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Go check the review comments from Shaq_fu and you can find why Author has decided to temporarily hiatus Dual Cultivation and focus instead on this Prequel.

Honestly, my biggest issue with this novel are two things: 1) The written quality of the English gets very choppy or down right bad in many areas. Sentences don’t flow together and some words are used where they probably meant something else. This is for sure the main reason I had to drop; filling in my own words while trying to read the story almost non-stop is frustrating. Not sure if it is poorly written or bad translating but for sure needs some editing. 2) The love interest character is extremely one dimensional and served herself up on a plate for free, never disagrees or has any sort of opinion or independence, and is honestly a background character… not something one would expect when it’s half of the title of the novel…