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Been dealing with teenage hormones and depression... So can't help but lash out sometimes. But I've been trying to make the story interesting. View More

Fenrire: I find the way you handle

[your own version of the story]

(how in blazes can people simply disregard that? The lack of shame is far too real) to be quite interesting and refreshing, not to mention that your style, though far from perfect, is pleasing to read.
I felt that you have some insecurities, but I would dare say that you are doing a wonderful job, keep at it!

I thank you for this tremendously enjoyable read, dear author.

Harry Potter and the Prince of Slytherin · C86
4 days ago
There wasn't any internet back in my place so 3 chapters... View More
Harry Potter and the Prince of Slytherin · C95
6 days ago

Sheenius: It would be weird for the story to play out 1:1 with so many changes... Other fanfics feel like the MC doesn't make any difference at all and everything stays the same to vanilla hp and it ends the same way as well. No thrilling moment at all in those 'fanfics'.

Harry Potter and the Prince of Slytherin · C92
1 week ago
If you're saying that in reality then for me it would be harder to write and create interactions with more than 7 girls,
If you're being sarcastic then, you do you bruv. View More

DarkSh0: Only 7 members of the harem? Lacks.
It is not necessary that the members of the harem be sins? It will be a shame if someone drops.

Harry Potter and the Prince of Slytherin · C0
1 week ago

Powerhungry: I still think Ryan and Draco are 1 soul divided in 2

Harry Potter and the Prince of Slytherin · C0
1 week ago
The cruel part...is cuz he is a villain. Again, Jealousy is a characteristic, not a full motive, you don't kill someone because you're jealous of them. OF course there is other reason behind it,
I think the whole explanation went over your head or like me who didn't read your comment halfway through you didn't read mine... jeez can't you see that I've clearly written that it will be explained in the future chapter because that is the freakin plot of the story.... If you still don't understand then I have given up. View More

DKstarcraft: My problem still stands, the enemy is jealous and blablabla, but he still has knowledge, wich is enough for plenty of things, draco creating potions wasnt about power, it was about him study hard for years and learning and adventuring in the world of potions. The enemy shouldnt even have a problem in this aspect, in fact, stuff like potions and low requirement spells should be easy for him, and if he can mindcontrol other wizards and talk to dragons, I am sure he could easily build an army, empire or organization, but why hasnt he done so? Why is he so jealous? Is that his only charactaristic besides the pride of thinking of knowing everything? I get that hes jealous of draco as hes like a x10 more xp per kill in an rpg. But he has a x10 more loot compared to draco. All these years in the story, he still hasnt been able to fix his legs? Or at least get wealthy? Uh, this is very suspicious, because he has the knowledge to slowly have everything that draco has and more. Unless draco and him were enemies in their previous lives, I dont see how he can have so much hate for the things that have happened. Many might have not realized, but the things he already did to draco are very cruel.

Harry Potter and the Prince of Slytherin · C0
1 week ago

dhmhtrhs: You dont have to explain yourself being mysterious os a perk.

Harry Potter and the Prince of Slytherin · C0
1 week ago
But he needed something to tug Draco with and make Draco interested in him... as for why would be discussed in later chapters. View More

Dechet: sure you are right it's hard but it's so much more interesting. And if it was to be re made maybe not giving all informations at the begining I mean you introduce someone and tell all on him. You should have diffused the info, maybe explain when they meet(?) would have be more logic.

Harry Potter and the Prince of Slytherin · C0
1 week ago
To the end, well at least for the main plot. View More

Lobster: How far ahead have you planned your story?

Harry Potter and the Prince of Slytherin · C0
1 week ago
Also, the villain thing, it would be weird for a cult to attack Draco out of the blue and make an enemy out of him just because he is good at potions. View More

youngestking: 1) 2) 3) were my major problems, I feel that it wouldn't have been as bad as you think if you had equally powerful evil forces that were hidden. things like reclusive evil wizards in Egypt or a cult of people in Britain or even if there was an overseeing evil organization that's cross country and Draco travels to different continents and makes friends and forms a group like a United Wizard/Witches nation or if he went to explore different kinds of magic or like Arithmancy(I havent seen that alot) But to be honest my major problem wasn't with any of these. Personally I dont have a Patreon/Not in a position to get one and when you were posting chapters on patreon(Which is totally fine) But a super plot turn would come up you already had finished an extra ten chapter!!! I was panicking all in my head like "OH GOD ITS ALREADY GONE TO HELL HASNT IT!?!?!" But still If you think of it as a similar but different universe its not odd to add native powerful forces, like it's no way Voldemort was the strongest wizard in the World, theres no way even Dumbledore was the strongest. I'm not trying to call them frogs in a well but Harry wasn't even that good but he ended up matching Voldemort there are probably hundreds of prodigal or powerful Wizards, ots not all concentrated in England. Plus I personally have a bias against stories with more than one transmigrator

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1 week ago
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tahafury: weird question but what chapter are the patreon users at

Harry Potter and the Prince of Slytherin · C0
1 week ago
there is going to be a cult and a another villain in my story as well but still with Ryan included.
P.S don't get the bias either, like why do you have them? It's not netorare or killing off important characters which would ruin the build-up of a story. View More

youngestking: 1) 2) 3) were my major problems, I feel that it wouldn't have been as bad as you think if you had equally powerful evil forces that were hidden. things like reclusive evil wizards in Egypt or a cult of people in Britain or even if there was an overseeing evil organization that's cross country and Draco travels to different continents and makes friends and forms a group like a United Wizard/Witches nation or if he went to explore different kinds of magic or like Arithmancy(I havent seen that alot) But to be honest my major problem wasn't with any of these. Personally I dont have a Patreon/Not in a position to get one and when you were posting chapters on patreon(Which is totally fine) But a super plot turn would come up you already had finished an extra ten chapter!!! I was panicking all in my head like "OH GOD ITS ALREADY GONE TO HELL HASNT IT!?!?!" But still If you think of it as a similar but different universe its not odd to add native powerful forces, like it's no way Voldemort was the strongest wizard in the World, theres no way even Dumbledore was the strongest. I'm not trying to call them frogs in a well but Harry wasn't even that good but he ended up matching Voldemort there are probably hundreds of prodigal or powerful Wizards, ots not all concentrated in England. Plus I personally have a bias against stories with more than one transmigrator

Harry Potter and the Prince of Slytherin · C0
1 week ago

Sheenius: Such a shame authors have to explain themselves... Especially for such a good novel which doesn't just go with the usual tropes. I feel like some readers here grown to like shallow characters, arrogant young masters' and a even more evil mc which is portrayed as 'good' while raping left and right. Xoxo I hope you still enjoy writing just as we enjoy reading a story with a bit more depth to it, just ignore everything short of fair critic🙈

Harry Potter and the Prince of Slytherin · C0
1 week ago
good idea but used it as a plot already, similar to how Pius was brainwashed to fight him, don't know if he was good at heart though.
And again just leaving a villain because he was brainwashed seems too soft for me, WE NEED TO KILL HIM. View More

Chuel: I think running out is not a good idea. How about a new villain(good at heart) that has been brainwashed by the other worlder too but his brainwashing is slowly being undo then team up with draco

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1 week ago

Alext900: In fact the people of this site, at least a large part of them, can not see beyond (system, harem, cultivation, and Mc OP), the idea of ​​a second transmigrator, more villains besides Krillin, is something that I had the hope you did when I started this fic.
I think you've done a great job, thank you.

Harry Potter and the Prince of Slytherin · C0
1 week ago
lol with the emoji of the wink face, I got it confused sorry about that.
Draco has a power of his owns which would be letter mentioned so additional power like that will be overkill but a very good suggestion though. View More

AdmiralAlcon: It was not my intention to suggest beast***. However i can suggest something like this: Draco can search for some old magic about magical creatures and create for example "Beast contract" which will in turn grant him some of the beast power( dragon fire, etc.).

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1 week ago

Emiriot: Thanks you,I don't speak English but love your history,this remember me a fanfic Chinese what I following long time but prince slitheryn is my favorite you description and desaloptmen character is cool

Harry Potter and the Prince of Slytherin · C0
1 week ago

Baruka: Either you die Hero or you live long enough to become a villain.

Harry Potter and the Prince of Slytherin · C0
1 week ago
I plan them to use them mostly like in fantastic beast nature. I can't find other places to use them other than on fights..
If you're suggesting, beast *** then not gonna happen and as for other uses, you can suggest some if you like. View More

AdmiralAlcon: Do You plan on doing something more with the creatures than just for them to be there and save the day? ;)

Harry Potter and the Prince of Slytherin · C0
1 week ago
that's why the dumb down on character. Knowledge is indeed powerful but you need the power to use better knowledge as well. (Like Ying and Yang) And just because you own a Stephen Hawkings book doesn't make you Stephen Hawking as well. View More

jaliko: All I have to say is knowledge is power in any world, as for introducing a powerful antagonist there is so many wizard countries that we know nothing about in the Harry potter world, besides your antagonist isn't on level of a hard battle it's an impossible quest.

Harry Potter and the Prince of Slytherin · C0
1 week ago
Well coming with a death-note like a story isn't my cup of tea, that takes experience which I don't have. View More

Dechet: damn you are dark''even subtle hints with things like netorare'' it's pretty brutal. And more often than not the story turn better when the author o what he want.
as for the antagonist the would- be problem is it' a bit childish and cliche. he has too many advantage to act as an idiot. and rather than a war of wit it's turn brawn and muscle.

Harry Potter and the Prince of Slytherin · C0
1 week ago

Wyrmarin: Not gonna lie i almost dropped but im glad i didnt as after thinking about it i like this direction more as the plot is no longer entirely generic and the hollow villain cliche does piss me off sometimes

Harry Potter and the Prince of Slytherin · C0
1 week ago
That's the plot question but I have planned 7 from the beginning and as for the arcs there will be only two in this volume, with one following Ryan and the other one completing the plot. View More

Emiriot: Names members harem? XD and number arcs you planning in your history ?please

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1 week ago

xoxoxoxoxo: Nope, I am writing a fan-fiction not a Drama novel. It would be fun and just how people like it to be, with no tragic deaths which would trigger weak people.

Harry Potter and the Prince of Slytherin · C0
1 week ago
Nope, I am writing a fan-fiction not a Drama novel. It would be fun and just how people like it to be, with no tragic deaths which would trigger weak people. View More

AdmiralAlcon: Do you plan to add "Tragic"/"Drama" tag to Your novel?

Harry Potter and the Prince of Slytherin · C0
1 week ago

youngestking: Look man, if it's any consolation, you are a really good writer and all of your interactions are very well written. Your characters are pretty fleshed out and the story is entertaining. Yes, I and a handful of others personally dislike some of the plot turns and twist but at the end of the day I think Its a pretty good story. You have my continued support and if you ever feel a little down just say the word and ask for help, if people really like the story(which many do) they will be giving out Tom's of ideas if you ask cause it be like that. But if you start to feel discouraged JUST REMEMBER THIS KS STILL AN AWESOME FANFIC (Even thought, yet again, I dont like ALL the parts of it)

Harry Potter and the Prince of Slytherin · C91
1 week ago

Im_Sweepy: Thanks. Now we wait for the people who say this story is going downhill to come.

Harry Potter and the Prince of Slytherin · C90
1 week ago
But that would cause more confusion and disturb the build-up and flow of the story. Also, he isn't the main villain I've planned for the whole story to give him too much screen time. Your suggestion is good considering if he was the main villain, as it helps to explain to the readers that he is important, but he isn't. View More

Valen: I think what shocked a lot of readers and made them react badly is that the inclusion of another transmigrator is that there was no lead-up. BAM! Hi I'm another one I have been here for 3 more years than you and have been fking with your life. I think the inclusion of him showing his hand to the reader (and not draco himself) inside of early chapters would help.

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1 week ago
Jealousy wasn't ****** since both of them had a choice and he got the worst end of it.
Its human nature actually, like friends killing each other just for some money, so jealousy is more of a valid reason than it sounds when writing. View More

Lawlyeth: I don't like where you're going with the story but I respect your choices
(as long as he get hermione :) )

If you finish this arc with the MC being stronger than the current bad guy (which look a little too much like the movie unbreakable, and the bad guy reason for for hating the MC is only jealousy.. It's realy boring , what is it xianxia?)
Only because the power of friendship that wasn't included in the bad guy knowledge it will be really sad.

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1 week ago
The villain needs a reason to be a villian and being jealous is his characteristics.
He bragged about his accomplishments because he wanted to show that he was better than Draco, and how stupid Draco had been. View More

Laifon: For me it is not the transmigration plot that is the probleme, it is the letter were you introduce the other guys: it sound like a little kid that is jealous because he choose first but the cookies that he had was bad..... look look i am here, i will destroy your hapiness but it is not my fault you have everything that should have been mine.

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1 week ago
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