JadeMonkey

2yr

Replied to KyxKat

Alt Account trash. Going around copy paste the same review on other novels. You even copied the top review here word for word.

JadeMonkey

2yr

Commented

If you scroll back up. It says he had 325. Now he used 300 so he should have 25 left.

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Dual System: Ascension of A Nameless Nobody

Fantasy · DelzGB

I admit i feel bad that you went back and changed it. That wasn’t my intention. I was giving constructive criticism and feed back because it seem like a plot hole that could’ve been prevented. I will admit that your changes make the story feel smoother now. Like he couldn’t make up his mind which is good for character development, because he’s conflicted with how he feels and what he needs to do.

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Dual System: Ascension of A Nameless Nobody

Fantasy · DelzGB

JadeMonkey

2yr

Replied to DelzGB

I understand the character growth. It seems silly because 2 months is a long time after the first apocalypse events. Most of the bad habits and personality should be tempered and hardened at this period. After all 50% of the worlds population is deceased. Tomorrow can be his last day for all he knows, more strength is good. For example: A civilian takes roughly 2 months to change their morales and mindset. To make a prey into predator. MC is in an even worst situation. He’s thrown into the crucible, he wouldn’t leave something so beneficial. Even if it was given to him. Im sorry for the rant. I will continue reading more.

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Dual System: Ascension of A Nameless Nobody

Fantasy · DelzGB

JadeMonkey

2yr

Commented

Im sorry, this had a good start but now it’s shaky. Hear me out. Apocalypse setting world and knows he’s weak. Refusing a free benefit is a Darwin Award Winner. I’m 50/50 contemplating if i should drop this because that is a BIG mistake. I don’t mind MC making mistakes but this is not a mistake. He let his pride and ego get the best of him. He is given an opportunity and decided against it.

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Dual System: Ascension of A Nameless Nobody

Fantasy · DelzGB

JadeMonkey

2yr

Commented

The sword is on his back, of course he’s going to have trouble. That’s why everyone carries them on the hip. Easy to draw and sheath.

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Dual System: Ascension of A Nameless Nobody

Fantasy · DelzGB

JadeMonkey

2yr

Commented

Press x to doubt. He could’ve done anal.

Ruli shook her head and said, "No."

Gods' Impact Online

Games · NoWoRRyMaN

JadeMonkey

2yr

Commented

Reverse grip has no value. That weeb shit doesn’t work irl. Anyone who’s ever held a knife would know.

Grasping his sword, Realm leaned forward, tilting toward Gray. Meanwhile, Gray shifted the grip of both of his knives into reverse as he too leaned in.

Pause System: Harem In The Apocalypse

Fantasy · Renovator

JadeMonkey

2yr

Commented

So that’s why Biden can’t complete a full sentence properly. He’s been seeing shit huh?

"If the prophecy is true… Then this is only the beginning…" He muttered.

Pause System: Harem In The Apocalypse

Fantasy · Renovator

JadeMonkey

2yr

Commented

Despite writing 4 different Novels and updating. Much thanks for the chapter.

ch 134 [Bonus chapter]Chapter 133- A Mermaid's Body

Gods' Impact Online

Games · NoWoRRyMaN

JadeMonkey

2yr

Commented

That’s how you get a bloody split lip.

But because of the sudden movement, she ended up losing her balance and falling on top of him, her lips slamming down on his.

Re: Evolution Online

Fantasy · Yolohy

JadeMonkey

2yr

Commented

Bread is bad for ducks. At least that’s what I’ve heard/read before.

He charged with incredible fury. He was akin to a duck that had its bread stolen by a hooligan right in front of its face!

MMORPG: Rise of the Peerless Pumpkinmancer

Games · ClasslessAscension

JadeMonkey

2yr

Commented

He didnt get the sword back. Old man just left with it.

ch 122 Everything is fate

Re: Evolution Online

Fantasy · Yolohy

JadeMonkey

2yr

Replied to Chan_Feng

Even with energy shields, its going to drain that energy to stop incoming rounds. Only a matter of time before energy runs out and rounds start passing through.

However, the monster's hides happened to be so thick and their defense so ferocious that most modern weapons simply didn't work against them. Guns were useless against them, but bombs worked. Of course, even that was useless against monsters that were fast enough to outrun an explosion or strong enough to endure one.

Awakened: Evolving to Godhood

Fantasy · Crimson_ink

JadeMonkey

2yr

Commented

Just want you to know bullets go through metal. The right caliber and grain will defeat even concrete barriers. Even if they have magical hides to protect them, blunt force trauma is a real thing. Internal hemorrhage is serious. Rules of physics don’t just stop working. Hit something enough times and it will break. I understand you want to showcase how incredibly strong the enemies are. But you shouldn’t write off guns as if it’s weak. Guns are very powerful kinetic weapons.

However, the monster's hides happened to be so thick and their defense so ferocious that most modern weapons simply didn't work against them. Guns were useless against them, but bombs worked. Of course, even that was useless against monsters that were fast enough to outrun an explosion or strong enough to endure one.