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  • Ancient Gene

    Ancient Gene

    Sci-fi

    A group of friends found out about the apocalypse through an accident. The world was ending because of the effects of World War 3. In order to save the world, the government made a way to balance the world of their energies back to its state back when the first humans roamed the earth. They didn't know that humans now are different. We are not pure as are ancestors were that is why some of us lost the "ancient gene". People who didn't have it died and became zombies.

Moments

Reading Status: C0
So that's why this novel was abandoned.

At first, I thought this novel was amazing but after you go more than 70 chapters the mc becomes scum. This mc is even worse than Danzo and he was the kind of person who orchestrates the massacre of a whole clan just to get their eyes. View More
Elder Scrolls: Naruto
6 days ago
Reading Status: C0
Author I have a suggestion.

Gaara has red hair right? And in the series everyone with red hair have this obscene amount of chakra. You can use that to connect gaara as someone with uzumaki bloodline which can help him have some sage powers he never knew of. It troubled me sometimes when it was introduced that kaguya bestowed chakra to her followers but the only people with her bloodline like senju, hyuuga and uchiha descendants has this obscene amount of chakra.

After years has gone by the senju clan had some variations of descendants like the uzumaki and tsunade's bloodline and some strays like karin who didn't know her bloodline.

What if gaara was a senju variant? Gaara has his magnetic variant, karin has this healing variant and the uzumaki has this sealing variant.

Anyway think about it.


Btw gaara never helped their economic problem while he was young, just pointing out the promise of kingdom building because if you start after the konoha attack, there wouldn't be much point in promising the kingdom building part because everyone knows that gaara did his kingdom building after he learned from his fight with naruto which lead him to be the kazekage. View More
Gaara
1 week ago
Well, I do appreciate the explanation.

I'm sorry, I got carried away but it's only because I really liked the first parts and it was very entertaining for me how he tries and flourishes not just because of the system but because of his hardwork in learning them.

I would have been perfectly fine if Tsunade and Kenyshi's relationship with him had some conflicts because of him being the student of tsunade in med jutsu and the fact that tsunade met him while he was just four years old. As for Kenyshi, it would've been better if she struggled with her brocon for him since it's obscenely difficult to think of your brother as a lover even though you're in love with him. I know cause I'm a psych major.

It's not just about the law since in naruto world it's fine for them to commit incest but because of their familiarity especially because Kenyshi is introduced with dependency. The more you depend on a person, the more difficult for you to be romantically aggressive especially when tsunade is there.

And there's those things about the forced war. It was a great idea to give that dillema but there are a lot of plotholes, especially the part about the quests. It suddenly became command other than a quest.

The part about impregnating women even though the mc was initially a person who values love more than flings or about the pick a side thing even though it can easily be diffused by only inviting the heads (because there's no war if the only people present and knows about it are the one who leads them) or making the mc use his masked persons to introduce himself as akatsuki who brainwashed the kid to destroy konoha but got impatient and decided to attack scenario.

And the last thing was about his wealth. I was seriously thinking that he was going to use it to gain power or even deciding rights in konoha to root out danzo who's obviously a cancer in the villagea nd all of that would have been taken care of if he wasn't thinking with his dick. He has this luck thing but all the system quest is doing is to give him unreasonable quests and unreasonable consequences. It was supposed to be impartial since it's made by the will of thw void who wants to give something good before its power diminishes.

Those forced relationships was the one who ruined the flow. If some horny readers says they want those routes you can give it to them but don't compromise your own writing style because plot holes gets bigger and bigger. You're obviously a great writer so you don't have to force things. View More

NRplayer: Yeah, I kind of broke volume one a lot by accident. But I think you're exaggerating with them becoming sl*ts thing. Even tho they did give themselves to him it was due to past experiences that I failed to pass to the readers. Tsunade had repressed feelings for him all along and Kenyshi liked him but was contradicted whether it was right or wrong to feel that way, but after discovering their not brothers and knowing perfectly well how aware of her feelings he was she got frustrated and one thing let to the other. As for the other two they didn't do anything wrong Yugao like him for how much support he received from him in the past and Anko saw how strong he was and was in a tough situation so she offered a date in exchange for his help.

But I do get where you're going and trying to get, it is my fault for how I approached and introduced the situation.

Thanks for reading.

I'm just going to finish volume one as it is right now and do better on the next volume.

iFanfic: just another common fanfic with a system.(currently in Naruto)
1 week ago
Well, I do appreciate the explanation.

I'm sorry, I got carried away but it's only because I really liked the first parts and it was very entertaining for me how he tries and flourishes not just because of the system but because of his hardwork in learning them.

I would have been perfectly fine if Tsunade and Kenyshi's relationship with him had some conflicts because of him being the student of tsunade in med jutsu and the fact that tsunade met him while he was just four years old. As for Kenyshi, it would've been better if she struggled with her brocon for him since it's obscenely difficult to think of your brother as a lover even though you're in love with him. I know cause I'm a psych major.

It's not just about the law since in naruto world it's fine for them to commit incest but because of their familiarity especially because Kenyshi is introduced with dependency. The more you depend on a person, the more difficult for you to be romantically aggressive especially when tsunade is there.

And there's those things about the forced war. It was a great idea to give that dillema but there are a lot of plotholes, especially the part about the quests. It suddenly became command other than a quest.

The part about impregnating women even though the mc was initially a person who values love more than flings or about the pick a side thing even though it can easily be diffused by only inviting the heads (because there's no war if the only people present and knows about it are the one who leads them) or making the mc use his masked persons to introduce himself as akatsuki who brainwashed the kid to destroy konoha but got impatient and decided to attack scenario.

And the last thing was about his wealth. I was seriously thinking that he was going to use it to gain power or even deciding rights in konoha to root out danzo who's obviously a cancer in the villagea nd all of that would have been taken care of if he wasn't thinking with his dick. He has this luck thing but all the system quest is doing is to give him unreasonable quests and unreasonable consequences. It was supposed to be impartial since it's made by the will of thw void who wants to give something good before its power diminishes.

Those forced relationships was the one who ruined the flow. If some horny readers says they want those routes you can give it to them but don't compromise your own writing style because plot holes gets bigger and bigger. You're obviously a great writer so you don't have to force things. View More

NRplayer: Yeah, I kind of broke volume one a lot by accident. But I think you're exaggerating with them becoming sl*ts thing. Even tho they did give themselves to him it was due to past experiences that I failed to pass to the readers. Tsunade had repressed feelings for him all along and Kenyshi liked him but was contradicted whether it was right or wrong to feel that way, but after discovering their not brothers and knowing perfectly well how aware of her feelings he was she got frustrated and one thing let to the other. As for the other two they didn't do anything wrong Yugao like him for how much support he received from him in the past and Anko saw how strong he was and was in a tough situation so she offered a date in exchange for his help.

But I do get where you're going and trying to get, it is my fault for how I approached and introduced the situation.

Thanks for reading.

I'm just going to finish volume one as it is right now and do better on the next volume.

iFanfic: just another common fanfic with a system.(currently in Naruto)
1 week ago
Reading Status: C0
It was awesome but just like every other novels out there, once the harem route was introduced everything turns to ****.

Seriously?! It's like a genius hit his head and suddenly got some mental issues after doing the harem route.

Everything was going well but I don't know why the mc suddenly became a trash harem character. Emotions?! Really?? Emotions made him stupid?? So his experiences as a ninja who did a lot of missions never gave him anything? And what the **** happened to the obviously strained plot? Ever since the harem route was introduced, everything became illogical, the characters became idiots and suddenly everyone is either a slut or a piece of **** person who gets jealous a lot.

It's like ever since the harem route was introduced, it felt like either the author was replaced or your ovesdoing yourself because of the pressure.

If it's the latter, instead of making it better, you made it worse. Hays... View More
iFanfic: just another common fanfic with a system.(currently in Naruto)
1 week ago
Reading Status: C0
It was fine in the beginning.
It's a common start but as soon as I read chapter 3, I realized that the mc was trash.

The previous owner of the body was called trash because he had low cultivation talent but the person who replaced him was a trash soul with an overpowered system. You have rinnegan and sharingan in your eyes and possess the saiyan bloodline but as soon as the system said that you're on your own until you get to 1st stage of cultivation, you cry your eyes out because of fear?

Really? Fuck!
You're 15 years old and you cried because you are abandoned in a forest? Your fucking sect is only a walking distance. It didn't even take you a day to walk to your fucking sect!

I can understand characters like midoriya in mha but this piece of **** is trash with or without his powers. He only has his haughty demeanor because of his op powers. At least midoriya is still the same after he had his op powers and never in his life even when he was weak did he change his ideals but this piece of **** is just a trash with more powers. View More
The Devourer
1 week ago
Dude, I have a solution to that silly problem.

You can just turn the story towards ulquiorra's devil side. The more he uses the devil power, the more his hollow hole closes since the hollow hole would no longer have any significance because he's no longer just a hollow.

The hollow hole represents what you lost when you became a hollow. His hollow hole is in his chest because he lost his emotions when his soul became corrupted. Like his former colleague grimjaw, his hole, is in his stomach that is why he lost his feeling of contentment thereby having the trait of gluttony for power.

Ichigo also has a hole in his chest because when he turns, he loses his empathy for his enemies.

Without that hollow hole Ulquiorra will gain back his emotions that he forgot. It will also explain why Ulquiorra became fascinated with the heart since he was reborn as a devil.

Not only that but the whole reason hollows became stronger is because of their emotions. The more intense they feel the stronger they get thereby explaining why grimjaw became more powerful than ulquiorra on later chapters.

Ulquiorra is strong on his base power. Because of his feeling of 'nothing', he doesn't have the emotions to make him stronger which also explains why he stagnated and lost to ichigo.

He'll became op af if he gains back his emotions!!

Don't give up on this author. View More
Reborn: Ulquiorra in DxD world · C48
1 week ago
Thanks for the chaps :-) View More
Teen Wolf The Argent · C56
2 weeks ago
Yeah, you've got a point there.

It just feels ridiculous to me to say a rule only to break it for public acknowledgement or just to stir up a plot.

It's like when an mc is a god like being and he fights some mob that is ridiculously weak but still survives a punch from the him even though the author said something like 'He punched him with all his might' just to make it more edgy and somehow the mob survives to make the plot fit.

It just leaves a sour taste in the mouth. View More

Alastair: Wow. You have your thoughts. But I don’t think people care about that goku and saiyin body stuff. I mean it is a fanfic, so literally anything could happen. But thxs for the info doh

Teen Wolf The Argent · C51
3 weeks ago
Ki or Qi is used by him using human standards from goku and naruto. Although goku is not human, He has the same pathways as humans has thereby explaining why he was taught ki by a human.

Making him a supernatural being will change his body thereby changing his pathways and can also complicates the purity of his power since he will also have the werewolf power.

And also because of his wish, humans are able to take ki and train which means that if he is not a human anymore the changes the god gave to him might not benefit him anymore. Being a supernatural being might actually make him weaker.

The biggest and most crucial reason why he cannot have ki anymore if he was ever turned into any supernatural being is the reason why he wasn't given a saiyan body. The reason was that it would be breaking the natural order of life.

Imagine if the vampire and werewolves etc have their powerful bodies with the ablity to use ki. The world would be destroyed by anyone as long as they train long enough. Note that vampires does not age and werewolves have exceptional physical strength which would make their powers ride exponentially.

That's why it is illogical for Max to be any supernatural being.

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He's already more powerful than a hundred berserkers and can already threaten an original. There is literally no need to be a supernatural creature. View More

Alastair: How? I just want to know your opinion don’t take it out on me plzs lol.

Teen Wolf The Argent · C51
3 weeks ago
Thank you!! Thank you!!!
Allison is alive!! View More
Teen Wolf The Argent · C52
3 weeks ago
It's not ideal for him to become a werewolf because it may hinder his future progress View More

Dark_Soul_Dreed: This is where he becomes an Alpha Sage Werewolf

Teen Wolf The Argent · C51
4 weeks ago
No!! Author-sama!!
Please tell me he thought allison enough to save them!

Ugh! I know it is a stressful moment that's why he couldn't think straight which made it more realistic but he could've just teleported away.

Anyway, thank you for the chapter.
As expected, you prefer a more realistic approach than the ideal one which made me respect you more. :-) View More
Teen Wolf The Argent · C51
4 weeks ago
Reading Status: C0
This is stupid.

Your writing is great and your power selection fots the mc but because you made changes with the story just to fit your grandiose belief on the Mc's power, everything went to ****.

First, you split them up just because the elder has something to say. Are you really right in your brain? Why the **** would they do that? They're still going to the same spot. What would 5 minutes do to their journey?! You just needed an excuse to make ieyasu and sayo to die.

Second, tatsumi is stupid but not because he's an airhead but because he was innocent in the beginning of the story but you made him to be a total airhead who can't even think for himself just to make the mc seem smarter than everyone.

Third, just to show that the mc is stronger, you decided to make akame attack the mc just because she finds him dangerous. Hello?? Knock knock?? Are you stupid? They're assasins. All of them are dangerous. And the mc is obviously killing the empire's guards thereby helping akame but to your logic he's interfering with their mission. Then the genius mine and the disciplined bulat even helped akame of her ridiculous claims. Simply stupid.

Fourth, you made ieyasu die but not sayo? Is this sexist or what. In the original sayo died long before ieyasu you stupid author who only think with your cock. And before you spout your fucking nonsense that the story was changed, read carefully on your material. Sayo was tortured and poisoned while ieyasu was being tortured too. It means she should have been dead long before ieyasu. If you wanted ieyasu to dies then sayo needed to die too. Stupid.


Last not because it's the last stupid thing you did but because I can't bear to read this anymore, you basically dumbed down everyone just to fit the story you want to make. Seriously? You made him want to join Night Raid? Even though they tried to stop you from saving ieyasu and sayo? Fuck! Really? Just because you want him to be close to main storyline, you made him want to join them? Just because it's logical? You basically told everyone how he care a lot about ieyasu and sayo and now you want him to join the bunch of imbeciles that tried to stop the mc in helping them? I thought you made him to be smart? Not another imbecile like you. Fuck!

I'm normally a calm person but ****!! This novel! You can just make your own novel with your talent but because you things to go your way you defiled a great manga just because you want to show your readers how more powerful the mc is from the original cast.

All in all,

Respect the source material.
It's ridiculous to make a fanfic if you can't even respect the source material for what it is. View More
Dragon Ga Kill
4 weeks ago
Reading Status: C0
Please continue sensei!!
You work is one of the best novels I've read so far.

The story development and realistic character development is simply in every sense of the word, top notch :-) View More
Transmigrated into HOTD but with a Twist!
4 weeks ago
Thanks for the chapters especially the visual aid for selena View More
Teen Wolf The Argent · C48
1 month ago
Author-sama, I just wanted to ask if you'll include Elena again in the story? It was a bummer when nina dobrev left vampire diaries but it'd be great if she was included in the story because stefan and damon, although weak, wreaks havoc in stories when she's included.

Anyway, keep up the good work. View More

eccentricbeing18: This is my little piece of heaven everyday.

The character design is accurate and the bits of pieces of differences because of the changes in the timeline are awesome.

If I had any problems in this novel, it would be because first, I'd be great if Allison was not his sister because I like the actress but in the contrast the hunter background is great and very reasonable.

And last is because there is no character visuals to Selena. It'd be great if you could say things like Selena looks like Alexandra Daddario or something.

Thanks and keep up the good work!

Teen Wolf The Argent
1 month ago

Boxer_Vivek: Thanks for the review

Teen Wolf The Argent
1 month ago
Reading Status: C0
In the first part, it was great but the more the author deviate from the story the more it became boring or just plain senseless.

Why? Because this is a fanfic.
The author likes to deviate from the main storyline, I get it.

You want to expand the story than what was shown on the manga. Great.

But when you use the main characters just to compare power levels and make them the king kai of dragonball or rock lee of naruto it just raises a very big question "Why make a fanfic of an anime if you'll just use them as background characters that are useless as dirt?"

You make him Meliodas's nephew just to justify him to be a half demon in order to be related to the main characters just to brush over his relation to them as very close to the point that the main characters thought him their knowledge which he doesn't use then give him a totally made up teacher which came out of nowhere, to impart him knowledge and training that is totally useless because he only uses powers he got from the system.

The way the story goes, you can erase the main characters and replace them with normal knights and you still have your story.

Why do you even make a fanfic if you can write your own? View More
The Eight Sin The Sin Of Love
1 month ago
Right? Right??
I sometimes imagine that the author would reveal that he was adopted just so they could be together but it would be weird so idk hahahahaha! XD View More

DragonGodSmith3000: Omg I love her very beautiful woman definitely one of those you never give up on

Teen Wolf The Argent · C45
1 month ago
This is my little piece of heaven everyday.

The character design is accurate and the bits of pieces of differences because of the changes in the timeline are awesome.

If I had any problems in this novel, it would be because first, I'd be great if Allison was not his sister because I like the actress but in the contrast the hunter background is great and very reasonable.

And last is because there is no character visuals to Selena. It'd be great if you could say things like Selena looks like Alexandra Daddario or something.

Thanks and keep up the good work! View More
Teen Wolf The Argent · C45
1 month ago
Reading Status: C0
This is my little piece of heaven everyday.

The character design is accurate and the bits of pieces of differences because of the changes in the timeline are awesome.

If I had any problems in this novel, it would be because first, I'd be great if Allison was not his sister because I like the actress but in the contrast the hunter background is great and very reasonable.

And last is because there is no character visuals to Selena. It'd be great if you could say things like Selena looks like Alexandra Daddario or something.

Thanks and keep up the good work! View More
Teen Wolf The Argent
1 month ago
Correction: Frieza's battle power is 1,000,000 when Goku fought him in planet Namek. View More
The Strongest System in Dragon Ball World · C33
1 month ago
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