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This book is a little unconventional. and that makes it hard for me to review. Good story? ABSOLUTELY. And as I understand, he has someone working on fixing the broken English of the earlier chapters, which helps a lot. (Was all legible-enough to me when I started) The world building/progression can be lazy at times, with a variety of alternate future dialog flashes for the reader that can be confusing. BUT I feel it's justified by why I DEFINITELY recommend the book; author is pulling it off better than I ever hoped in the long term. The story is coherent, has surprised me, and is original to Azief to my knowledge. The over-arching plot remains above the usage of all the classic pantheons of gods and other obvious references. It all strictly remains the backdrop or a good stepping stone to Azief's story. It's not perfect, especially in the beginning i remember it was hard to decide to keep reading. But it gets better. Azief is written a little awkwardly while trying to make him a strong MC that still has imperfections who actually matures, but it portrays it well enough and sometimes translates into him portraying a real person's infuriating awkwardness very accurately in the story. I love him and all the side characters at this point (chap 968) and I found myself really enjoying the story daily a long time before now. And it's been fun to read so far. cons: Can be long winded sometimes=expensive. I personally like the pacing and find the extra dialog worth it for the most part. side-arcs can get a little boring and sometimes fall into the lazy world building category. However, he has made a surprising amount of these periods relevant in a meaningful way. And otherwise everything is effective at progressing all characters closer to the real meat of the story which has been largely satisfying and unpredictable.
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See this! I just gifted the story: Sword

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Uh-huh? Who'd've guessed it.

I realized then that this guy was definitely hitting on me.

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