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    Son of the Spirit Beast

    Eastern Fantasy

    4.6

    In a world where the strongest beings are represented by cultivators, Hei is born under special circumstances and is raised by a spirit beast spider. With the body of a human but the mind of a spirit beast, Hei will try to make his way in this conflict-filled world following his convictions and trying to protect those he loves. ******* You could support me on my patreon page: https://www.patreon.com/nagatosaitou Or on my paypal account: https://www.paypal.me/NagatoSaitou I will thanks in advance those who will support me. I'd like to become a full time writer so your donations are very important to the realization of my dream.

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If you think it’s a good story, you should try. You could also collaborate with someone if you aren’t confident enough in your writing abilities. I know it can be difficult expose your work and receive the reception of the readers, but i think you should still write your story and see what will happens View More

DaoSleepi: Not going to lie but i've had a story in my head about a boy raised in the forest also but im too chicken to write it hahah but im glad someone else thought of it too i'll be cheering you on.

Son of the Spirit Beast · C1
3 days ago

DaoSleepi: Not going to lie but i've had a story in my head about a boy raised in the forest also but im too chicken to write it hahah but im glad someone else thought of it too i'll be cheering you on.

Son of the Spirit Beast · C1
3 days ago
Reading Status: C1
I start saying i like very mich cultivation novels, the story begins well giving immediately the readers a glimpse about how much power you could obtain. although a bit cliché the extinction of a race with only one newborn survivor, it is always interesting how such a child will grow and he will avenge his race. I hope the author will continue it View More
The Last Space King
3 weeks ago
Thanks for the review. about the choice of the spider, there is a valid reason but I chose not to include it. it will be revelead later as it will have connections with the future plot View More

FrozenSynapses: I really like the story so far. The writing is well done, the story is great, I like the characters, and the environment is neatly described. One part at the beginning that I didn't feel wholly convinced on was the spider's reason for taking in the boy as her son. I get that she's a mother herself, but her reasoning was very abrupt and didn't feel realistic to me. That's my only complaint though. Great job author!

Son of the Spirit Beast
3 weeks ago

FrozenSynapses: I really like the story so far. The writing is well done, the story is great, I like the characters, and the environment is neatly described. One part at the beginning that I didn't feel wholly convinced on was the spider's reason for taking in the boy as her son. I get that she's a mother herself, but her reasoning was very abrupt and didn't feel realistic to me. That's my only complaint though. Great job author!

Son of the Spirit Beast
3 weeks ago
Reading Status: C2
A very interesting story, i like the concept of system and main character, it’s something you read everyday. The grammar also is good and the pace also, the author knows how to keep the reader attracted to his story. I hope this story will be continued View More
Curse the Mainframe!
3 weeks ago

Rxel: So far, I quite like where the story is going. The descriptions are vivid, and the plot development is not rushed nor too slow.

This storyline is quite refreshing as compared to the normal types of stories found here on this website.

Character wise, there isn't a character that I hate yet. They're all written with varying personalities.

As far as I recall, there are a few minor errors with grammar that look more like careless mistakes. They do not detract from the enjoyment of the reading.

Keep up the good work! :)

Son of the Spirit Beast
3 weeks ago

datSieg: Love the story so far. Besides some grammatical errors in the chapters, I don't really see any big faults. Definitely one of the more unique and interesting novel ideas I've read so far. Looking forward to seeing how things play out and especially how or if being raised by a spirit beast changes the way Hei cultivates.

Son of the Spirit Beast
3 weeks ago

MarshmellowT: i'm now current at chapter 18 and i would like to start off by saying this is a very well-written story and encouraging anyone checking out the reviews to just give it a read already.
the pacing is slow, but not unpleasantly so. the author has clearly planned out in advance what events need to be shown and has hit each of them with purpose.
the characters are enjoyable, though a bit flat. the hero is a child of interesting circumstances, but his personality is the classic dutiful son. his sisters are a bit more interesting, personality-wise, but they don't get as much focus as Hei does. i'll be looking forward to their development in the future.
the writing quality is a bit rough. grammatical errors pop up here and there, pronouns get mixed up, and occasionally the author uses the wrong name by accident; but honestly, it's above average for webnovel so take that as you will.
altogether it's been an enjoyable ride. if you are a fan of cultivation stories, this one will certainly scratch that itch.

Son of the Spirit Beast
3 weeks ago

MarshmellowT: phew i'm all caught up now. i s'pose i'll get to writing that review now

Son of the Spirit Beast · C18
3 weeks ago
Reading Status: C2
Very interesting Novel, the first impact is very positive. It is clear that the author knows how to describe the situation and giving information about the characters or the location without resulting tedious, thing that is difficult for an author, especially amatorial writers. I am curious about how the story will develop in future, i hope the author will keep it up! View More
Ah Chun
3 weeks ago

invayne: This was a good read so far. I like the concept of how Hei is raised. This was not something I have seen before in any novel. Good job keep up the good work!

Son of the Spirit Beast
3 weeks ago

MarshmellowT: i noticed a few spelling and word choice errors in this chapter. other than that, the plot is progressing well. it's a slow start, but it definitely feels like we're building up to something good, and i feel like you're hitting all the important points of hei's development without lingering on less relevant things

Son of the Spirit Beast · C5
3 weeks ago

MyCharacterLeads: What a sight!

Son of the Spirit Beast · C3
3 weeks ago

MarshmellowT: tbh i more enjoyed the retelling to the original. partly because i enjoyed the first person perspective, getting to see what's running through spider mom's head as all this goes on, and also i feel like the quality of writing was better in this chapter. the first had some odd turns of phrase that i mentally tripped over, while this was a much smoother read.
one thing did get me, though, and that's the inconsistent pronouns. was that intentional, like an attempt to separate our dear spider mother from the concept of gender to an extent? if so, i think you might have gone another route with that. as-is, i found myself occasionally confused as to who was being referred to; and even when the subject is unambiguously the spider, i found myself second guessing my reading, like, did i miss something somewhere?
anyway those are my thoughts so far, i'm quite excited to continue reading, and i hope to get caught up quickly so i can give you a proper review soon

Son of the Spirit Beast · C2
3 weeks ago
Thanks for your support. This is a ongoing original novel, i am creating it chapter by chapter although i've already planned the general plot. I am trying to publish daily o 1 chapters every two days. You can read all available chapters here on webnovel View More

Cammo02: Where can I find the rest of the chapters in your novel please? I would really like to continue with the story. Thank you for your dedication to write this novel. Bye for now.

Son of the Spirit Beast · C16
4 weeks ago

Cammo02: Where can I find the rest of the chapters in your novel please? I would really like to continue with the story. Thank you for your dedication to write this novel. Bye for now.

Son of the Spirit Beast · C16
4 weeks ago
Reading Status: C1
I’ve always liked novels with secondary professions or that focus on production activities success as farming, since i’d already planned for my first novel to include farming although not in such a detailed way as this Novel. Even if there are mistakes about the use of english, it doesn’t change that this is a very interesing story and it can be useful for those who include farming in their own stories. View More
Magic Farmer Dara - 2nd Edition
1 month ago

ursus010: Merchants are always at risk in the hope of cutting a big "jackpot." If they succeed, they make a profit of 500 or even all 1000 percent. But the risk is very high with 10 caravans going along the Silk Road, three of them have been robbed. It was necessary to pay for the protection of the “bandits”, to buy the “tamga”, the security seal. From the first chapter, the author managed to generate interest in the novel. Read on ...

The mistake of the authors is that they describe past eras, approach them from the point of view of modernity. That is, do not "enter", "do not fit into the skin" of that era. And in the Middle Ages, as well as later in the feudal system, there were other attitudes of society. Families created in 12-13-14 years. The society pressed very hard on the person, those who were the “black sheep” turned into outcasts. That is, when a merchant speaks of children, he speaks as a person of the end of the 20th or beginning of the 21st century, and not as a person - of a dark era, before the industrial ... as a minimum. That is, the authenticity of the narrative is lost. IMHO,

Usually nomad attacks on the karavnas led to a total sweep of nomads from the principalities. It caused damage to both sides. Therefore, the enterprising nomads, simply set fees "for protection" while passing through their territory. Then everyone was relatively pleased. Provided that it was only business and politics did not interfere, the "big game" was not carried out. This will be done from historical materials.

To help, to save, to die a hero, in order to doom his wife and son to an even more terrible fate. Cliche. He himself did not leave his wife in another city, because he was afraid for her safety, and then he sends her alone ... where, with a great deal of probability, even greater trouble will happen to her. Isn't that a paradox?

Echo, this is not romatic. this is some kind of trash ... full tin !!!! Horror !!!!

Man turned out to be older than the spider?

The second chapter of the impressive ... immediately understand it is not terrible, it is fantasy! Hello Robert Zelazny! Hi Ursula Le Guin! Long live ROKOKON! But no, this is a different novel, but it seems very interesting ... read on ... maybe you should include it in the library? But it's not clear yet ... what will happen next.

One thing is to say that while reading only 1.2 chapters, the short story is unpredictable, but also intriguing!

Then the manga about the usual Japanese schoolgirl bashing into the spider ... oh, you think the author chose the easy way ... remake ... but see if his text will be original and not a replicant. It would be a great pity, since the beginning was exciting, and the text was pleasant to read (not counting the moment with trash).

Wow HERE AND ERROR! The use of special terms in the text, not well-known, in particular, "amniotic fluid". Well, that now there is the Internet, you can ask the know-all Google to understand what is at stake.

It immediately becomes clear that the author has knowledge in medicine, at least.

When you write texts, you must write them very simply, and if you use uncommon terms, you must give a link or give an explanation in brackets!

Wow, the spider is a female ?! Some kind of magic spider? Usually, spiders eat males ... if you follow the Earth Entomology - the science of studying insects, one of the sections of zoology of Arachnology, science of studying spiders ... but it is possible. in a fantasy world. other laws of nature ... then they would have to be described ... in the beginning, IMHO.

I wonder if spiders have milk? Is it suitable for a human child? How can it affect him? Is it compatible? Immediately there are such questions.

Is it real - cesarean section ???? So this is somewhere between the 16th century and the 19th? And the mercenaries know about this section ???? Maybe it was worth to call it something else ???

Well, that's not Latin yet !!!!)))

"Fraction"????? If this is a term, then give a description, probably a medical one ....

Oh Mowgli, hello! Intertwined with many stories, short stories, stories of the 20th and 21st centuries. Perhaps this is a crisis of the genre and maybe its new development ???? Who knows???

Wow a spider can give birth to both a spider and a snake ????? This is something new!!!

And why the child with fear pulled hands ??? If his mother is a spider ?????

Maybe replace the word autonomous - with - "independent"?

Wow! Here and respect for the murdered? Is this something from Indians or Finns? They did not kill animals, did not break branches at the source of the river, those who broke the taboo were killed.

The author is clearly a connoisseur of medicine, and probably ethnography ???!

Read interesting, like writing a review! Definitely worth including this novel in the library. I will continue the review and other chapters tomorrow, I hope, if there is a respite in the work! Author, success !!!!

Son of the Spirit Beast
1 month ago

MyCharacterLeads: Another unique main plot here!
A little child that was raised by a beast. It really intrigued me at first read. 👍

Writing quality - excellent grammar constructions.
Story development - it's just in the right pace. (But I couldn't just take the moment lie lie fall to him. He was just a child after all. I know I'm being subjective here. Peace!)
World Background - well described.
Stability of update - these were the problem lie. I think author know what I mean.

Overall, a nice one to read!👍
Keep it up Author!

Son of the Spirit Beast
1 month ago

Mavislin11: The way that the author description is very unique and indeed flawless. There's not much to go on about here. Reader, you won't be regretting your choice in choosing to read this book.

Son of the Spirit Beast
1 month ago

Kingkongbuddha: Great fight scenes. 👍

Son of the Spirit Beast · C14
1 month ago

Kingkongbuddha: Getting closer to husband and wife 😊. Really nice and fun read.

Son of the Spirit Beast · C13
1 month ago

Kingkongbuddha: Pleasant chapter. Good read and I believe they are going to be couple in the future 😊. There's a typo *unfamiliarity with hs student *. Great work.

Son of the Spirit Beast · C12
1 month ago

TheDemonSlayer2: Very good

Son of the Spirit Beast · C3
1 month ago

TheDemonSlayer2: Cough cough

Son of the Spirit Beast · C3
1 month ago

tinaxyooj: Great 👍 👍👍👍

Son of the Spirit Beast · C1
1 month ago

MyCharacterLeads: intelligent spirit beast! fortunately, the baby was saved.

Son of the Spirit Beast · C1
1 month ago

NagatoSaitou: Thank you for you support, i will try to provide more chapters soon

Son of the Spirit Beast · C1
1 month ago

ShinSungmi: The grammar used has very few faults, and it is well-written. The plotline seems amazing, and I hope you can keep up with the good work!😊😊😊

Son of the Spirit Beast
1 month ago
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