FateBearer
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Pokemon: An Adventure
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In the massive world of Pokemon, a boy with the dream to be a great Pokemon Trainer starts his journey. He will catch many pokemon in his Poke Balls and will make friends with many legendary pokemon on his journey. He will fight various talented Trainers and will stand above them all. Let's follow Saad on his journey to become a great Pokemon Trainer... ....................................... Please Do comment and Vote for the story. If I reach top 100 I would try to add a legendary Pokemon in the Pokeball ........................................
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Shadow1325: Monferno: *Finds a marker or makes some black soot with his flames to draw various silly marks on the fainted Geodude*
Geodude: *Struggles to move or get up but is still out cold*
Monferno: *Backs away to admire his work proudly before nodding to himself in satisfaction*Pokemon: An Adventure · C34
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BloodRaven: its Bronzor not Bronzer. still a good story
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Shadow1325: He should be closing in on Mt. Coronet. The pokemon he could meet (+ their evolutions) and that I would want him to catch on the way or at the destination (along with reasons{R}) are:
1. R- He needs air superiority and scouting with a cool final form=Zubat, Combee (female), Bronzor, Dratini (in the water/lakes around/in the mountain)
2. R-He needs a tank for the team=Larvitar, Geodude, Onyx, Snover (top of the snowy mountain), Machop (maybe?), Barboach (in the water) and Whismer.Pokemon: An Adventure · C28
Shadow1325: He should be closing in on Mt. Coronet. The pokemon he could meet (+ their evolutions) and that I would want him to catch on the way or at the destination (along with reasons{R}) are:
1. R- He needs air superiority and scouting with a cool final form=Zubat, Combee (female), Bronzor, Dratini (in the water/lakes around/in the mountain)
2. R-He needs a tank for the team=Larvitar, Geodude, Onyx, Snover (top of the snowy mountain), Machop (maybe?), Barboach (in the water) and Whismer.Pokemon: An Adventure · C28
Amber0793: Thanx for the update!!! Hey guys,could anyone tell me the list of Saad's total pokemon?? I'd really appreciate it.
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MoonShadowDragon: u could try to teach the feebas pysic and water type moves and then the water he makes for the water type moves he can use pysic and turn it into a big globe of water to swim in and trap his opponent in to battle that way but idk that's what poped into my head thanks for the chapters have a great day or night
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FateBearer: I understand....well, you see I wanted to show in the novel that Trainers are the reasons for weakness of a Pokemon. Like they say there is no useless Pokemon, only useless Trainers. I wanted to show a Pokemon can shine in the hands of a extraordinary trainer and can under perform in hands of non-serious Trainer but i guess i went overboard.
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Inplay: This gym battle is too long. And it's also not interesting, I hope it gets better in the future.
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Moon_represent: I still feel this is wrong...
Can it be that evolved Pokemon never trained before like toterra? It just like baby form win against it older form it just doesn't seem right...
Like baby form of Luxio( I don't remember it name) need to train so hard and have a fight that almost kill him to evolved into Luxio and after that he become strong as hell but toterra the final form of tutwig( I don't remember it name to) that has evolved twice defeated by chimchar that not evolved yet...
I fell like what the hell? Could it be that toterra just eat and sleep until it evolved? Never training that make it weak as heck that it could defeated by a chimchar? It just make I fell something is wrong with this power level cause evolving make Luxio able to one shot electivire( don't know if I it spelled right) but toterra has evolved twice but defeated by not evolved chimchar? Seem legit.
Well I maybe talk too hash because I like grass starter but it is after all my opinion and sorry if my grammar is so bad that it hurt your eye English is not my first language.😅😅Pokemon: An Adventure · C21
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Slycerr: I think if you used Grotle instead of Torterra the fight would be a lot more believable, althought there was nothing wrong with the fight itself. It is good that you used a timeskip of a month to train his Pokemon, but that amount of experience shouldn't be more then someone who has a Torterra as his Pokemon. You covered some flaws that would have been in the story, for example how you heal your Pokemon in a forest, but please keep in mind the stats off a Pokemon when you make a battle scene.
And I don't say that you need to follow the stats of Pokemon, but use them as guidelines for the future.
This is obviously just my opinion, so I'm just giving you it, it is your choice what you do with it.
Anyway I like the story so far :D.Pokemon: An Adventure · C8
lazyleo: This chapter is definitely better than the other one. My only complaint would be that a pokemon trained by a gym leader wouldn't lose its temper just because a stupid monkey taunted it, then again onix is generally a short-tempered pokemon so it can be justified why it lost its temper.
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lazyleo: This chapter is definitely better than the other one. My only complaint would be that a pokemon trained by a gym leader wouldn't lose its temper just because a stupid monkey taunted it, then again onix is generally a short-tempered pokemon so it can be justified why it lost its temper.
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lazyleo: This chapter is definitely better than the other one. My only complaint would be that a pokemon trained by a gym leader wouldn't lose its temper just because a stupid monkey taunted it, then again onix is generally a short-tempered pokemon so it can be justified why it lost its temper.
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