow Girl? · C162
Leixein: This chapter is as long as 1 and a half chapter lol... Since I won't be able to write for the next week.
Well, I hope you guys enjoy the chapter and see ya later. Peace out girls scout!The Wish of the Dragon · C105
Nanomancer Reborn - I've Become A Snow Girl? · C161
Insanely Pampered Wife: Divine Doctor Fifth Young Miss · C555
Endless Path : Infinite Cosmos · C1194
It's Not Easy to Be a Man After Travelling to the Future · C696
Nanomancer Reborn - I've Become A Snow Girl? · C147
Nanomancer Reborn - I've Become A Snow Girl? · C146
It's Not Easy to Be a Man After Travelling to the Future · C695
DrarmhaDrarg: whose mind seemed to ve?????
Half Saiyan in Tales of Demons and Gods · C110
It's Not Easy to Be a Man After Travelling to the Future · C694
Nanomancer Reborn - I've Become A Snow Girl? · C145
ThomasDarkrose: Writing Quality: 5/5 - While there are occasional typos, ****y tiny grammatical errors or punctuation errors, they do not detract from the story in any way. The writing is excellent and just draws you in.
Stability of Updates: 5/5 - The author pumps out chapters like a madman all in order to feed the addicted souls he has created. 'Nuff said.
Story Development: 5/5 - The story starts with a nieve and broken main character, Vahn, and through interactions with the world and the characters in it, he grows. Vahn still has a lot of growing to do and I, personally, look forward to seeing the man that Vahn will grow into.
Character Design: 4/5 - I would love to give the author 5/5 stars just for the design of Vahn, but I prefer to be honest and forthright. Because this is a fan-fiction many of the main characters were already designed by the original author of DanMachi. That said, Einlion takes those pre-existing characters and completely makes them his own without violating the source material. While reading this story you will be hard pressed to find any reason to complain about the use of the pre-existing characters, their reactions, or their believability.
World Background: 4/5 - Again, I would love to make this 5/5 stars, but the story takes place in a pre-existing world. Just like the characters though, the world is not violated or discarded it is embraced and honored.
Fan-fictions are a tough genre to write in, you have to take a world and characters that already exist, and are loved, then make them your own while writing your own story. Einlion does this exceptionally well and is crafting an amazing story that follows a unique and amazing character. The only thing I could possibly complain about is that I found this novel now instead of a year from now, I can't binge read it nearly enough.
On a final note, if you are a fan of DanMachi, or anime in general, and looking for a story with a unique and entertaining main character than I strongly recommend reading this story.Endless Path : Infinite Cosmos
Nanomancer Reborn - I've Become A Snow Girl? · C144
MilkGod: MilkGod's Facts: Squidward from SpongeBob has 6 legs, healthy octopus's have 8.
SpongeBob is a good show, especially the songs.Nanomancer Reborn - I've Become A Snow Girl? · C144
It's Not Easy to Be a Man After Travelling to the Future · C693
It's Not Easy to Be a Man After Travelling to the Future · C692
Nanomancer Reborn - I've Become A Snow Girl? · C143
Nanomancer Reborn - I've Become A Snow Girl? · C142
It's Not Easy to Be a Man After Travelling to the Future · C691
Nanomancer Reborn - I've Become A Snow Girl? · C141
It's Not Easy to Be a Man After Travelling to the Future · C690
It's Not Easy to Be a Man After Travelling to the Future · C689
Nanomancer Reborn - I've Become A Snow Girl? · C139
