I_am_the_Dao

2yr

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The problem is that they possess huge power and make thousands if not hundredS lf thousand suffers. Same with baba yaga, you cant Grant suh strong powers and not make them Have sense of responsability….

"…and second, I'm not going to apologize because I don't rule over my children like a tyrant. I let them search for their own happiness whereas you turned yours into your private army!" Leegaain snarled.

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Fantasy · Legion20

I_am_the_Dao

2yr

Replied to Raph216

Awakened by lith, priceless armors, priceless lessons, perfect body, and so on. But sure, she gained nothing from it.

"Tista Verhen, a mage who aside from a glorious family name has little of her own. Your involvement will prove to everyone that what a really talented mage needs to shine is an opportunity and not a fancy title."

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Fantasy · Legion20

I_am_the_Dao

2yr

Posted

I read the 100 first chapters. 1) Predictible system (you need 100 xp, mission pop and gives you 100 Directly and so on) 2) long time skip, MC does something then it is justifies as prepared during the Time skip. some of those things are really stretched 3) Insane plotholes (like the Dragon formation that can protect the capital, And no ennemy think of just raiding the countryside and all to make them yield) 4) magic system is juste stated, not developed (and i guess it’s better as theRe would be holes again) 5) Antagonists are all simpleton, as if people that stupid would survive more than 2 years

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Fantasy · KillerHemboy

I_am_the_Dao

2yr

Commented

I mean, they can do 500 push-ups and run 100km at 40km/h.. Seems like even a 7-year old mage could do it lol

All of them were carrying a big backpack. Of course, Kai was carrying the biggest one since he was bringing their tent. Luckily, Kai was stronger than normal people, so he could bring all this stuff easily.

The Magician of Sound

Sci-fi · Fixten

I_am_the_Dao

2yr

Commented

Makes No sense, they need to die to leave thid world, and it id a training for the real outside world. It is useless if it is not challenging and you do not improve..

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The Magician of Sound

Sci-fi · Fixten

I_am_the_Dao

2yr

Commented

Plot hole, to come back in any cases they have to die (from Beasts) Nothing indicates it would be more traumatic..

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The Magician of Sound

Sci-fi · Fixten

I_am_the_Dao

3yr

Commented

I think the people died, but the village stIll exists and is in a fringe. Nothing more meant here

"There's no need to feign ignorance. You know that Werepeople live inside Fringes and I'm no exception. I could go back to my village and bring the others along with me." Nalrond said.

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Fantasy · Legion20

I_am_the_Dao

3yr

Replied to Paper_plane

It teaches magic? 🔥🔥

Right now it was about four o'clock and so he decided to go out and explore the school a bit. He went ahead and grabbed the map that was laying in his chest and looked at it. Other than the dormitories the entire first-grade wing was on the same floor. It was absolutely massive, and when he looked at the part showing the dormitories he realized how truly lucky he was. In total there were about eight-hundred people in class B. These would obviously be split up into groups to learn but the dormitories were all in the same hallway. He got lucky and got the thirteenth room but there were others that were in room eight-hundred. That meant they would have to walk three kilometers in the boring hallway in order to leave the dormitories.

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Fantasy · Belg4r

I_am_the_Dao

3yr

Replied to VoidAutarch

Well he did probably not expect to risk his life chasing a bag robber. + he really did not know his family, so I understand that there is no real sentiments (however the scene was bloody, this should impact him, like PTSD)

She inquired looking incredibly worried. Seeing her like this Villin didn't quite know what to say, the reason he hadn't eaten was that he was too immersed in the books, not because of his pseudo-parents' death. That being said he could hardly contest her now as that would make him seem rather heartless and so he simply nodded before following her to the table.

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Fantasy · Belg4r

I_am_the_Dao

3yr

Commented

That’s really a decision I cant’t understand.. It’s like willingly putting a life collar and her motivations really are not that strong. It kinda feels forced by the author to keep her in the main roaster as someone capable.

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Fantasy · Legion20

I_am_the_Dao

3yr

Replied to Zarivon

No, there weree huge fights and all (remember how even Yurial got bullied). They did not harass lith directoy because he was toO strong and had the Item to report them but not every Commoners in the academy took it (also there was a shortage at first)

Lith and Quylla remembered all too well the daily hazing and badmouthing they had suffered during their academy years. And that was with Linjos doing his best to protect them and with the law by their side.

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Fantasy · Legion20

I_am_the_Dao

3yr

Commented

OKAY GUYS, I just finished reading the novel (chapter 714). I just wanted to warn you that the Author wanted to Drop the novel so he wrote something REALLY bad. It is at the same level than « he woke up and Realized This was just a dream ». I seriously advise you to drop it, not to be disappointed too much.. I’m still shocked at how terrible the ending was.

ch 123 Name

Elite Mages' Academy

Sci-fi · The Final Fool

I_am_the_Dao

3yr

Replied to OnePun

Worst ending someone could possibly write..

Elite Mages' Academy

Sci-fi · The Final Fool

I_am_the_Dao

3yr

Posted

JUST FINISHED READING THE NOVEL, DO NOT WASTE ANY MONEY ON IT. The ending is abrupt and poorly written (same level as « he woke up and realized it was only just a dream). This is such a waste, the story had so much potential and was ruined in a Few chapters..

Elite Mages' Academy

Sci-fi · The Final Fool

I_am_the_Dao

3yr

Commented

Hi everyone, I Finished reading the novel and the ending is aweful (it ends abruptly, no real conclusion). I ADVISE YOU NOT TO SPEND ANY STONE OR MONEY ON IT

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Elite Mages' Academy

Sci-fi · The Final Fool

I_am_the_Dao

3yr

Replied to Lukas_Kmitas

Nah, Quylla was already the top healer student and would have dond weLl. Phloria would probably Have Been decent too as an ernas.

Despite the fact that they were far from being safe, all the Royal Prospector could think about was how to convince the young mage to switch careers. Tlea had studied at one of the six great academies as well, but she only obtained the Warden specialization.

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Fantasy · Legion20

I_am_the_Dao

3yr

Commented

Even though I get that people do not even consider that they could have come from the surface, it is really too far stretched that they did no backgroubd check or are suspicious. Especially considering that: -They have really special features (rainbow hairs, crystalised body) -They are both geniuses -Iem only have about 2% Godly conversion rate more than other geniuses but he can spam spells unlike other divine view realm Please try to consider those kind of Factors when writing the following arcs.

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