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Poolitzer

Poolitzer

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I like to read!

2018-03-07 Joined Germany

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still reading and waiting

Do you guys want me to come back and continue writing this? I'm only asking since I'm not sure if anyone is interested in this story any longer. Do note that I'll switch the POV into the third person POV since it's stupid to write about a blind dude in first person lol, wish I would've thought about that before.

A Blind Man In Twilight

A Blind Man In Twilight

Movies · outsidr

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almost 3 years for a lvl :D

Option: You can grant one item a single option, and depending on the item's history, production method, use, or significance, it would receive a different option. However, it can only receive 1 option, with a 70% chance of failure. Current grade: F, level: 1 (3/1,000) cooldown: 24 hours.]

Marvel-Comics: Overgeared

Marvel-Comics: Overgeared

Anime & Comics · Bulale_Abali

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there sure are alot of novels "written" with the help of AI. if find them hard to read and way to flowery

Upon swinging open the entrance to this clandestine haven, a room unfolded before them. Despite being boarded up, small fissures allowed slivers of light to pierce through the gloom. The atmosphere inside revealed a makeshift dwelling—a discarded mattress doubling as bedding, an aged cooler, wooden crates stacked precariously, a shattered TV, and a box that hinted at hidden treasures. At the room's center lay the base of a metal barrel, charcoal, and white ash within, evoking a semblance of warmth.

Marvel-Comics: Overgeared

Marvel-Comics: Overgeared

Anime & Comics · Bulale_Abali

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plz erase the word "because" and the sentence is good.

[One year old: You grew up living in the countryside. Your father accidentally fell off a cliff because while collecting medicinal herbs. ]

Hogwarts: Start with A Divorce

Hogwarts: Start with A Divorce

Book&Literature · DarkGod07

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i counted 5....

Looking at the ten talents in front of him, Braun was a little hesitant.

Hogwarts: Start with A Divorce

Hogwarts: Start with A Divorce

Book&Literature · DarkGod07

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he contracted it..... cancer be like: here is the contract. Sign it and we can start working on your body.

His name was Chris Addams, an orphan without a father and no mother, in his twenties, contracted leukemia because he had been a painter for a long time and died.

Hogwarts: Start with A Divorce

Hogwarts: Start with A Divorce

Book&Literature · DarkGod07

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red-haired hair.... a family of redheads.

In the end, only a family with red-haired hair and shabby clothes remained.

Hogwarts: Start with A Divorce

Hogwarts: Start with A Divorce

Book&Literature · DarkGod07

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Terrible is the wrong word here. shocked, depressed, sad would be better.

The tall and stout man yelled at his daughter. Then to the terrible Foley with a gloomy face:

Hogwarts: Start with A Divorce

Hogwarts: Start with A Divorce

Book&Literature · DarkGod07

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if no one is speaking, plz use: Even if he became a wizard in the future, he would not achieve much."

At this moment, it has also disappeared because the power generated by Braun's magic outbreak is so low. Even if you become a wizard in the future, you will not achieve much.

Hogwarts: Start with A Divorce

Hogwarts: Start with A Divorce

Book&Literature · DarkGod07

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he and his. or use literal speech.

I was glad that my son was able to have his magic outbreak instead of becoming a squib.

Hogwarts: Start with A Divorce

Hogwarts: Start with A Divorce

Book&Literature · DarkGod07

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makes no sense. "it didnt calm down.... and everyone quickly calmed down"? its like saying: No i hate you.... yes i love you.

A man in a robe couldn't help but laugh. But he quickly covered his mouth. Although the Foley family has begun to decline in momentum now, it is not as strong as it once was. But it's still not something he can provoke. It's just that this time it didn't calm down as he thought, and everyone quickly calmed down.

Hogwarts: Start with A Divorce

Hogwarts: Start with A Divorce

Book&Literature · DarkGod07

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yeah,.... who doesnt know jnin maitekai.... rly
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good idea. go sleep during a meeting.
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