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  • Playing God

    Playing God

    Eastern Fantasy

    The time seems to have stopped. With mankind has achieve every great endeavour there is to do. What else can be done? Simple. Create another world and play pranks on the peasants!

Moments

3 stars + 1 star for trying xD View More

Soda_Con: F*ck here I am curious about the comments I get buncha spoilers.well I just have to erase all the spoilers from me mind



Tell me from 1 star to 10 star how I is suck at being sarcastic shortened my writing cause I dont want to write and remember it's too troublesome

The Bullsh*t System
5 months ago
I did put a (Spoiler) warning. You were the one to disregard it, as such you really shouldn't have the right complain. That is like saying "F*ck! This coffee is hot!" after being told that the coffee is hot. View More

Soda_Con: F*ck so much spoiler here I am curious about comments I get bunch of spoilers *sigh* well whatever I'm just ganna have to erase the important parts or intresting part from my memory. And that is almost impossible to do.

The Bullsh*t System
5 months ago
I did put a (Spoiler) warning. You were the one to disregard it, as such you really shouldn't have the right complain. That is like saying "F*ck! This coffee is hot!" after being told that the coffee is hot. View More

Soda_Con: F*ck so much spoiler here I am curious about comments I get bunch of spoilers *sigh* well whatever I'm just ganna have to erase the important parts or intresting part from my memory. And that is almost impossible to do.

The Bullsh*t System
5 months ago

EpiCreatoR: Dear my friend, Mo Wuji. My name is Bai Xiaochun. Call me Sect Uncle Bai. Path to be an Immortal is long and hard, but don't worry. Sect Uncle Bai is here! I will make you to be the longest live immortal. Of course im the longest and you're just number 2.

Immortal Mortal · C1
7 months ago
Thanks brother. I reread this 5 times and I still didn't notice that. View More

Mikuzo: ok, I'm not good with grammar, so don't trust me on this right away, xD, I'll just put these here for checking.

"All there left is to wait."
-"All there is left, is to wait" ?

"the only different is the scar on his face"
-shouldn't it be "difference"?

Also great start!

Playing God · C1
10 months ago
Reading Status: C0
So let me do the traditional "Rate your own novel/translation 5.0" ceremony! Let me just say that this is my first web novel so easy on those fingers. View More
Playing God
10 months ago
Reading Status: C2
Its good but the writing is awkward. Your paragraphs are made up of just one long sentence. I won't go to details as I'm sure others have already. Just try to keep things short and clear. I'm sure you'll get better soon, but until then try to get an editor or someone to read it before posting. For the sake of quality, we can wait. View More
Beast Cultivating System
10 months ago

dox991: Hi everyone this is my first novel, so it might be some errors here and there so just bear with me...

I do read comments, so feel free to share and I will take them into account throughout the novel.

Beast Cultivating System
10 months ago

JabaRune: As someone that reads a lot of translated novels, I'm pretty tolerant towards bad grammar, poorly formatted sentences, weird usages of words and poor writing in general, but reading this novel made me want to scream. It's a shame because I like what's going on in the story and I really want to keep reading, to know what happens next, but I just can't stand how badly written it is.

There is constant redundancy. Transition words and other unnecessary words are everywhere. I guess I'll just give an example. This is from the prologue, which is already better written than the regular chapters:

"Dana always felt like that living such a ****** life was not meant for her and that she wanted something more, something which could make her blood boil. She didn't fulfil her parents wish in going to university getting a law degree and taking over the family's law firm, and it led to her current status as women in her mid-thirties who hasn't developed a serious relationship once in her life.

Although being beautiful has gotten Dana many suitors over the years, as she could never make herself to settle down and start a family as it comes at the sacrifice of her current adventurous lifestyle to cease, which for Dana wasn't something she was willing to accept."

Now look how many fewer words there are while retaining the same meaning and level of detail:

"Her parents wanted her to get a law degree and take over the family's law firm, but such a ****** life wasn't meant for her. She wanted something more, something to make her blood boil. Despite being beautiful and having many suitors, she was never willing to sacrifice her adventurous lifestyle to developed a serious relationship. Even now, in her mid-thirties, she wasn't ready to settle down and have a family."

The worst thing about all of this is that the author's comments (that I've read) are perfectly legible. You're obviously competent enough, so why are you making me sift through garbage to get the story?

I can't comment much on the character, plot and world development because I couldn't make it past chapter 6, but so far they seem fine. I hope the author doesn't give up.

P.S. 'so' and 'therefore' mean the same damn thing. Stop putting both of them right next to each other at the start of a sentence.

Beast Cultivating System
10 months ago
Reading Status: C3
Its okay and it feels new and fresh so i won't say much about the content till I read up to 50 chaps. There is only one thing that throws me off is that the author seems to either hate pronouns or love the name Logan. The name is in every paragraph even when it is not needed and it is already clear to the readers who is taking, doing the action, and being described. View More
Sexual Escapades with the Chad System
10 months ago

AzureWolf: I'm done reading. The beginning was interesting, however, after that the system does nothing much while the novel plays out like any wuxia ego stroking novel. It would have been more interesting if the system you know? threw the MC into BS situations. the only thing that hooked me was the cow part but now its just boring.

I recommend that people who hate repetitive wuxia crap to only read up to the end of the cow part because anything after that is just not original in concept.

The Bullsh*t System
10 months ago
Kinda difficult to after reading through that corny tragic love arc. Brute forcing his way to victory. This is suppose to be a scheming system not a barbaric system. Give me a reason to. I don't mind if it's a spoiler, just something to look forward to. View More

PurplishCherry: Keep reading then haha

Ultimate Scheming System
10 months ago

Scythear: Announcement also need to pay for reading it.Poor service(Webnovel).

Good Luck and be healthy

My Beautiful Commander · C184
10 months ago
This is the shortest chapter I have ever seen. That is of course after removing the info dumps. Total word count 877 View More
The Legendary Mechanic · C63
10 months ago

Levien: Characters are just so bland so bad. They have no personal opinion. Everybody just believes whatever the main char says and accepts everything he does. Story is funny, system is funny, but the characters just throws a wrench at everything you know.
-Protagonist does something unbelievable.
-Everybody is shocked
-Then everybody just accepts or ignore it like nothing

-Protagonist (a 6 year old) makes a corny speech
-Everybody (Even the elders) looks at him as if he were the sun and want to be like him.

-Elder finds out pratag is not in a sect
-Elder:"Will you join our sect?"
-Protag rudely says no
-Elder:"Okay"

-Protagonist flaunts his overpowered cursed weapon
-Everybody is shocked
-Ignores it the rest of the time

-Protag:"The most important rule: Always be cool and cold and answer as indifferently as possible!"
-Protag then proceeds to act like the most arrogant person in the world

The Bullsh*t System
10 months ago

Levien: Finally I know his name. Man is Green is no longer nameless

Daoist Master of Qing Xuan · C26
10 months ago
I swear the chapters are getting shorter by the day. This didn't even reach 1k words. View More
The Legendary Mechanic · C55
10 months ago

DaoistFreddieG: Way to short. It took me 45 seconds to read

The Legendary Mechanic · C55
10 months ago
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The Legendary Mechanic · C55
10 months ago
I actually dont mind the update speed...Unless it goes premium View More
The Legendary Mechanic · C50
11 months ago
See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon View More
My Beautiful Commander · C1
11 months ago

Levien: Comedy that revolves around misunderstandings...... this is a gold mine. Shame about the short chapters but stable updates makes up for it. TAKE MY STONES!

Not A Cultivator
11 months ago

Levien: This is really refreshing. Just when I get tired of all these MC with "Systems" going on a power trip, I see this jewel. The daily life interaction or switching perspective the other readers consider as "filter" is actually a good break between plots and sets up the next one (Except the calligraphy one! The was cancer trying to die).

The Monk That Wanted To Renounce Asceticism
11 months ago

Levien: It was only funny the first 10 chapters. The rest are just bad. Though characters needs a bit of work especially the enemies which is just one person with multiple bodies. The ways I see it this is just a bait and switch. It started off as if it was about deception, comedy, and face slapping but then switch with a ruthless MC on a power trip killing anything on sight. Battle scenes left too much to be desired (Honestly its like he attack, he ded).

Ultimate Scheming System
11 months ago
"There was literally more than two hundred cultivators on the island, yet only five thousand would be able to claim the treasures of the Island while also having the chance to leave the floating the island."
Math, Not even once. View More
The 7 Realms (Book 2) · C0
11 months ago
See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon View More
The Monk That Wanted To Renounce Asceticism · C119
12 months ago
Reading Status: C71
I dont understand. Why and how is this like.... this... it...its .......its so bad and stupid that its actually good. why is this possible ? how is this possible? View More
The Buggiest System v1
1 year ago
Reading Status: C105
This is really refreshing. Just when I get tired of all these MC with "Systems" going on a power trip, I see this jewel. The daily life interaction or switching perspective the other readers consider as "filter" is actually a good break between plots and sets up the next one (Except the calligraphy one! The was cancer trying to die). View More
The Monk That Wanted To Renounce Asceticism
1 year ago

McDroppedAsABaby: AAAAAAA*********W!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Finally a monk mc, always thought they'd be side characters for all eternity.




(Hope it doesn't turn out trash)

The Monk That Wanted To Renounce Asceticism
1 year ago
Reading Status: C39
It was only funny the first 10 chapters. The rest are just bad. Though characters needs a bit of work especially the enemies which is just one person with multiple bodies. The ways I see it this is just a bait and switch. It started off as if it was about deception, comedy, and face slapping but then switch with a ruthless MC on a power trip killing anything on sight. Battle scenes left too much to be desired (Honestly its like he attack, he ded). View More
Ultimate Scheming System
1 year ago
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